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khaleghi
09-06-2005, 09:04 AM
mohammad khaleghi is entered in the "Spectacular Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/spectacular/view_entries.php?challenger=8154)

Latest Update: Final Image: The Big Bugs
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1133711455_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=2879527#post2879527)

aliasali
09-06-2005, 07:51 PM
its good 2 see another iranian dude! movafagh bashi...

khaleghi
09-07-2005, 01:47 PM
Hi every body,:)

I`m so glad for joining this challenge:bounce: , and I hope to learn more and more here from the CG Masters.

specially thanks to Madlight_1988 my Iranian friend.

good luck every one.:thumbsup:

khaleghi
09-07-2005, 04:45 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126111524_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126111524_large.jpg)

I`m gonna use these creatures to make a battle field between two mechanical
beetles,grasshoppers,drgaon-fly and may be bugs armies in so huge size.
I need your help to improve my concept.
thanks a lot.

Micro26
09-07-2005, 05:00 PM
Hi Fredy,
I like robot characters a lot man.Glad to see u use references for the armies.Let the updates comin:thumbsup:

blakbird
09-07-2005, 09:01 PM
Best wishes

ali_3dartist
09-08-2005, 07:20 AM
hi

i will follow
good luck

khaleghi
09-08-2005, 07:33 AM
thank you guys,
I`m working on the concept right now nad very soon I`ll post them here.
I`m surprized to found some more Iranian guys in CGTalk.
thank you for following.

khaleghi
09-09-2005, 07:55 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126252499_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126252499_large.jpg)

This consept shows the two armies against each other and the city at some far away from the batle field.look at the sky and the color of it,there is some thing else in it but it`s not apear yet...

I`m waiting for your comments guys.

ali_3dartist
09-10-2005, 05:41 PM
hi

nice
may be it would be better that the war be in the jungle rather than desert
like vietnam war!
good luck

khaleghi
09-10-2005, 06:51 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126378311_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126378311_large.jpg)

this would be(of course I hope) the last Consept sketch of my work.I mean that the base of my imagine is done now but I`m gonna add too much of details on the ground, mountains, sky and the city in far away from the battle field.this consept just shows the main objects that tell it`s story.
I`m waiting for your comments.
thanks for watching it friends.

khaleghi
09-10-2005, 07:12 PM
thank you Ali your idea is very good but I like to show a flat battle field to give the sence of war to viewers.so the jungle is a close environmet.but I think more about your idea maybe I change my mind.

thank you for attention to my work I need your help.

ali_3dartist
09-11-2005, 08:05 PM
nice mohammad
some crits:
make the horizonal line a bit higher
there is more weight on the left of scene ,make the right mountains a bit larger or put somthing there.

and the other thing that may be sound not good
there are lots off battle field in the challenges
dont you have any idea except the war?

aliasali
09-15-2005, 08:21 PM
come on!!! show us some BIG shots! fellow iranian...shado salamat bashi...

bahman
09-15-2005, 09:40 PM
Nice dude, eivaal!
But what is the spectacular thing in this war?
Keep up.

khaleghi
09-16-2005, 05:55 PM
thank you my friends,

I`m workig on the grass hopper`s modeling now and I`ll post it so soon.

In this war wath is spectacular is that there is a third reinforcment exept the two armies and that is some thing comming from the sky.it wonders the army forces .......

I`m just waiting for your comments guys
I`ll be back soon.

Ramteen
09-16-2005, 07:20 PM
oh yeah . ur concepr is looking good .hope to see more WIP.goodluck ...

khaleghi
09-17-2005, 05:54 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126936469_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126936469_large.jpg)

this is the pre modeling of the mechanical grasshopper.I have to model the feet,wings,and some more details on it but I like to know your Comments about it. thakns for watchin.

khaleghi
09-17-2005, 06:05 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126937102_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1126937102_large.jpg)

And here are some more Images

aliasali
09-17-2005, 10:05 AM
Fredy,this is really cool.go on man.i loved the design of that grasshopper!ur using mAX?.:thumbsup:

khaleghi
09-17-2005, 12:19 PM
thanx madlight,

I`m using Maya in every kind of modeling, and this model is a polygonal one,

alshakno
09-18-2005, 07:00 PM
nice model fredy

need more detail and it will be good
some more edge loops or varios smooth channel will make it more look like robots
good luck

bahman
09-18-2005, 10:48 PM
Good satrting Fredy, Maybe It's better to work on your killing machine.

