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Zapan
10-08-2005, 03:59 PM
Where's Waldo ? :D

Awesome job here:bounce: , the croud is outstanding and fit soo well with the environment...
:applause: :applause: :applause: nothing to add...

alancamara
10-08-2005, 06:16 PM
Congrats, i liked so much. Great stuff here. I'm impatient to see more :bounce:

Shortricci
10-08-2005, 06:28 PM
This looks very Victorian... Love the style! Keep up the good work. :thumbsup:

gardogg
10-08-2005, 07:16 PM
Vampeta!!! WOW!!! You blow my mind with this crowd! Awesome work. The only thing that I think this lacks is beverage and peanuts/popcorn vendors walking up the stairs yelling and waving things. That would be the icing on the cake in my opinion. Great job man!

DaddyMack
10-08-2005, 07:51 PM
Wow, and wow... and wow...

I can't wait to see this all come together mate:buttrock: Your approach to the core of the crowd scene is great... I think it will really benefit from a 'chaos and clutter' pass though... to mess and randomise them a bit further...

Good luck!

antone-m
10-09-2005, 04:44 AM
1,2,3,........ still counting :bounce:

Lemog
10-09-2005, 07:41 AM
Fanstastic mate... you've just win a part of your personal challenge... 2000 is yet a good number... very symbolic for your great realization... very good result... a real magical step for your project... keep it up Alex :bounce:

gpepper
10-09-2005, 08:56 AM
lots of people...
Clean cool work Alex ! :thumbsup:

aaron111
10-09-2005, 10:37 AM
Interesting mixture of styles. Your concept looks quite futuristic overall but the crowd has an old fashion look going on. Look great so far. The only thing I would suggest is if you could mix the color up a bit more on the crowds clothing. For instance make some of the guys in gray different colors. It would make it look way more random and natural.

edit:

I looked at it more closely and I can see that you do have different combinations of color at least for the suit guys - some have white shirts some have red shirts or lighter or darker suits. But I'm still seeing non random clumps of models with the same texture combinations. It looks like you might be trying to limit your color pallete for artistic reasons, but to really make the crowd look random with the same hand full of models I think you would have to bring in more colors. I have no idea how clear you are going to be depicting the crowd in the final image, so it may not matter of course.

JamesMK
10-09-2005, 10:45 AM
Looks great, Alex!

As pointed out, you'll need to introduce more variation when it comes to the colour of their clothes, but aside from that minor point, it looks really convincing.





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vampeta
10-09-2005, 03:46 PM
@aaron111 & JamesMK :: Thanks a lot! i agree with you also. The colors are indeed choosen to create a very french like look to the final picture. But in any case this was just a test to see how it works... now i can beginn with the finetuning ;) Thanks Friends!

@gpepper :: they are growing by the minute :curious::hmm: ...
UAAAaaaaaaaarg help!... they are taking over my computer :scream::argh:

@Lemog :: Thanks Friend! indeed it was the part of the image that i was most afraid of... because if i worked just with billbord-textures they would properbly not look the desired way :/

@the best :: let me help you... 1998, 1999, 2000! ;)

@DaddyMack :: Thanks Friend!

@gardogg :: Ideed great idea with the popcorn vendors!! Thanks 4 your great feedback!

@Shortricci :: Thanks!

@denverbz :: Also thanks! p.s: stay tuned! ;)

@Zapan :: Wuff wuff... foun him ;) hahaha ... thanks friend!

@nemirc :: Me too ;)

@Necksmasher :: Thansk! you are right with the guy in the gray suite. This was yust a test and they will be some more color variations in the final! Thanks 4 your great feedback!

@coCoKNIght :: Thanks

Chers :beer: Alex

vampeta
10-09-2005, 04:20 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1128874818_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1128874818_large.jpg)

Hi folks,
welcome to my latest conzept changes...

lighting is now a bit more "sepea" style.
i have also changed the Image format to letter-style ( i have alredy enough images in landscape format ;) hahaha and i think it looks a bit more dynamic :)

The cars, trees, and some of the buildings are just dummies and will be replaced with highres versions.

And......yes! Thats the way how Mr. Bronson Coppermine will look like in the end ;)hahaha

Hope you like it!
Cheers Alex

alancamara
10-09-2005, 04:28 PM
no comments, no crits, i'm not have words :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Very gooooooood!!!

eddieellis
10-09-2005, 04:29 PM
wow mate.... now thats spectacular

Zapan
10-09-2005, 04:39 PM
OMG stunning picture , speechless :eek: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
Say hi to the Bronson family :scream:
Cheers Alex :beer:

Oh and btw thx heavens for incredibly nice post on my undead thread . :)

Pjanssen
10-09-2005, 04:54 PM
Hi Alexander,

I really love the work you're displaying here, I think it's one of the top notch threads here in the Spectacular Challenge.
I'd suggest altering your current composition a bit though. In the original concept, the 'car' positioning was a bit more dynamic. Now the car is coming straight at the camera and is almost fully framed, in the previous one it buzzes past the cam. I personally like the original concept better when it comes to the cars.

Keep up the great work!

suk-grigorij
10-09-2005, 04:56 PM
Yap, that is truly spectacular pic. not sure about originality of idea, but still... COOL!:thumbsup:

gpepper
10-09-2005, 05:57 PM
mouahahah !

Micro26
10-09-2005, 06:49 PM
Nice work and the last layout looks excellent.Another great piece is made here.
Keep up the good work.:thumbsup:

DaddyMack
10-09-2005, 08:30 PM
umm.. :cry::cry::cry:

Yep that about says it...

