sephquartz
09-15-2005, 05:46 PM
Hey there!
I'm new to the board so I'm not sure if this is the right place to post animatics for a 2D experimental short. Everyone here is doing 3d or great illustration work of art that it feels so scary to post an amateur work here :P. Anyway I need criticism, suggestions, comments on this piece of draft animatics that I've done. It's still in draft so its still open for editing and all.. for a week at least until my submission next week :P
Mind you, the animatics are made out of blown up storyboards... and i used a rather small box for my storyboard so it gives undesirably bad drawings when i blown it up :P please bear with it.
My biggest issue is with the audio. I have a hard time looking for suitable audio as well as the music. I had someone to compose the music for me, but he has yet had the time to reedit the song so i cut it in bits and piececs and just merge them in the animatics (my editing sucks here). Some of my friends mentioned the audio doesnt really suit whereas the others think it needs some tweaking but otherwise its good. I feel audio plays a crucial role in shorts so i have to make sure its good....
Anyway heres the link for the animatics. its 34mb in total i hope y'all are on broadband :P
http://s8.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=204AKQQWQQEEK2U7BJ60EQDJ9W
Heres a test of a coloured scene, for testing out production design
http://planet.time.net.my/klcc/namejack/testscene2.mov
And heres the test of the experimental animation style (just keyfrrames no inbetweens)
http://planet.time.net.my/klcc/namejack/testflash.html
Looking forward to any criticism. If its bad, just say its bad, anything goes. If its gonne be a failure, say it. lol. i'm open to anything.
Cheers
Jackson
I'm new to the board so I'm not sure if this is the right place to post animatics for a 2D experimental short. Everyone here is doing 3d or great illustration work of art that it feels so scary to post an amateur work here :P. Anyway I need criticism, suggestions, comments on this piece of draft animatics that I've done. It's still in draft so its still open for editing and all.. for a week at least until my submission next week :P
Mind you, the animatics are made out of blown up storyboards... and i used a rather small box for my storyboard so it gives undesirably bad drawings when i blown it up :P please bear with it.
My biggest issue is with the audio. I have a hard time looking for suitable audio as well as the music. I had someone to compose the music for me, but he has yet had the time to reedit the song so i cut it in bits and piececs and just merge them in the animatics (my editing sucks here). Some of my friends mentioned the audio doesnt really suit whereas the others think it needs some tweaking but otherwise its good. I feel audio plays a crucial role in shorts so i have to make sure its good....
Anyway heres the link for the animatics. its 34mb in total i hope y'all are on broadband :P
http://s8.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=204AKQQWQQEEK2U7BJ60EQDJ9W
Heres a test of a coloured scene, for testing out production design
http://planet.time.net.my/klcc/namejack/testscene2.mov
And heres the test of the experimental animation style (just keyfrrames no inbetweens)
http://planet.time.net.my/klcc/namejack/testflash.html
Looking forward to any criticism. If its bad, just say its bad, anything goes. If its gonne be a failure, say it. lol. i'm open to anything.
Cheers
Jackson