khaleghi
09-19-2005, 02:21 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127139691_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127139691_large.jpg)

this is the first texture test of the grasshopper,now I`m working on the Legs texture,
your comments are very wellcomed,
thanks for watchin

khaleghi
09-19-2005, 02:27 PM
thank you very much friends,but who can give me an idea to make the grasshopper more exiting?

elnady
09-19-2005, 02:29 PM
Good luck man

Pooyag
09-19-2005, 03:20 PM
hey mohammad....you are doing great,keep it up:thumbsup:
Since it's a Robot grasshopper maybe you should make cold weapon that looks cool...and if you like put some personality,but that's just wierd since it's a robot...that's up to you, do it if you are willing to take the risk
and dont forget the antenna:thumbsup:

khaleghi
09-20-2005, 07:37 AM
thank you very much 3rd user your comment is gonna make my work beter and I`ll do my best to contiune......

I`ll soon post 90% completed of the grasshopper model.
thanks for watching.

khaleghi
09-21-2005, 12:21 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127305264_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127305264_large.jpg)

ok guys,this is the 90% complete of the grasshopper mechanical model.I used maya for modeling and textures are completly by photoshop,
I need your comments to improve my work,
thanks for watching

beelow
09-21-2005, 12:23 PM
I love your mechanical grasshopper good stuff!:thumbsup:

maxspider3000
09-21-2005, 12:54 PM
gr8 modeling mohamed ...

it looks so nice ... I like ur details so much ... :thumbsup:

khaleghi
09-21-2005, 04:46 PM
thank you guys,I`ll post more Images soon.

C&C are welcome

bahman
09-22-2005, 01:07 AM
Very nice, It gets better now.
Good luck!

prophetpandp
09-22-2005, 01:22 AM
Very Nice Modeling. :thumbsup:

can't wait to see more.

khaleghi
09-22-2005, 03:43 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127403802_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127403802_large.jpg)

ok,after modeling the grasshopper It`s time to model the beetle.about the beetle I have to expain that it`s a natural big one that made up of changing some gene of it,it`s the first step of modeling the beetle ,so I need your help and comments to make it.
thanks for watching.

alshakno
09-22-2005, 05:56 PM
nice mohammad
countinue ...

khaleghi
09-22-2005, 09:17 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127423827_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127423827_large.jpg)

the organic beetle is now ready,
I`m waiting for your comments......

khaleghi
09-23-2005, 09:12 AM
nice mohammad
countinue ...
thank you so much alshakno

khaleghi
09-23-2005, 09:14 AM
Very Nice Modeling. :thumbsup:

can't wait to see more.

oh,thank you mate you`re so kind to me P&P

bahman
09-23-2005, 07:17 PM
Very good material You made for the beetle, But I think somthing can be better on model,
I thought that beetle's foots are tiny or too long. Anyway good work. Good luck.

raultabajara
09-23-2005, 07:35 PM
I think that you could make a real batle of insects.
A spectacular battle of two insects in the pot of a "hunting insects children" is a very good concept!

Nice luck!
:)

ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi
09-24-2005, 08:52 AM
Hi. nice modeling.render it with MR?

khaleghi
09-24-2005, 11:58 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127563109_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127563109_large.jpg)

this is the hunting system of the beetle but it has some rochets above its head that I`ll model it in hte next time.
I`m waiting for your comments guys,
thanks for watching.

khaleghi
09-24-2005, 12:05 PM
Very good material You made for the beetle, But I think somthing can be better on model,
I thought that beetle's foots are tiny or too long. Anyway good work. Good luck.

thank you very much my friend I`ll keep your idea in my mind

khaleghi
09-26-2005, 12:19 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127737144_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127737144_large.jpg)

ok guys this is a render test of the beetle-organic.
comment please

khaleghi
09-26-2005, 12:37 PM
Hi. nice modeling.render it with MR?

thank you Ali.yes I used MR for render with GI and FG.

khaleghi
09-26-2005, 12:42 PM
I think that you could make a real batle of insects.
A spectacular battle of two insects in the pot of a "hunting insects children" is a very good concept!