WesleyTack
10-09-2005, 10:51 PM
what they said :thumbsup:

ihamid
10-09-2005, 10:56 PM
yess Alex thats really it! like the sepea lighting style there!:thumbsup: hmmm but the front racer kinds distracts me from the back explosion ! but still looking superb!
cheers mate!

Lemog
10-10-2005, 05:42 AM
And now, for sure, this project comes really spectacular... I'm just crying... :cry: very good idea, very good subject, very good composition, very good modeling, very good texturing and so.... just the good recipe for victory :thumbsup: congratulations Alex... :arteest:

melkao
10-10-2005, 04:29 PM
hey Preuss....nice work, progress and concept......:scream:

Wytze
10-11-2005, 12:35 PM
Wow i want to see the race looks cool.

my challenge entry (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?threadid=283168)

gu
10-11-2005, 01:06 PM
cool style you gave to that scene. I like the sepia coloring, and the "fire in the hall" seems so dynamic! keep it up because youre doing fine man!

p.s: is it sectacular or spectacular?! theres a P reamaining on that word:)

cya

gus

vampeta
10-11-2005, 05:24 PM
@Gus_clifton :: Thanks! and oh my god you are right... dam spelling ;) haha

@Wytze :: Thanks!

@melkao :: Dito!

@Lemog :: just the good recipe for victory... Nea! not this time. I think James is going to play with a BOXX after x-mas :scream: hahaha. Im still happy if i can finish another piece 4 my portfolio... and of course 4 my new appartement ;)
Thanks Friend you are just to great!! (im just strilling in your footsteps :scream: ;) hahaha!

@yunisirees :: Big thanks! the front racers are just dummies... they will be exchanged with this little baby!

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1126716624_medium.jpg


@simon.wt :: Dito!

@DaddyMack :: :eek: :curious: :scream: hahaha

@Mr Micro26 :. also Thanks!

@gpepper :: hihi!

@suk-grigorij :: Big thanks!

@Pjanssen :: Thats a funny thing! i read your post and watched again my first concept over and over... you are absolut right. I think i was more and more going to a funny picture.... hmm... maybe i can find a great way between this! Thanks Friend!

@Zapan :: :blush: Thanks!

@eddieellis:: also thanks!

@denverbz :: Big thanks also!

And a BIG BIG thanks 4 everyone in this thread! you are realy keeping me alive!

See ya

darkjedi1929
10-11-2005, 05:33 PM
Amamzing stuff man...keep it up

flaeticia
10-11-2005, 08:47 PM
Excellent the Grand Prix, and especially well made !
Bravo !

:applause:

melkao
10-11-2005, 08:56 PM
wow preuss thats a great car model....really good work:thumbsup:

gpepper
10-11-2005, 08:57 PM
Great design of the ship !
It reminds me some old race car of the early 20th century !

banzato
10-11-2005, 08:59 PM
Nice camera, good design. :thumbsup:

ihamid
10-11-2005, 09:00 PM
hei alex i did see that one before hehe :) ...thought this one was a new addition
cheers mate!

vampeta
10-11-2005, 09:19 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129065569_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129065569_large.jpg)

counting some of my polygons =D hahaha
(the crowd is not in this scene )

just thought you would like it ;)

Cheers Friends!

danielkenobi
10-11-2005, 10:06 PM
OMG Your computer should be very slow now Great image, Pretty spectacular.

alancamara
10-11-2005, 10:44 PM
816p59. For the box, hmmmm. Great work dude:

Lemog
10-12-2005, 05:26 AM
and of course 4 my new appartement ;)
hahahahahaha... you too :cool:

Would ask James to lend me his machine during the holidays (when I think to my old PC :banghead: :cry: hahahahaha)...

Finally... your polycount is very sweet man... but where are all the little guys ? :p

WildWire
10-12-2005, 08:58 AM
Hi Alexander,

Nice racing concept, hope you can cast enough audience volunteers.

Ralf Stumpf

antone-m
10-12-2005, 03:24 PM
Originally Posted by vampeta
(the crowd is not in this scene )
lol :eek:

BobbEr
10-12-2005, 04:30 PM
Great skills!!! Keep it up!

DaddyMack
10-12-2005, 08:51 PM
(looks at polycount) hee hee :D Looking like loads of fun... i bet your machine just can't wait for all those humans:rolleyes: to enter the scene.... Good luck Vampeta!!

vampeta
10-12-2005, 10:16 PM
@DaddyMack :: Thanks Dude!

@BobbEr :: Dito!

@the best :: :banghead:;)

@WildWire :: Hey Partner! nice to see you in here! good luck with your 2D entry!

@Lemog :: but where are all the little guys ? :p... They are waiting 4 the tickets ;):scream: ha ha ha

@denverbz :: Thanks!

@danielkenobi :: OHHHH yes!! ;) Thanks!

ChristianHammer
10-12-2005, 10:21 PM
Stylin!

Looking very nice... Maybe you have already expressed how this will occur but in what way will you help express the motion occuring in this image. Are you going to use some kind of motion blur? The reason I ask is the racer in the forground is very static... Other than that you are doing great!

vampeta
10-12-2005, 10:22 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129155776_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129155776_large.jpg)

Hi Folks,

I was thinking of the most spectacular drink in the 19ths centuy....

Here is something 4 the comercial signs on the right side of the track.

