Go Go Girl

[telamon]

excellent style, I love this character. I assume you struggled a lot to rig the ankle and foot.

One or two comments:



the shoulders look too boxy IMHO. You should raise the subdivision level a little bit or add a couple of edge loops to smooth them.
there seem to be and edge loop that does not deform nicely on the left thigh (look this small bump at the top of it).
the shading is a bit weird particularly at the top of the chest. Try to have softer shadows.
the knees bend too sharply IMHO. Perhaps increasing the subdivision should also fix this.
you should bend the left thumb. It looks too straight for me.
Sorry not to be able to post a couple of pics to better illustrate the above comments. I do not have any image editing software on my computer for now ;)

[dtkubina]

Thanks Telamon, all good points heres a few more renders. Actually the fooot and ankle were no trouble at all, the trouble spots were the shoulders and pelvis.:( If i ever get the time ill have to tweak her.

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http://www.colorgraphixprod.com/albums/album09/stand_03low.jpghttp://www.colorgraphixprod.com/albums/album09/stand_02low.jpg

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