Nice luck!
:)

Thank you very much Raul your Idea about insect children is great man,it really helps me.

aliasali
09-26-2005, 01:17 PM
Hey Mohammad,i loved that beetle! great modelling! Just make it to final!:thumbsup:

maxspider3000
09-26-2005, 03:31 PM
gr8 work Mohammed ... the model looks fantastic ...

i saw ur idea .... nd i think its so cool ..

keep going ... :thumbsup:

Jaba153
09-26-2005, 04:43 PM
great idea and modelling mohamed! keep rockin' this is an original one!!:thumbsup:

Pooyag
09-26-2005, 04:58 PM
great looking fuzz...work more on it:thumbsup:

bahman
09-26-2005, 11:43 PM
U made it nice dude! I think If It's a killing machine It's better to make it Industrial, I thought that It's nuteral becauce of fur on his feets. U can make fur with Industrial designs.
Anyway good work, Good luck!

khaleghi
09-28-2005, 07:29 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127892547_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1127892547_large.jpg)

this is the armed beetle that I`m gonna use in my work hope you like.....

comment please,

khaleghi
09-28-2005, 07:41 AM
thanks a lot friends,I need your help to continue my job,your comments would be my pleasure
and improve my mind.:)

thanks for watching it.:thumbsup:

aliasali
09-28-2005, 08:04 AM
this new model rocks too,howabout texturing those guns and stuff on his back?do u have any preplan for the final composition?how about the "heaviness"of ur models? as far as i got ur concept,it might be really a heavy scene! have u thought of that too?

ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi
09-28-2005, 08:56 AM
Hi fready. nice work. do you want some realy cool refrence. if you want tell me.
comment: you can even add jet engine in back. good luck man :thumbsup:

khaleghi
09-29-2005, 08:10 AM
Madlight_1988:thank you very much for your support,I`m working on the texture of the beetle`s guns and it will complete so soon,about heaviness of the scene, I don`t care about heaviness but I have to say that I`ll post a 3D Environment very soon.(taze chanta robat ham mikham besazam):) :thumbsup:


ali_rahimi_3d: thank you Ali specially for your comment,I`m waiting for the refrences Ali............. :twisted:

khaleghi
09-29-2005, 09:22 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128028944_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128028944_large.jpg)

this is the last Image of 3D beetle,so It looks like a terrible killer machine with more organic style.

aliasali
09-29-2005, 10:26 PM
Hey Mohammad,good updates,i think u havnt catch what i meant by Heaviness! i mean that this models are on hih polygons! ull be meeting some system crashes if u dont care!

i think theeth need much more work to be considered as teeth..but great,just keep goin...

Pooyag
09-30-2005, 08:38 AM
that's cool....i was just wondering how fuzz or kinda hair could come out of a clean, plain and metal looking surface:) maybe u're gonna fix that in post-pro stuff
keep going:thumbsup:

khaleghi
09-30-2005, 09:19 AM
thank you guys your comments are so usefull to me please don`t forget to comment me friends

alfy
09-30-2005, 01:06 PM
Love your concept! Really original. I love beetles XD.. Could have never thought of them like this... I'm really looking forward to seeing how it turns out. I think flying beetles could be cool. Anyway good luck :)

khaleghi
10-01-2005, 08:16 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128154558_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128154558_large.jpg)

this is the begining of environmet modeling,I`m gonna add more details and maybe the placement of the objects will change a little,a city that maybe not similar to today`s cities must add in the left side of the camera angle,
please comment me,

khaleghi
10-01-2005, 08:18 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128154714_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128154714_large.jpg)

this is the begining of environmet modeling,I`m gonna add more details and maybe the placement of the objects will change a little,a city that maybe not similar to today`s cities must add in the left side of the camera angle,
please comment me,

khaleghi
10-01-2005, 08:44 AM
Love your concept! Really original. I love beetles XD.. Could have never thought of them like this... I'm really looking forward to seeing how it turns out. I think flying beetles could be cool. Anyway good luck :)

thank you very much alfy,your idea is good.:)

x3dman
10-01-2005, 08:02 PM
hi dear megadrive "mohammad joon"

i hope you can complete your concept clear and beautiful . i am waiting for viewing your full completed work in this tread .