Hope you like it....
& tahnks 4 your Awesome Feeedback

See ya

makaron
10-12-2005, 10:35 PM
perfect sign for your spectacular action :bounce:

nemirc
10-13-2005, 03:35 AM
We are the children of the revolution!!! :bounce:

Lemog
10-13-2005, 04:18 AM
That could have been the angel which I needed :) superber drawing Alex :thumbsup:

I love the mixed design of your panel... very very good idea :bounce:

gpepper
10-13-2005, 05:52 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129155776_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129155776_large.jpg)

Hi Folks,

I was thinking of the most spectacular drink in the 19ths centuy....

Here is something 4 the comercial signs on the right side of the track.

Hope you like it....
& tahnks 4 your Awesome Feeedback

See ya

Excellent stuff ! She reminds me the fairy in "Moulin Rouge" !

MacAndre
10-13-2005, 06:44 AM
i like you comercial sign. it is like the most elements of your scene. they look like "jugend stil" elements. great hole concept... :applause:

ThierryS
10-13-2005, 08:09 AM
Cool work you're doing, absolutely spectacular! :thumbsup: :)

All my best for the next updates mate:beer: will be watching your thread in the future

claudiojordao
10-13-2005, 10:41 AM
My God, Vampeta... you're insane... I just love your Bronson clones.

How amazing my friend!

DimitrisLiatsos
10-13-2005, 12:04 PM
Love the sign design...and the hammer. Very sweet work :thumbsup:.

CryingHorn
10-13-2005, 01:54 PM
Hey man nice progress so far, I like your style on this image, I also liked the arena full of people, best of luck to you man!

Pjanssen
10-13-2005, 01:57 PM
No wonder they all crash when they drank Absynth :p

Zapan
10-13-2005, 07:18 PM
Awesome ad sign Alex , the design is way cool.:eek: :thumbsup:

Keep on rocking, want to see more :bounce:

JensDenker
10-14-2005, 01:00 PM
great progress and style alex.

gu
10-14-2005, 01:45 PM
cooool! I like this advertising! Your work reminds me some art nouveau elements, with all these details and types youare using. Wonderful!

best,
Gus

vampeta
10-14-2005, 05:10 PM
@ Gus_clifton ::Thanks a lot!

@ Jed D :: Dito! und viele Gre ;)

@Zapan :: Thanks :buttrock:

@Pjanssen :: All these colors and forms...:argh:. hicks! cheers :beer:

@Crying Horn :: Thank you!

@claudio_jordao :: They have totaly taken over control ;) ... aaarg Thanks Friend!

@thierry2005 :: Dito!

@mac_andre :: Hi Friend! thanks a lot 4 your feedback (Its a bit differnt like Captain Future :scream:haha)

@gpepper :: WE ARE THE CHILDREN OF THE REVOLUTION!

@Lemog :: To bad, she is just 2D! hmm how about a lttle green fairy in your library ;)

@nemirc :: The greatest thing... you ever learn... is just to love... and be loved in return:love:...

@makaron :: Thanks Friend!

See ya all on the next update!
Cheers :beer: friends

vampeta
10-14-2005, 05:14 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129310083_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129310083_large.jpg)

only a small update today...

See ya!

WesleyTack
10-14-2005, 05:21 PM
I love it !

alancamara
10-14-2005, 05:30 PM
Great concept. i liked so much. :applause:

gardogg
10-14-2005, 06:35 PM
No crits. Marvelous work as usual!

BobbEr
10-14-2005, 06:59 PM
I like textures very much!!! And your style is very intresting!!!

authentic
10-14-2005, 07:28 PM
Very nice commercials and design. great work.

makaron
10-14-2005, 07:42 PM
well done :applause:
cant you lend me that your beautiful fariy, please...:bounce: it looks so much better than the one Im struggling with right now... :hmm:

eddieellis
10-14-2005, 07:54 PM
hye man, great work so far..... being this a futuristic race it would cool if you did some holographic bill boards like in Back to the Future 2...


Just a thought

Lemog
10-17-2005, 06:05 AM
it looks so much better than the one Im struggling with right now... :hmm:

Hahahahaha... don't think that girl... and work on her :thumbsup:


Alex... your art for this challenge is for me a particulary great pleasure... a real style for Lemog... :scream: hahahahaha ...absynth power :thumbsup:

vampeta
10-17-2005, 07:08 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129532915_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129532915_large.jpg)

I started modeling work on the paladin 4 the roof-top of the arena.

hope you like it!
Cheers Alex

daWinky
10-17-2005, 07:52 AM
Hi Alex,

to my shame I have to admit that I haven't looked in here for a while - but now I took the time to work through your whole exploding thread. And I'm thrilled what you made of your "car-crash" concept:eek: . Outstanding work not only on the car design and character modeling - I really love your environment:thumbsup: ! I think it looks already spectacular!! So I will watch this now eagerly...By the way, nice paladin...:)

viel Glck brauchst Du ja offensichtlich nicht:D , also viele Grsse ins schne Dsseldorf aus Erkelenz :beer:

-sabrina

Zapan
10-17-2005, 08:02 AM
Great Paladin Alex, no crit from me,

I can see why runners try to finish the race as soon as possible:D :scream:
Keep it up friend , what's next :bounce: :bounce:

ihamid
10-17-2005, 08:25 AM
hiya Alex! ... nice modeling there! nothing to crit as usual :D ! and a cool advertisment btw :bounce::bounce:!
cheers!

