Spectacular 2D Entry: Anton A. Inshakov

[Euphrosyne]

antTon
Welcome to the game. I am looking forward to see what your concept is. Good luck, and have some fun with it.

[antTON]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1126166544_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1126166544_large.jpg)

Well, this is the first time i'm gonna take part in a compettion, so be lenient please :)

[antTON]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1126248689_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1126248689_large.jpg)

Well, now you may see the base outline of my piece. And I'm gonna tell a little about the idea.
The last events in the India, Egypt and US showed us how fragile is human's illusion of almighty... Day by day, year by year we are building our Colossus, Colossus of Technology. We continue building it no matter what's the cost. A thousands of humans life? Nevermind! The Nature's health? We'll pay! And even the blood of our planet isn't too expensive...
We are stll sure that this Colossus, this technomonster is powerfull, invincible, and undestructible.
But the Nature has it's own vision on our "power"... Just a one single touch, not even attack or strike, just a touch of Nature's powers and the Colossus is ruined....

[antTON]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1126248917_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1126248917_large.jpg)

This is the base of a coloring, a lot still undefined but the overall impression will look like this. :)
If I'll have enough of time to finish it ...

[Hof]

Great concept, dreat execution! I like your work, so clean and so frighten. Good luck to you ;)

[sirBS]

Really Great concept! :thumbsup:
good luck !

[walrus]

The design and concept are very nice so far. Something else in the scene to help establish scale might be helpful: It's unclear whether this is human-sized or a modern Statue of Libery.
Good luck!

-mike

[antTON]

Thanks for good words, guys!
2walrus
You right of course, I'm thinking about the "anchor" objects which may help to show the size of the Colossus, but a lack of time makes the process much longer :)

[antTON]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1126594503_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1126594503_large.jpg)

I've got a lot of work and so I can't spend much time to continue working on my pice :( So the work progresses slowly...

[MichaelZHsee]

whoa~what an idea,ur own version of liberty design~gosh~but i think the mechanical elements on the body could be lessen,it seems alil too cluttered overall.but stil i like the design.:thumbsup:keep it coming~

[fooxoo]

This is one totally original idea :D I like it! Good colour wip. Nice!

[mannix8]

that looks like the robotic version of Liberty

[ihamid]

great idea!and insane detail on those sketches!
good luck and have fun man!

[sirBS]

я бы поправил её левую руку в которой она держит факел , пока она корявенькая...идея действительно класная, но боюсь что некоторым она может не понравиться...

I would correct for its left hand in which it holds a torch, while it a curve...
Idea really excellent, but I am afraid that it can not like the some...

[antTON]

Thanks guys, I'm realy happy that you find my work intresting :)

2 Sergey Banityuk
Ìîæåøü íàìåêíóòü, ãäå èìåííî êîñÿê? ÿ íå âèæó-ãëàç çàìûëèëñÿ, íàâåðíîå :( Ñïàñèá.

[2xbo]

Hi antTON. Looks pretty good. Your concept remember me the first books.... "how to make a crome drawing with brush".
Looks promising.
Keep it up.

xbo :scream:

[Korline]

not much to say, wow, it's cool and original,
go with this mate :bounce:

[LexLe]

Greetings Anton!
Have very much liked both idea and figure :thumbsup:
Success!

[antTON]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1132507369_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8468/8468_1132507369_large.jpg)

I didn't have much time in a last month to continue working in my piece, and actually I've already thought that I shall never finish this pic
Well, here we got a final coloring milestone, it is still needs some more texture details and little tweaks here and there, but the most of work is done! :)))

[rawwad]

Great character! I love his design very much, his face reminds me sentinels from X-men. Keep great working! :thumbsup:

[Atris]

Hi Anton! The very good atmosphere and details! I like your colors! And only one. I think you should do more clear the horizon.
И еще меня немного смущает поза. Верх выглядит статично, a ноги застыли в шаге, в этом есть некоторое несоответствие.
Good luck! :)

[antTON]

rawwad : Thanks a lot! You support is very important for me!
Atris: It is very pleasant to her a such a good comments:bounce:
What do you mean saying more clean horizon? Do you mean the edge between the sky and the ground must be more visible?
ß õîòåë ïîêàçàòü, ýòèì åãî èíåðòíîñòü, íåïîâîðîòëèâîñòü... Íî òû ïðàâ, ïîëó÷èëîñü êàê êîëëàæ: äâå ïîëîâèíêè ðàçíûõ ôèãóð... Ýõõõ, ëàäíî, åñëè óñïåþ-ïîïðîáóþ èñïðàâèü õîòü íåìíîãî. Ïàñèá!