goodluck man .
movafagh bashi doste man :thumbsup:

khaleghi
10-02-2005, 10:20 AM
hi dear megadrive "mohammad joon"

i hope you can complete your concept clear and beautiful . i am waiting for viewing your full completed work in this tread .

goodluck man .
movafagh bashi doste man :thumbsup:

Yeah,thank you so much Hadi ,you`re kind to me.:)

khaleghi
10-02-2005, 10:29 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128248967_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128248967_large.jpg)

the environmet is updated, but needs much more details.who can give me a good idea about add some details?

Pooyag
10-03-2005, 09:44 PM
nice...you are really doing something!:) keep it up

khaleghi
10-07-2005, 11:34 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128684891_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128684891_large.jpg)

it is first test of GRH_Robot modeling,
this Robot is belongs to the grasshopper`s Army and I have to model it in lowpoly system,but I`m gonna add some more details on it.
please comment.

khaleghi
10-07-2005, 11:45 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128685512_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128685512_large.jpg)

and this is the back view..........

khaleghi
10-07-2005, 08:04 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128715476_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128715476_large.jpg)

The Army test,

khaleghi
10-08-2005, 08:33 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128760419_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128760419_large.jpg)

this is the first texture test of the Robot,I think I have to add some other colors on it,
your comments are very welcome
thanks for watching.

khaleghi
10-08-2005, 02:17 PM
nice...you are really doing something!:) keep it up

thank you very much 3rd user,I`ll be happy to read your comments.:thumbsup:

khaleghi
10-08-2005, 08:09 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128802141_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128802141_large.jpg)

ok,this is the GRH(grass hopper)_Robot that I`m gonna use in my work,

khaleghi
10-09-2005, 09:47 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128851256_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128851256_large.jpg)

ok,the Robot is done.crt please.

aliasali
10-10-2005, 08:59 PM
Hey Fredy! cool updates,maybe it was better to add some more details to this Robot,and proportions are a bit off,if its going to look like a human-robot! cool work,justt keep up the good work,
i forgot to say,textures just rock!

x3dman
10-10-2005, 09:27 PM
hi mohammad ..


very good man .. your job is clean . i like that .

goodluck mate !

khaleghi
10-10-2005, 10:18 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128982685_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1128982685_large.jpg)

I added a gun (flame thrower) to Robot,and I think it is completed now and ready to use in the main scene.but there is still one more character remaining to model that I`ll star to model it tomorrow,
I need your comments to improve my job,
thank you for watching this.

Pooyag
10-11-2005, 10:59 AM
that's very good, Keep it up:thumbsup:

khaleghi
10-11-2005, 05:49 PM
3rd user & x3dman :thank you so much for your support:thumbsup: madlight_1988 : thank you too for your comment I`ll do best to add some more details but I don`t like to add more faces.it is(without the gun) about 2000 faces and I think that is enough for the main scene beacause I want to add a number of these Robotic soldiers to the main scene.any way I agree with you to add some more details.:thumbsup:

alshakno
10-11-2005, 07:52 PM
The modelling is going on nice mohammad
good luck!

khaleghi
10-12-2005, 04:58 PM
The modelling is going on nice mohammad
good luck!

thanks a lot alshakno,your replys give me energy :)

Pooyag
10-12-2005, 08:29 PM
Keep it up:D:thumbsup:

khaleghi
10-16-2005, 03:58 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1129435131_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1129435131_large.jpg)

this is another Robot soldier at first step of modeling.......
c&c are welcome.

khaleghi
10-18-2005, 03:50 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1129607440_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1129607440_large.jpg)

ok, this is the second test of the Env I`m thinking about,the boxes you see over there are the placement of grasshoppers.I know it needs so much more details.sky is just a test too.
comments....?

khaleghi
10-19-2005, 11:19 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1129763975_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1129763975_large.jpg)

Env update......

