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Comlock
09-05-2005, 04:43 PM
Arthur Gil Larsen is entered in the "Spectacular Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/spectacular/view_entries.php?challenger=8000)

Latest Update: Coloring WIP: a little change on the composition
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1128609162_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=2713043#post2713043)

NOOB!
09-05-2005, 04:44 PM
Hi bro!!! glad u decided to join

good luckage!!

Comlock
09-05-2005, 04:47 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1125938823_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1125938823_large.jpg)

Heres a rough sketch in sketchbook pro.
Its not even completed. I need to draw more houses (alot) and more people..
It\'s a dragon race, where two people controll each dragon on top of their heads.

NOOB!
09-05-2005, 04:49 PM
looking nice so far man!

Comlock
09-05-2005, 04:51 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1125939081_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1125939081_large.jpg)

a closeup..

umbrellasky
09-05-2005, 05:04 PM
Oh WOW! Looking good! I so want to start sketching ideas but too busy with other stuff.

Great work!!! I think I will be watching this for sure! Nice work good luck!

NOOB!
09-05-2005, 09:03 PM
now that i think about it,maybe u shud try to come up with another creature other than a dragon,i can't tell u how many times sumone has used a dragon for past cg challenges lol.

can't wait for more.

Comlock
09-05-2005, 09:26 PM
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/349/spec19zu.jpg

Yeah, you're right Noob. After I looked around in the threads I noticed that aswell.
especially for the older contest. And I saw many people remove their dragon ideas, and made something completly different.

Im new here. Im just glad I found out about this the first day

NOOB!
09-05-2005, 09:48 PM
heh u got three months,no rush.

I'm sure u'll be honoured here hehe,can't wait to see what else u come up with.

BTW part of the rules is that you have to interact with people,so go comment on others work,make friends.

:D

Llynna
09-05-2005, 09:59 PM
looking good so far Arthur. i just love dragons :). keep it coming, i am really curious how this is goint to turn arounf

Comlock
09-05-2005, 10:07 PM
Thanx Llynna=)

Well. If im going to create a completly new painting, I still want to finnish this one.
I dont have much digital paintings on my homepage anyway.
You can only submit one entry right? (im new. I just came here today)

yeah. Im working on it Noob...

tevih
09-05-2005, 10:08 PM
Lookin' cool!! good luck!! :)

shaddax
09-05-2005, 10:08 PM
Very good start !!! I really like it !! :) good luck

NOOB!
09-05-2005, 10:10 PM
yep,one entry,but as many concepts as u like!

*it may also help if u put a link to this thread in ur sig,that'll make it easier for people to reply to ur thread after u've replied to theirs*

hope that helped.

Comlock
09-05-2005, 10:39 PM
ok, thanx =)

BTW. Quote from rules:
The key theme of this challenge is the portrayal of something that is truly a spectacle - something both extraordinary, but within the realm of possibility. A once in a lifetime event.

So that means no science fiction\fantasy.
So this is deffinatly not for the last entry :hmm:

well well. I need to stat over again then :applause:

Kid-Mesh
09-06-2005, 02:02 AM
Very cool looking thus far, this one could be nice.

MichaelZHsee
09-06-2005, 02:48 AM
a nice start!just keep em coming mate~ideas are infinite~hmm as long as it make sense:)goodluck~;)

umbrellasky
09-06-2005, 08:15 AM
ok, thanx =)

BTW. Quote from rules:
The key theme of this challenge is the portrayal of something that is truly a spectacle - something both extraordinary, but within the realm of possibility. A once in a lifetime event.

So that means no science fiction\fantasy.
So this is deffinatly not for the last entry :hmm:


hmmm I think that you may be able to get away with dragons and creatures such as those it just depends how it is portrayed, if you portray it really well people could believe that it is an even that has happened.

Also I think there are some things that are border line fantasy like mythology and legends.

Keep it going, can't wait to see more from you! :D

NOOB!
09-06-2005, 09:02 AM
nah com,sciene fiction and fantasy is allowed,it just has to be believable,giant orges aren't real but lord of the rings made them believable.

am7
09-06-2005, 02:22 PM
Hepp! kult se enda en norsk p cgtalk, lo meg i hel av den hunde videon du hadde p hjemmesiden din.. digger stilen din.

Your sketch looks good, but I figured i shouldnt comment on it if you'r going in a new direction anyway. I also started with a "dragon rider" for my master and servant entry. But then I thought it was to "over-done" and went in a entirely other direction. I also have plans however to finish the old dragon concept some day.

My best advice right now is that you shoul just paint whatever YOU feel like painting. The end result will become much better and even if it's abit "cliche" or it has been done before, try to push the limits and make another view on the topic you choose. :)

Keep it up! I'll be following you'r thread.