Lemog
10-17-2005, 08:37 AM
yep yep yep !!! another angel here... certainly the angel of the race :thumbsup: very iconic... maybe the top of the head is a bit flat... but at the final scale... certainly not visible... then, just continue Alex :)

monsitj
10-17-2005, 02:17 PM
Hi ! friend! sexy angle!
I'm just come back to work , and see your work is very great improve! very nice detail! I know your secret weapon is mechanic design ! heheh show us your ship racer!!!
good job as always!

nemirc
10-17-2005, 06:23 PM
I think she has too wide hips, don't you think? ;)

vampeta
10-18-2005, 07:58 AM
@nemirc :: dont you like women with wide hips ;) :twisted::Dhahaha... i know you are right! thanks friend. P.s: she has also very large br... :twisted:

@monsitj :: Is in progress... still in progress... Thanks Friend! and nice to see that you are back in the race ;)

@Lemog :: Yep... another Angel but she is a iron one :Dhaha! Thanks Friend!

@yunisirees :: Thanks Friend!

@Zapan :: Yes they all want this great trophy :twisted: hi hi... Thanks Friend!

@daWinky :: Hi, nice to see you in here too :bounce: Thanks 4 your great Feedback! (p.s: kannkst mich ja mal im Louisiana besuchen, dort kellner ich samstags abends immer ;) )

Cheers :beer: Alex

nemirc
10-18-2005, 02:48 PM
@nemirc :: dont you like women with wide hips ;) :twisted::Dhahaha... i know you are right! thanks friend. P.s: she has also very large br... :twisted:


But I have no complains about the breasts ;)

vampeta
10-19-2005, 09:28 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129757325_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129757325_large.jpg)

Hi Folks,

I went back to the racers... Here is a small update on some cockpit parts.

Sorry 4 the spare updates in the last days ... ife got a lot of other.. (not CG) work to do :(

P.s: thanks 4 your great feedback Friends... See ya on the next update!
Cheers Alex

YasushAzush
10-19-2005, 09:44 PM
nice render ..... see yeahaaaa:thumbsup:

antone-m
10-20-2005, 04:44 AM
coool car keep it up :thumbsup:

daWinky
10-20-2005, 05:51 AM
Wow, this looks great, very stylish...!:thumbsup:

-sabrina

Micro26
10-20-2005, 06:55 AM
I like this racing look you have there. It already seems to be so aerodynamic,excellent design man.:thumbsup:

Tris3d
10-20-2005, 07:41 AM
Wow! this is amazing work! :bowdown:

tuck
10-20-2005, 11:33 AM
WoW!

Very cool design and rendering. I think it is going to be wonderful when you are complete.:thumbsup:

vampeta
10-20-2005, 02:05 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129817150_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129817150_large.jpg)

Here are some wires from the cockpit

See ya

rankstein
10-20-2005, 02:16 PM
ahoy,I discovered your work now and must say its *?()&=great,Love fast stuff,reminds me on powerdrone game but this is a whole lot deeper...will be spectacular for real :)
luck and nice day!! :thumbsup::buttrock:

Neeno
10-20-2005, 02:18 PM
hey vampeta your models are looking pretty sweet my friend.. all the best.. :thumbsup:

Zapan
10-20-2005, 04:43 PM
Hoho , wait a sec , I need to put down these pics in my " How to make a kick ass race ship" folder... ok done :thumbsup: Now you can keep posting... :scream:


:bounce: :bounce:

melkao
10-20-2005, 05:13 PM
yeah thats what i talking about...now i can see the progress....Good work:thumbsup:

ihamid
10-20-2005, 10:13 PM
hiya Alex ... cool updates man! comfee seat there hehe! :D ... just go on man ur doing it!!
cheers my friend!

jfelrod1960
10-20-2005, 11:10 PM
Alex your vehicle designs are always, always excellent! I belive it's your best talent. IMHO of course! :)

vampeta
10-21-2005, 06:49 AM
@ jfelrod1960 :: Thanks Friend!

@ yunisirees :: Yea its leather ;)... Dito my Friend!

@ melkao :: Thanks Partner!

@ Zapan :: :surprised:D:scream:hahaha!

@ Neeno :: Dito!

@ rankstein :: Thank you! my first idea was something like wipeout... but there are already enough images with this hyperfuturistic style. Hope i can do something different :shrug: Cheers!

@tuck :: Hey welcome to this party! What an honour to see you in here. You are one of my great paragons in technical design! Thanks Friend!

@Tris3d :: Thanks!

@Mr Micro26 :: Dito

@Sabrina :: Thanks! Danke fr dein tolles Feedback.. besuch mich mal ffter ;) ha ha ha Cheers!

@the best:: Thanks!

@visualact.com :: Thank You!

Hope i dont forget someone ;)
Stay tuned... Cheers :beer: Alex

vampeta
10-21-2005, 06:57 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129877818_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129877818_large.jpg)

Hi folks,

i just refined some bodyparts on the cockpit.

See ya on the next update
Cheers Alex

Lemog
10-21-2005, 07:06 AM
Hahahaha... refined :surprised :blush: :drool: :beer: do you really think that's necessary ? :scream:

Nice rivets behind the seat... :argh: hahaha... just beautiful design Alex :thumbsup:

dannyfalch
10-21-2005, 08:34 AM
uuuuh,. thata a very smooth design on the racer:thumbsup:

very nice shapes and lines, good mix between old racers and sci fi.

alexichabane
10-21-2005, 12:25 PM
Amazing thread! I was viewing all of your posts and I'm amazed at the volume and quitly of your work so far. I love the futuristic art deco styling of your designs, and the crowd scene looks awesome. Keep up the good stuff. Alexi.

vampeta
10-21-2005, 07:55 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129924544_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129924544_large.jpg)

Ha Ha... The Engines :)) (WIP)

Cheers Friends

N_krypsh_N
10-21-2005, 11:34 PM
great job vampetta:thumbsup: (dosn't look like wip to me:rolleyes: )

WesleyTack
10-22-2005, 12:00 AM
you make it all look so sexy !
very nice work, i'm in awe

nemirc
10-22-2005, 04:50 AM
Are you going to add guys with flags ala starwars episode 1 as well? :beer:


Just kidding ;)


Is that grid geometry or transmap? How long did it take you to do it? O_o

antone-m
10-22-2005, 06:17 AM
what a cool engine :scream:

vampeta
10-22-2005, 11:42 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129981356_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1129981356_large.jpg)

so... modeling on the engine is finished.