khaleghi
10-22-2005, 09:29 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1129973341_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1129973341_large.jpg)

update...

khaleghi
10-23-2005, 06:33 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1130049189_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1130049189_large.jpg)

the city is building up....
comments?

khaleghi
10-24-2005, 05:10 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1130173849_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1130173849_large.jpg)

this is the placement of main character I mean big mechanical Grasshopper,but I`m ganna add more details to this placement such az legs effect on ground .....
your comments would help me so much guys.
thanks for watching.

khaleghi
10-28-2005, 09:54 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1130493239_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1130493239_large.jpg)

this is the first lighting test of my work,but there is still more objects I have to add in here,and of course I don`t forget the texture of the ground.
please give me your comments,cause I like to know how it looks.
thank you very much for watching.

khaleghi
10-28-2005, 10:08 PM
hehehehe...lol...Why does it Give u Energy?? lol Real Funny.....
Really sorry,i Couldn't Resist...hahaha:scream: |rotf|

hahaha... but I don`t know what are ya talking about :shrug:

prophetpandp
10-28-2005, 10:56 PM
looking good, looking at your current angle, how many creatures are going to be in the final shot?

Keep going!:bounce:

khaleghi
10-29-2005, 07:18 AM
looking good, looking at your current angle, how many creatures are going to be in the final shot?

Keep going!:bounce:
thank you P&P,I`m gonna add 2 or 3 other creatures in here and maybe some plane falling from the air with crashing,but I have to be fastar than this rate:D

shemosus
10-29-2005, 11:41 AM
i like the idea and modelling , needs more details i think ..best of luck.

khaleghi
10-29-2005, 03:59 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1130601563_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1130601563_large.jpg)

ok,I add a few little robots here.but it needs more.....

khaleghi
10-29-2005, 04:00 PM
i like the idea and modelling , needs more details i think ..best of luck.
thank you shemosus,I aree with you it needs more details,now I`m thinking about it.:thumbsup:

alshakno
10-30-2005, 05:38 PM
i c that is gonna shaped at last!
good luck man

khaleghi
10-30-2005, 07:01 PM
i c that is gonna shaped at last!
good luck man

Yes,you`re right.cause I like to make it step by step with the help of different ideas of people and test what of em can be better than the other but I`ll always stay in my style.:)
thanks for watch my work.

aliasali
11-06-2005, 10:10 AM
:thumbsup:

hey,Nice renders,its been a while u havnt post anything?is a there anyc hance to have u here still?

cya..

khaleghi
11-13-2005, 05:31 PM
heheh,:) thank you madlight but I was a little busy in 2 last weeks.I promise to post new images of my work tonight :thumbsup:
thank`s for watch my work friend:)

khaleghi
11-13-2005, 07:07 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1131912440_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1131912440_large.jpg)

hi every one,this is the last model of the ground hat I finished 2 days ago.

khaleghi
11-13-2005, 07:29 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1131913776_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1131913776_large.jpg)

this is the texturing of ground,but light is not completed yet.
any comments?

khaleghi
11-14-2005, 08:06 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132002393_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132002393_large.jpg)

added some particle to the scene for show the effect of some thing like boiling tar from the earth and some vapors above it.
comment me plz.

khaleghi
11-18-2005, 09:24 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132309455_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132309455_large.jpg)

the placement of the big bugs in the scene.but there are some little robots at the right side of the image fighting with mechanical beetles by some flame.
comments?

khaleghi
11-18-2005, 09:27 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132309672_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132309672_large.jpg)

the lighting.........

aliasali
11-18-2005, 10:27 AM
the lighting is looking really good mohammad,but i dont know what is that stuff in the middle of the image? like crap!

khaleghi
11-18-2005, 05:09 PM
thanks Ali,that stuff u see there is some thing like a tar boiling from the ground as I explained in previus posts.but I know it needs more work to become better.:thumbsup:

khaleghi
11-20-2005, 06:25 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132471555_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132471555_large.jpg)

this is the wire frame of the 85% composing objects together completed of wy work here.

khaleghi
11-20-2005, 06:35 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132472156_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132472156_large.jpg)

A test render of first composing scene.it`s done with mental ray.
your comments would help me a lot.