[Atris]

Atris: It is very pleasant to her a such a good comments:bounce:
What do you mean saying more clean horizon? Do you mean the edge between the sky and the ground must be more visible?
ß õîòåë ïîêàçàòü, ýòèì åãî èíåðòíîñòü, íåïîâîðîòëèâîñòü... Íî òû ïðàâ, ïîëó÷èëîñü êàê êîëëàæ: äâå ïîëîâèíêè ðàçíûõ ôèãóð... Ýõõõ, ëàäíî, åñëè óñïåþ-ïîïðîáóþ èñïðàâèü õîòü íåìíîãî. Ïàñèá!

Yes, I do. The the edge between the sky and the ground must be visible!
Я так считаю, потому что у тебя ясный день, и дымка, конечно, возможна, но не такая сильная, поэтому граница между небом и землей должна лучше читаться, и плюс ко всему, это даст больше глубины твоей работе! В этом случае придется нарисовать еще немного земли, но это того стоит!

[antTON]

Atris: Ñïàñèáî çà ñîâåò, îáÿçàòåëüíî ïîïðîáóþ! :thumbsup:

[fia]

Romantic robot?
very sensitive subject..:)

[antTON]

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Well, here it is! It's not Ingeniously but I've got a lot of fun creating my piece. It is first time when I'm taking part in contest and it was very-very spectacular :bounce: I'm not quite satisfied with my pic but I've done all I could and I really-really hope that you'll like my guy...
Now time to remind the story
The last events all over the world related with the disasters of all kind showed us how fragile is human's illusion of almighty... Day by day, year by year we are building our Colossus, Colossus of Technology. We continue building it no matter what's the cost. A thousands of humans life? Nevermind! The Nature's health? We'll pay! And even the life of our planet isn't too expensive...
We are stll sure that this Colossus, this technomonster is powerfull, invincible, and undestructible.
But the Nature has it's own vision on our "power"... Just a one single touch, not even attack or strike, just a touch of Nature's powers and the Colossus is ruined....

[authentic]

Great picture and original concept. Congratulations.

[GonzaloGolpe]

Congrats for finish it,antTON:thumbsup: Good Luckk!!

[1541]

I like the picture and the message, but i think some more details on the planet would've made the image even better, it looks unfinished compared to the colossus.

[antTON]

authentic
Gonzalo Golpe: Thanks guys! The words of suuport you spoke are very imortant to me! Good luck to you too!
1541: Glad you liked the story ;))) About the details... I tried to express the huge size of the colossus so the ground should be very-very far and all the small details will be not visible. That's why only the colossus detailed so much. May be you're right and I should create more details on the ground.... Well, anyway I've already send a work so it to late for me :(((

[LexLe]

Great picture and original concept.:thumbsup:
Very nice idea & color!!!:bounce:
Congratulations.
Excuse for bad English

[maurodelia]

Good work ! And would change some details, bt is a fine work! Congratulations ! And good lck friend !

[Astraz]

First impression was "WOW!", really emotional monster! I don't think thal more details on back was necessary to transmit feelings))

[antTON]

LexLe, thanks a lot dude!
maurodelia Yes, If I start it right now I would like to do itother way, but what's done is done! Thank's a lot! Good luck to you too!

[zpapageo]

Congratulations on finishing a great image, Anton!

[antTON]

Astraz :beer:
zpapageo Thanks! :wavey:

[Astraz]

There is only one thing I wish to know - what height is IT?)))

[Fantast]

Good illumination and not straining background pleases an eye!
Think it`s good, such titans inspire the valid size of meanness of alive organisms!
Excellently! :thumbsup: My congratulations on powerful work, man!