Im not sure if anywone will see this engine ever in the final image... but i will try to make this racer as realistic as possible... although this kind of engine will properbly not make any sense :) hahaha

Its all science fiction ;)

JamesMK
10-22-2005, 11:48 AM
Science fiction or not - still a very cool looking engine!




.

lilCara
10-22-2005, 10:33 PM
Looks like a V6 jet engine ;) never heard of any but this one looks really cool :) Great modeling, as always.

DaddyMack
10-23-2005, 11:28 AM
:cry: Somebody is getting serious...

Looking exceptional Vampeta:buttrock:

vampeta
10-23-2005, 05:45 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130089513_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130089513_large.jpg)

Jep.. just some more bottles of "Fosters" ;) and some more details on the racer.

Finishing level now at 90%...

See Ya Friends

gpepper
10-23-2005, 05:49 PM
Great great great ! I love this design !
thanks for these "superb" pictures ! :thumbsup: :bounce:

YasushAzush
10-23-2005, 10:21 PM
nice design ...... fantastic ...... speedy car :bounce:

Lemog
10-24-2005, 03:29 AM
Hahahahaha... very good design for this engine... I love that... :thumbsup: you know, it's not really important if it will not visible in the final pic... now, we know it exist... we saw it... it's the most important, not ? you have fun do create that, and we have fun to discover it... it's good for me :applause:

melkao
10-24-2005, 03:41 AM
wow amazing work:twisted:

Zapan
10-24-2005, 07:06 AM
Awesome Alex :eek: , every details look incredible, even those we don't see :twisted: :scream:

Plus the design is soooo cool :applause:

MAESTRO !!:bowdown:

ActionHank
10-24-2005, 07:54 AM
Wow, Alexander, this is one actonishingly visually strong vechile! It looks absolutely capable of reaching insane speeds, and looks in the same time futuristic and yet gaining retro look and feeling of mille miglia cars from 1930's (which are absolutely fascinating)... Great work, makes us speed fanatics happy just to look at it!:) Furthermore, correct me if I,m mistaken, white is traditional german racing colour, and it perfectly fits this baby...
Cheers! :beer: Ivan

SweD
10-24-2005, 08:27 AM
really love your render quality and details level on the visible part of the engine. :eek:

daWinky
10-24-2005, 08:48 AM
Stunning details on the engine and great design of the racer:eek: . Really beautiful...Congrats!:applause:

-sabrina

MacAndre
10-24-2005, 10:02 AM
yes, the technical modeling is your game. no critics, just good work. :applause:

SONIC-X
10-24-2005, 10:12 AM
Your vehicle model is great.Very nice mix of Lotus 7 and Pod Racer.Nice details aswell.

theuni
10-24-2005, 01:02 PM
Hi Pal,

greate work you show us here :thumbsup: Reminds me a bit of the good old arcade game F-zero. Keep it up... :)

gardogg
10-24-2005, 02:12 PM
Very cool car! No crits...

fgcity
10-24-2005, 03:16 PM
That's a very impressive looking machine. Like the idea allot. Always is a pleasure to visit this post.

perko
10-24-2005, 03:24 PM
i was just wondering why would somebody spend time on something that will be out of sight instead of perfecting whats visible... the engine for instance

vampeta
10-25-2005, 07:10 AM
@perko :: Hi Perko, thats very easy to say... if you like your work like the most of the people in here then you have no problem to spend some time on soemthing that would propebly no one will ever see... otherwise.... if i ever would like to do an animation with my racer i dont have to send some time on modeling again (you know the hidden parts ;)

@fgcity :: Thanks

@gardogg :: Dito

@theuni :: Hi Friend, i read your privat message :) sorry im a bit under horrible time stress at the moment... but i will find some time... (promised ;) Thanks 4 feedback Friend!

@ SONIC-X :: Thanks!

@ mac_andre :: Thanks Partner!
@daWinky:: Hi Sabrina! Thanks 4 your visit and 4 your kind words :bounce:

@SweD :: Thansk (Danke Partner)

@ActionHank :: Great Feedback Friend! Thank you a lot! The final paint of the car will look a bit more metallic...

Example:
http://lexikon.eventax.de/media/1/13/silberpfeil-w25_1934_rueckansicht.jpg

@Zapan :: Thanks Friend!
@melkao :: Dito!
@Lemog :: :scream::beer::buttrock: Yes! and it makes things a lot easyer if want to do another image in some different perspective... maybe from behind ;) Thanks Friend!

@visualact.com :: Dito!
@gpepper ::Thanks Friend!

See ya Friends... stay tuned :D

vampeta
10-25-2005, 07:17 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130224675_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130224675_large.jpg)

Hi There,

Just playing arround a bit.