khaleghi
11-20-2005, 06:46 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132472807_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132472807_large.jpg)

this is the first post effect here,that shiny point in the middle of image must modify a little I think.so it needs more work right now.
thanks for watching guys.

khaleghi
11-21-2005, 02:54 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132588449_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1132588449_large.jpg)

this a render test with some missed objects for saving time in render time,and a little post effect with PS7.
I think this postpro is better than the previus one.
I wanna know your comments about it.

khaleghi
11-28-2005, 02:33 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1133192034_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1133192034_large.jpg)

this is the story:
((in about 1000 year after today when man destroy every human life and environments for living on the earth and the warlike robots take place instead of mankind ,he decide to leave the earth and give it to robots because they have brain,they have ability to think beter than human beings,they have creativity for terminating each other they have the advantage of making BIG wars on earth.those robots can grow up and make themselfs big and biger but earth would have its effect on robots and shape them like its original creatures that one shape of those creatures are BUGS.BUGS in so BIG groups can be more dangerous and they do like a killer machine every where they go thus BIG robots like BUGS that have nuclear power too and guns in every kind of energy gear in war and fight for achieve the power on earth.but there is one question that where human would go after the end of living on earth?))

(sorry for my bad english)
hope you like and enjoy.

Lemog
12-02-2005, 12:54 PM
I've just discover your thread today... and whaouw... I'm falling on a very original idea with lot of imagination.

I saw how you have managed well your project... the result is more that very good, I like it. You can be satisfied by your image, it's really Spectacular...

...where is the following of this film :scream: hahahaha... that really seem to be a part of a holywood superproduction.

Well, now it's done, with your superb image, you are ready for the final judging step, and I wish you good luck Mohammad :thumbsup:

khaleghi
12-03-2005, 08:50 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1133603420_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1133603420_large.jpg)

I hope this is would be the last render and post pro of the whole work.
comments?

khaleghi
12-04-2005, 07:27 AM
I've just discover your thread today... and whaouw... I'm falling on a very original idea with lot of imagination.

I saw how you have managed well your project... the result is more that very good, I like it. You can be satisfied by your image, it's really Spectacular...

...where is the following of this film :scream: hahahaha... that really seem to be a part of a holywood superproduction.

Well, now it's done, with your superb image, you are ready for the final judging step, and I wish you good luck Mohammad :thumbsup:

thank you very much Lemog.it`s my pleasure that you visited my work man :bounce:
hope U be good luck too:thumbsup:

khaleghi
12-04-2005, 02:43 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1133711028_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1133711028_large.jpg)

ok,this is the last compo layers...

khaleghi
12-04-2005, 02:50 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1133711455_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/8154/8154_1133711455_large.jpg)

this is the story again:
((in about 1000 year after today when man destroy every human life and environments for living on the earth and the warlike robots take place instead of mankind ,he decide to leave the earth and give it to robots because they have brain,they have ability to think beter than human beings,they have creativity for terminating each other they have the advantage of making BIG wars on earth.those robots can grow up and make themselfs big and biger but earth would have its effect on robots and shape them like its original creatures that one shape of those creatures are BUGS.BUGS in so BIG groups can be more dangerous and they do like a killer machine every where they go thus BIG robots like BUGS that have nuclear power too and guns in every kind of energy gear in war and fight for achieve the power on earth.but there is one question that where human would go after the end of living on earth?))

it was my first challenge in the world wide and I learned a lot here and found so many friends that they work more better than me.hope U all be good luck.

Lemog
12-05-2005, 05:59 AM
Well... now it's totally finish... CONGRATULATIONS Mohammad... great picture and nice story... without bugs... mmmh... with bugs... :scream: hahahaha...

Good Luck mate :thumbsup:

khaleghi
12-05-2005, 07:15 PM
Well... now it's totally finish... CONGRATULATIONS Mohammad... great picture and nice story... without bugs... mmmh... with bugs... :scream: hahahaha...

Good Luck mate :thumbsup:

Hi Lemog and thanks a lot for your suport man,you`re so kind to me.but my work have nothing to say beside yours:)
I realy love your Final image:love: .cause it teaches me a lot in every part of it.:thumbsup:

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