Comlock
09-06-2005, 03:29 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126020564_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126020564_large.jpg)

I canceled the dragon concept for now, and created 3 other sketches instead.
which one do you like the best?

Comlock
09-06-2005, 03:39 PM
Thanx for the advice am7=)
Yeah. I was looking at your "Master and servant". I realy think you should finnish that dragon pic someday. (though I made my dragon rider before I saw yours. That just shows how often that idea is used ^^)

I look forward seeing your entry aswell. Im definatley gonna follow yours aswell

umbrellasky
09-06-2005, 03:40 PM
Cool! I like the second one. some cool ideas there, keep it going!

Comlock
09-06-2005, 03:49 PM
Thanx enialadam=)
I think I like that one the best too.
Ill create a new drawing from that consept sketch then, and add some colours..

NOOB!
09-06-2005, 04:01 PM
yeh the second one looks great!

Comlock
09-07-2005, 03:58 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126108707_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126108707_large.jpg)

I chose the middle consept for now, and started to fill in some basic colour to see where this is going..

electricsketchbook
09-07-2005, 04:03 PM
It is amazing how many people alread have work on the challenge. Best of Luck to you. :thumbsup:

NOOB!
09-07-2005, 05:46 PM
looking excellent com! no crits just yet

umbrellasky
09-07-2005, 06:26 PM
Cool!! This is coming along great! I can't wait to see more progress.

Nice work!

beelow
09-07-2005, 06:35 PM
Cool Idea, I will be checkin in later, holla!:thumbsup:

am7
09-07-2005, 09:44 PM
I like this idea, have you decided if it's the final thing you want to go with?

Anyway, some comments about the composition. As the topic is spectacular of this challenge, I feel that you could try to push the limits abit more here. Instead of doing an overview shot, you might consider placing the camera in a frog-perspective view - showing closeups of the people underneath the ship/waterfall at the bridge. And then you see the ship at the top of the waterfall above them.

You could try to put the camera down on the ground on the bridge, looking up towards the waterfall/ship and at the same time showing the emotion and expression at the peoples faces. (you could even put it behind beneath the bridge, as you could paint people on their way to jump out from the bridge into the water). It's an hard thing to do, do draw perspective at that angle and still get the objects required into the picture in order to tell the story. But I think it could be worth the effort. Anyway, you should tryout different compositions - just keep it loose and block out the main shapes. Try to think of where the camera should be placed in order to achieve the correct mood and effect from you'r image when people look at it. :)

Anyway, keep it up! :thumbsup:

Comlock
09-08-2005, 06:09 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126202965_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126202965_large.jpg)

I got some tips for adjusting the angle, so I did. I also changed the bridge into a "swaying" bridge to get a more dynamic feel into the image.

Is it allright?

umbrellasky
09-08-2005, 06:12 PM
wow! I like this new angle a lot. Nice work! :)

NOOB!
09-08-2005, 06:15 PM
i dunno if u'd understand this,but maybe we shud see more of underneath the ship....ah i can't explain.

but i like this new angle better!!

Comlock
09-08-2005, 06:45 PM
yeah. I know what you mean.
I would have to twist the angles even more, so I can still se the overside of the bridge.
Ill try to make a new one.

Comlock
09-08-2005, 08:20 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126210825_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126210825_large.jpg)

Yet another new angle and concept.
Im combining the ship with 4 winged cratures who are draggin the bridges apart, and pulling the ship down the waterfall..

umbrellasky
09-08-2005, 08:57 PM
I think I prefer the other concept before this one :) I liked the angle and perspective more. :)

Terro
09-08-2005, 09:13 PM
WOOT Comlock, I see your hard at work buddy. I have to agree with Enialadam here and say that you should go with the previous angle. It much more dramatic , kind of creeps up on you.

Comlock
09-08-2005, 09:42 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126215745_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126215745_large.jpg)

I kinda like this one also..
Quick base colours and some stars to bring in some extra mood..

So many consepts now...

Comlock
09-08-2005, 09:43 PM
Thanx=)
yeah, I agree. I like this one better.
There's something strange with the perspective on the last one

oldasold
09-08-2005, 09:44 PM
suspense....great!

NOOB!
09-08-2005, 10:38 PM
:sad: 4 winged creatures where in my idea,damn u stealing my ideas!!!


gggrrrr *kills com*

ColbyBuss
09-09-2005, 02:17 AM
Commie!

Brilliant ideas you come up with! Its hard to believe that you dont do this for a living; anyways I agree with past posts in saying that the 2nd the last one is deff the best choice for your piece.

I also feel that the water under the ship looks a little hard/flat might i dare say. I think there should be more splashing water and ya kno overall chaos underneath it (falling stones/parts of waterfall, deff more splashing, maybe some ppl falling off it???)