See ya Friends and thanks 4 your massive Feedback!

lilCara
10-25-2005, 08:04 AM
Ooh great looking fire :thumbsup:

Lemog
10-25-2005, 08:19 AM
Spectacular fire... that works well... with that kind of fire, reflections will be beautiful on the metallic parts of the car... :thumbsup:

daWinky
10-25-2005, 08:29 AM
Wow, very convincing fire...:thumbsup: ! It's getting more and more spectacular...

-sabrina

monsitj
10-25-2005, 09:20 AM
just check your racer in previous post! it's awesome , i 'm a big fan of mechanic design , but I have to say that your style is unique, your ship design is great since space opera , and here , you did it again! good job mate!

ihamid
10-25-2005, 11:07 AM
hiya Alex

the last racer update look man pretty amazing! :bounce: :bounce: ! no crits man ! and the fire is coming out pretty cool too!
cheers man!

venum
10-26-2005, 11:49 AM
:)
The modeling is really nice.
The sprites for the are really interesting actually.
I gonna wait the next step.
congratulation :thumbsup:

Maxter
10-26-2005, 05:34 PM
Good fire effect and better modeling work... excellent! :thumbsup:

vampeta
10-26-2005, 10:07 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130364423_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130364423_large.jpg)

Yep.. i found some time to put some textures on the vehicle from Mr. Copermine :)

Ha.. im curious if you find out what the Nr. 3 means ;) :))

See ya

YasushAzush
10-27-2005, 03:50 AM
wo w alexander you kiled me this morning with you texture ....weldone boy:bounce:

Lemog
10-27-2005, 04:26 AM
Good work on textures Alex... a little bit too satined for the moment... but you will fixe that soon I'm sure... :thumbsup:

Zapan
10-27-2005, 07:25 AM
Ha.. im curious if you find out what the Nr. 3 means ;) :))


hmmmm... let me think...

3rd ship you have made ?...
3rd one who finished the race ?...
3rd Bronson of your Bronson family ?...
3 is always better than 1 ?...
Snow white and the 3 dwarfs ?...
3 beers remaining before getting drunk ?...
...
...
Ok I give up :shrug:

Awesome texture Alex, and great fire effects :eek: :thumbsup:

Lemog
10-27-2005, 07:30 AM
3 beers for me :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

SONIC-X
10-27-2005, 07:35 AM
Nice texturing work dude.Your scene is going to look great.

vampeta
10-27-2005, 09:23 AM
@visualact.com :: :D i hope not! :scream:

@Zapan :: Thats pretty close :DHahaha ... how about my third Challenge ;) but snow white and the 3 dwarfs was also correct!

@Lemog :: Bottled or tins ?! i can put it also in a glas but im afraid its going to lose fluidty on his way to france ;) :DHahaha

@SONIC-X :: Thanks Partner!

Cheers Friend!
See ya

Lemog
10-27-2005, 09:39 AM
Tins are better to celebrate victories of Mr Copermine and Mr Preuss... a thought... maybe a basic "tin" material for his car ?

sergioKomic
10-27-2005, 10:34 AM
Q: im curious if you find out what the Nr. 3 means

A: You want the 3 rd prize and not the 1st this time?

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: <<< 3 bouncing emoticons


Nice work as always Alexander....

vampeta
10-27-2005, 11:52 AM
...maybe a basic "tin" material for his car ?

Hmm i see what you mean... thanks 4 your hint friend!
i found some references on the web... i will try to get the same look and feel.

http://www.stevproj.com/Carz/AU-D.jpeg

http://www.oliversart.co.uk/acatalog/images/jpgs-lrg/coulson/0095%20silver%20arrow.jpg
http://www.gemmrig.de/hhf/pictures/pic_hhf_1994_silberpfeil_0001_582x334x16m.jpg

Cheers

DimitrisLiatsos
10-27-2005, 12:06 PM
I ssupect 3 was (or is) the number on the car of a Race - Driver u admire...yes?


Cool progress...if u want the turbines inside to be more visible u could add a strong Orange -Red glow in tthere behind them..something like after burn...or something.... :)

Lemog
10-27-2005, 12:11 PM
Yes Alex... exactly that... too much blue but very effective on the "third" picture... a sign :thumbsup:

daWinky
10-27-2005, 12:28 PM
Great texture for the car, in my opinion it's not to satined and I can't wait to see the fire reflections on it...:thumbsup: !

-sabrina

MacSlow
10-27-2005, 09:43 PM
Marvelous looking racer with that first texture-job there! But looking at your first concept-sketch for the racer again, I'm wondering if you still intend work on the model itself? Especially the rear section... did you decide against those aileron-like things at the back?

Best regards...

MacSlow

vampeta
10-27-2005, 10:51 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130453506_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130453506_large.jpg)

Ok... i have a boxx, 3ds max, and to gigs of mem.. nothing can go wrong... perhaps 2000 bronson clones ;)

Dam... only 2.800.000 Millions Polygons in my Scene and this *!# Box is going to crash :) hi hi hi

Here is a short idea how maybe,... possible... this final will ever look like ;)

Thanks 4 the great supply Friends... See ya!

JRBRAZ
10-28-2005, 12:23 AM
Amazing work, Im wondering with all the details in the scene :eek:

Im following this now :thumbsup:

THECLYKE
10-28-2005, 12:44 AM
I Love When You Come Across Work From Artists That Definatly Have The Right Feel For Whats Happening And What Needs To Happen Within Compositions.

Can't Wait To See The Complete Render....