[Nikolay]

Good work... I like design of the character. Good luck)

[antTON]

Astraz
Mr.Grim
Nikolay Thanks fellows!!! Your support is flattering like no one's else!
:beer:

[ozhaver]

The coloring is superb! I really admire the way you did all the vines and techno-details!! Somehow the sky seem still a little bit unfinished. Perhaps the clouds need more shaping up. Can't wait til you finish! :thumbsup:

[Fantast]

And still this product successfully would approach on the poster of any fantastic film!:deal:
I wish successes and victories! :scream:

[antTON]

oz haver Oh.... I'm cofused... Of course I tried to do it as good as i only can but "superb" as you say.... thanks! :rolleyes:
Mr.Grim Hey Dude! Thanks for your support! I would like to supprt you as well but did'nt find your entry :shrug: What's wrong? why you don't take part?

[HamsterFly]

Hi Anton ! Excellent work! Differs from the others. A fine landscape, the sky, clouds!Massiveness of a colossus is felt .....
Also I like your history, it very philosophical....

good luck friend ! :beer:

[antTON]

HamsterFly! Dude! Thanks a lot! I'm flattered very much with the prise of such great artist as you are! :beer: Cheers!

[Slav]

great image but i must say that i think you could of done more with the horizon right now it looks like there is no atmosphere which i think takes awawy from the image. aside that i think it is looking great.

[antTON]

Slav Thanks a lot! Well we have discussed the horizon before with Atris and I've found that making the edge between the sky and the ground more clear is much interesting... But may be I done it clear just too much?

[sirBS]

Anton, good work! The greater form - society and a greater shadow is only not so well visible. You have too taken a great interest in details. I advise a little to generalize the form...

[Slav]

Slav Thanks a lot! Well we have discussed the horizon before with Atris and I've found that making the edge between the sky and the ground more clear is much interesting... But may be I done it clear just too much?


well i personally think it jumps out at you too much. i think you need a difference of tone with distance. something that is not really evident right now. i think it could help you convey realism a bit more but its up to you.

[antTON]

Sergey Banityuk Thank you for good words! I'm affraid you're right... :sad: behind all these details I've lost the main form :cry: Well, what can I say.... I will pay more attention to this aspect in my futher works. At least I'll try.
Slav In other words you think it is clear too much... Hmmmm... I think I was too hurry when have post the final image :argh: I should wait a few days and spent some time to check everything holding in view all of your advices guys.
Thanks one more time fellows. Your critics is VERY important for me. May be next my piece will be a little bit better :arteest:

[LexLe]

Hi buddy! I've come just to wish you a good luck in judgment process!:)

[Atris]

Hi Anton! I really like your work! This's looking much better with clouds and horizon!
But only it seems to me the ground must be slightly lighter close to horizon!

Мне кажется, что земля должна становиться чуть светлее к линии горизонта, и тогда появится эффект воздушной перспективы!

Anyway, that's very good job! Congratulations on your final image! I wish you good luck in the next stage! :)

[Nomad]

Superb work :thumbsup:

Good luck for the final vote :beer:

[antTON]

LexLe Thanks dude! I wish you the same!
Atris Yeah... you're right again. Slav have pointed me to this mistake too, I mean insufficient opacity of the atmosphere. Oh! And BTW I would like to thank you for your privious advise. As you may see I've followed it and the pic looks much better. :beer:
Nomad Thanks neighbour! :wavey: You're exaggarate of course saying "superb" :blush: Thanks a lot for your support! :beer:Good luck you too!!!

[Korline]

that turn out very nice :thumbsup: :applause:
good luck :)

[Fish-KAart]

:thumbsup: Best it has turned out! The excellent ending!:applause: I congratulate and wish victories! It is very glad to that that my compatriots so adequately look here! :buttrock: Success!good lake!

[antTON]

Korline Thanks buddy! Every good word here makes me SO happy!:bounce:
Fish-KAart Oh, I'm really flattered with your words :rolleyes: Your praises are the best reward for me!!!

[HamsterFly]

My congrats Anton ! you finished this great work !:bounce:
good luck and see you in next challenges !

[antTON]

Hommy! Dude! :beer: Thanks! My work may be not as great as yours but we surely will meet in the next challenge!

[beelow]

Best of luck to you dude and see u next contest!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[antTON]

beelow Cool hat man! ;))) Good luck you too! Hope CGTalk crew wouldn't makes us wait for to long with the next challenge!

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