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lowpolygon
11-07-2002, 09:04 AM
this is a mecha I did for my small animation.
please give some advice on what I can improve on
:)
thanks in advance

lowpolygon
11-07-2002, 09:19 AM
so sorry about the previous post, my opera crashed while uploading pic.... could admin please remove it?

Error323
11-07-2002, 09:27 AM
I think this is pretty cool, only the image is a bit dark... perhaps u can give the hunter more light??

:: Error

lowpolygon
11-08-2002, 08:09 AM
thnaks ERROR
:)

yeah..I agree it is a tad too dark.

come on... no more crits? I got 255 views and only one comment?

brianellebracht
11-08-2002, 08:11 AM
Is he rigged for animation?

shoey
11-08-2002, 08:27 AM
can you post a different view, can't really see the detailing of the head.

lowpolygon
11-08-2002, 08:40 AM
brianellebracht :
yes..I have rigged it for animation. as matter of fact I have done
a small animation for it. just that I don't have place to upload the animation .

uglydrew : I will , as soon I get home. I don't have the model with
me here at work.

Michael Chen
11-08-2002, 08:45 AM
Pretty cool man.

Abit more detail on the face, and texture on the mecha would be wik.

I'm looking forward to the animation :buttrock:

LordShaitan
11-08-2002, 09:40 AM
Yeah cant tell much from this so far. looks like you need to increase the # of rays in your gi, got some artifacts going on.

stephen2002
11-08-2002, 01:20 PM
looks very...square. If that is the look you want, than nice job. The render is a bit dark.

You can use my formus to upload an animation up to 15MB.

playmesumch00ns
11-08-2002, 02:44 PM
i like your design a lot, but you can't see it at all. Don't rely on GI to show off your models, it looks pants more often than not

malfunkshun
11-09-2002, 01:19 AM
yeah i agree with everyone, its a bit dark. and since you haven't posted a brightened up picture, I took the liberty of doing it
:p

frye
11-10-2002, 11:23 AM
You over cooked it. Nice robot though, it has kind of a 1980's mech style.

quinox
11-10-2002, 03:35 PM
1) a bit dark
2) "please give some advice on what I can improve on"... how about posting it in WIP then?
3) Nice mecha, but please post some (big) pics of his head for example

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