Good Luck

nemirc
10-28-2005, 12:45 AM
So you are almost done then :D:bounce:

Lemog
10-28-2005, 03:57 AM
Nothing to crit about comp and work planed... the story comes goods, and better :thumbsup: Another time, you impress me by your art... :bowdown: Thanks for the Autounion :scream:

gpepper
10-28-2005, 05:38 AM
That really rocks a lot ! :beer:

jarvetu
10-28-2005, 07:49 AM
It's done! This looks good and the concept is amazing. I would like to have one of those speeders myself:)

antone-m
10-28-2005, 12:37 PM
waiting to see it when finished cool work so far :thumbsup:

Strannik
10-28-2005, 02:18 PM
:thumbsup: good luck

jddog
10-28-2005, 02:21 PM
Very nice pov and result :thumbsup:
jdd

vampeta
10-29-2005, 12:04 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130587491_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130587491_large.jpg)

Hi Folks,

Here you can see what is in each layer.

Layer 1 :: Background / sky (painted in Photoshop & a wacom)

Layer 2 :: The Big-City (putting this in a seperate layer gives me some more freedom 4 later adjustements... ;)

Layer 3 :: The back part of the raceway (most of it will be covered with smoke and fire from the explosion )(i will show this in the next post)

Layer 4 :: The Arena (Fire and smoke / particle effects will be rendered seperate because with Mental ray and GI "on" i got a lot of strange distortion... so they will be rendered with the default scanline renderer..

Layer 5, 6, 7... (See ya on the next update ;) )

Cheers :beer: Alex

Zapan
10-29-2005, 01:16 PM
Wow Alex :eek: , you blow my mind ---> http://images.leportailweb.com/clips/smiley/ipb/lamo.gif

Great painted background ... well, everything works with perfection :applause:

Keep up your stunning job mate :bounce:

monsitj
10-29-2005, 01:25 PM
sepia look is very good ! and latest update is awesome dude! maybe you can increase the detail of explosion, good job !

agou
10-29-2005, 01:48 PM
Very impressive work! Bravo! Keep it up!:bounce:

antone-m
10-29-2005, 03:23 PM
cooool :thumbsup: keep it up :thumbsup:

nemirc
10-30-2005, 02:55 AM
Very nice. The "oilpainting look" for the sky looks very cool

vampeta
10-30-2005, 04:34 PM
I want to say Thanks for all the great support and feedback in this thread.
Im very happy to see that im somehow on the right way with my image ;)

I rendered 2 versions of the racer yesterday and today but im currently total unheappy with that carpaint material.
(thanks Lemog you are so right! )
Problem: i want the objects surrounding the vehicle to reflect on the carpaint ... so i have to render it with the scene... but with mental ray and GI this carpaint looks more like a Whale-skin :/
Rendered with the default scanline-renderer it looks good... but only without GI.. but i do need Global Illumination ...grrr :banghead::banghead::banghead:

I have tryed to fake GI with default lighting and placed it into the image ( it just looks like a fake ;) ) :banghead:

Ok. i will see ya on the next update Friends... with a fresh new carpaint on the racer ;)
Thanks!
Alex

vampeta
10-30-2005, 04:54 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130694850_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130694850_large.jpg)

Here are some samples from my material-problems...

and ... of course the Fire effect on the frontside is finished =)

See ya

DaddyMack
10-30-2005, 06:57 PM
Hey there Alexander, The third works way better for me, I think you could afford to make the material brighter and a little whiter to bring it more out of your background... Good luck with the rest mate:buttrock:

YasushAzush
10-30-2005, 06:59 PM
i prefer the third one.:bounce: :thumbsup:

nemirc
10-31-2005, 02:51 AM
I like number one :)

JensDenker
10-31-2005, 03:50 AM
go for #3 alex.


cheers

Lemog
10-31-2005, 03:57 AM
For me it's the first... it remain me so much all the work of the guys in these ols years, who polish carosseries of that kind of cars... not paint... just many many hours to polish... to have a finished aspect really smooth and clean... a time where these guys was very proud of their work :thumbsup:

And you Alex, you could be proud too :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

SONIC-X
10-31-2005, 06:13 AM
# 1 looks nice.

Zapan
10-31-2005, 06:14 AM
The third looks great but I also prefer the first one
Great textures Alex... Keep on rocking:bounce:

Zapan
10-31-2005, 06:15 AM
ooops double post sorry :blush:

daWinky
10-31-2005, 06:40 AM
I've almost missed some great updates - your composition is amazing:thumbsup: , I'm not astonished that your boxx is crashing...concerning your material problems: I don't see them, I like your "whale material" as well as the third version...Great work as always!:applause:

-sabrina

vampeta
10-31-2005, 06:59 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130745581_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130745581_large.jpg)

Here is a version with the 3rd material... Im bit cunfused now... maybe a mix from the first and the third material in the next version ;)

P.s: please check out the ULTRAHIGHRES VERSION!

http://www.kira-network.com/pics/tn-finalres.jpg
klick me >> (http://www.kira-network.com/pics/finalres.jpg)


Cheers Friends and thanks 4 your feedback!

monsitj
10-31-2005, 07:29 AM
i think it's hard to pick now unless you put it in environment, don't know you plan something in next update , but I think reflection is very important in car paint, maybe you can add it , and if you decided to go sepia in final , i think value of car and street is not defferent enough (in my opinion) , good and very potential image in this challenge again ! dude!

Lemog
10-31-2005, 07:43 AM
In first... thanks for highres... that can permit us to really appreciate your work... and definitively... I prefer the first material... the third is not appropriate for me... too satined... a strange material for me... it remove a part of spectacular of your car... really my tought... it's maybe a mistake of my eyes...
...I stopped now... the choice is yours... I've just check your picture another time before to press on the "Submit Reply" button... and definitively... I prefer the first material :thumbsup: :bounce::beer: :arteest: :buttrock: :wip: :banghead: :lightbulb :wavey:

ThierryS
10-31-2005, 07:53 AM
Gee, me got nothing to crit, it's looking very good, so much work and details! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: SFX are great too!