Anyways, keep up the Brilliant work man! Your gonna come out on-top, i can feel it!

keko
09-09-2005, 11:08 AM
WOW very spectacular !
I like the last one. Really nice camera angle. It gives a great sense of excitement. Great work! good luck!:thumbsup:

Comlock
09-09-2005, 05:06 PM
Thax all.

And ColbyBuss. I know the water looks flat on the pictures. This is just a sketch, where I place the colours around quickly to see the shape and composistion more clearly.
So all the small fx like smoke,water particles, shadows, highlights, volumetric shadows and falling rocks, are gonna be added later.
Ill paint over everything when Im gonna start painting this picture for real ;)

:thumbsup:

xric7
09-10-2005, 01:48 PM
interesting idea.nice work so far.:thumbsup:
cheers.

Comlock
09-10-2005, 02:55 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126364151_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126364151_large.jpg)

Yet another concept..
Thought I might try a little crazy x-mass theme, since the deadline was in december..

NOOB!
09-10-2005, 02:59 PM
hahah looks excellent man,i like!

Comlock
09-10-2005, 06:35 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126377353_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126377353_large.jpg)

Did some colouring, and painted temporarly motionbluur effects at the end.

NOOB!
09-10-2005, 06:45 PM
u have a rather dull colour pallette for a *christmas scene*

but its too early to say anything,looks like it will be great.

Comlock
09-10-2005, 10:10 PM
yeah. You're right...
I'll paint some more saturated colours then.
thanx =)

Comlock
09-10-2005, 10:13 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126390412_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1126390412_large.jpg)

here are some more colouring.
saturated and repainted the colours more, since the last one was to dull..

NOOB!
09-10-2005, 10:20 PM
looks real cool.

i know its a night scene,but the colour still seems a lil,desaturated.don't be afraid to use sum more saturated tones.

apart from that its looking real excellent!

beelow
09-10-2005, 10:24 PM
try using, super hot colors like electric green, blue, yellow, red, pink, color at it's purest! never hurts to try something, right?:shrug: :rolleyes: You can always fix it!:thumbsup:

Pawlack
09-10-2005, 10:56 PM
Great dynamic:) It's gonna be good :)

Korline
09-11-2005, 03:25 AM
nice job, love those dragons, don't know about the cat, stick with dragons,
very cool, have fun, :applause:

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=275464

walrus
09-11-2005, 06:07 AM
A Christmas Tree Monster? That's so bizarre and original... I love it! And hey, even if you don't win the Challenge, it'll be over in December and you'll have your holiday cards all ready to go! :)

Only comments I would make on it are that the composition feels all pushed towards the left, leaving the right side too empty. What if you flipped the foreground sleigh so that it were on the lower right insead of the left? Also, might be nice to see some more Christmas-tree-like accoutrements on the tree-monster: Some dangly balls, strings of lights, something to push it even further...

Anyhow, hope this one gets developed more. Good luck!

-mike

OmeN2501
09-11-2005, 09:45 AM
I just love the concept! Somone from "movie for kids making" department should steal it from you :P

umbrellasky
09-11-2005, 10:08 AM
Haha! Cool Idea! :D

Comlock
09-11-2005, 10:19 AM
Thanx Noob and Beelow for the colour suggestions. I dont think I would have pushed the colour more towards higher saturations without your comments.

Korline: thanx. I was trying to be more original, so I stopped working on the dragon.
And the cat is supposed to be an evil x-mass tree monster ^^

Walrus: Yeah, youre right. Ill move the sleigh to the right. Thanx for telling me=)
I saw the picture in the mirror, So now I see it aswell

OmeN2501: =) thanx you. Hehe, maby this idea has been made allready, but I havent seen this sort of idea before. It would be realy cool if I was the first one who created the idea for a evil christmass tree though =) (btw, has anyone seen a living christmass tree in a movie\comic or something?)

enialadam: Thanx=) Glad you liked the idea

am7
09-11-2005, 04:36 PM
Haha, cool idea! I like this alot better than the last, you could work some on the composition though I think. Keep it up! :thumbsup:

NinjaA55N
09-24-2005, 09:14 PM
huh, creepy stuff, I like it :) I would just consider a bit about the composition... its too empty on the right side and coz of that not so well balanced. I suggest u to move the creature to the right, and spin it so it goes diagonaly to the left towards the santa. good luck!

Comlock
10-06-2005, 02:32 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1128609162_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/8000/8000_1128609162_large.jpg)

I changed a bit more on the composistion, and made more saturated colours.

am7
10-07-2005, 01:11 PM
I still love this idea! hoho! and the new composition works sligthly better aswell.

I miss the reindeer though, think they could be nice to add more depth into you'r composition - especially if you put them in the foreground. I guess you have considered it aswell, and I think the problem by doing so, would be on how to solve it so the focus stay on santa and his little helpers.

Keep it up!

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