SONIC-X
10-31-2005, 08:07 AM
You don't whant to do a highres with the first texture?

Lemog
10-31-2005, 08:09 AM
You don't whant to do a highres with the first texture?
I didn't dare to ask it :scream: hahaha

:beer:

SONIC-X
10-31-2005, 08:16 AM
I'm taking a fat chance.

Even if only the vehicle maybe not the whole scene.

Sorry I asked.

vampeta
10-31-2005, 09:16 AM
In first... thanks for highres... that can permit us to really appreciate your work... and definitively... I prefer the first material... the third is not appropriate for me... too satined... a strange material for me... it remove a part of spectacular of your car... really my tought... it's maybe a mistake of my eyes...
...I stopped now... the choice is yours... I've just check your picture another time before to press on the "Submit Reply" button... and definitively... I prefer the first material ...

ok ok ok you won ;) :scream:Hahaha
I will make a highres version with the first material also (maybe a bit less spec(ta)cular ;)

Thanks Friends!

See ya Later

Lemog
10-31-2005, 09:18 AM
ok ok ok you won ;) :scream:Hahaha
I will make a highres version with the first material also (maybe a bit less spec(ta)cular ;)

Thanks Friends!

See ya Later
hahaha... thanks... and just a little "less"... Im' okay :cool:

SONIC-X
10-31-2005, 10:00 AM
Can't wait to see it.

Thanks.

maurodelia
10-31-2005, 10:45 AM
very beautiful ! Nice colors !

ActionHank
10-31-2005, 12:39 PM
Here is a version with the 3rd material... Im bit cunfused now... maybe a mix from the first and the third material in the next version ;)



this looks veeery nice! full throttle!!!:) i prefer the 3rd material, although if i were you i would make it look even "whiter" (to additionaly pop out of the background, and also to reffer to racing tradition of your country, although i see your reference is mercedes's "silver arrows" :) ) and combine it with red numbers painted on vehicle, it looks nice combined with white.
i hope i helped at least a bit! :thumbsup:

alancamara
10-31-2005, 12:58 PM
Amazing work. Compostion, colors, model, i liked everything:bounce:. Maybe something to do on the explosion, but this is the minor problem:hmm:. Congrats mate, you are doing a great work. :applause:

gpepper
10-31-2005, 01:29 PM
Great it rocks ! :bounce:

melkao
10-31-2005, 01:45 PM
amazing progress....the image is looking great.:thumbsup:

darkjedi1929
10-31-2005, 04:07 PM
One word...WOW!:thumbsup: Oh oh By the way...The coward pilot ejected out....:D

daWinky
10-31-2005, 04:16 PM
:eek: Das ist einfach nur allererste Sahne, eine wirklich eindrucksvolle Arbeit und verschlgt mir total die (englische) Sprache:bounce: !! Great work, Alex:thumbsup: :thumbsup:


-sabrina

antone-m
10-31-2005, 04:41 PM
cool work mate :thumbsup:

Fleury3D
11-01-2005, 01:14 AM
Excellent job!:applause:
I'm waiting the final image... :cool:

SuperXCM
11-01-2005, 10:44 PM
Amazing work so far, really good style... great work! Keep it up! :thumbsup:

nemirc
11-02-2005, 02:56 AM
Go Herbie! :bounce:

madshooter
11-02-2005, 03:56 AM
Damn:banghead: I have missed one more rocking thread:sad: great job dude looks awesome:thumbsup: .
I'm speechless, scene is truly spectacular, Keep going dude waiting to see more:bounce: :bounce:

gardogg
11-02-2005, 06:28 AM
All I've got to say is :applause: I'll let you know if I can ever find something to criticize! Awesome composition by the way.

vampeta
11-02-2005, 06:55 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130918114_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1130918114_large.jpg)

Hi Friends,

here is the racer with the updated first Material.

The explosion in the background is made with the default cell material from 3DSMAX and displacement... very simple and very quick technique... but i think it works.

I dit also a hihgres version again.
please check it out here

>> HIGHRES VERSION << (http://www.kira-network.com/pics/large2.jpg)


See ya Friends
And Big thanks 4 all the masive feedback and hints!

Cheers Alex

morphar
11-02-2005, 07:12 AM
Very nice render, also think the explosions fits in very well even though they are simple.

Only thing is perhaps, that all the people around the explosion fire are standing the exactly same way as the people far away from it. Would nice if they had a reaction to the explosion, like holding up their hands in front of face. Ducking. If you know what i mean.

It would be a VERY nice touch i think :wip:

The sparks from the racer looks great.

Looking forward to see the driver with a pair of real 50's goggles :cool::cool::cool:

JamesMK
11-02-2005, 07:25 AM
Shaping up very nicely here - particularly how the fireball illuminates parts of the structure on the left, nice touch.

Things that stand out to me as slightly off: the fire components have rather sharp edges, maybe they could get more of a frayed/broken-up edge (guessing these are some sort of sprites... not familiar with Max cells... but there's an alpha involved perhaps, could have its edges softened)

And then the arcs on the base wall of the grandstand, just looks like they could use a softer bevel or something, as they look a bit painted on right now - it's hard to see if it's a straight extrude inwards and a shadow, or if they are soft concave insets.

Just details however. The main impact of the image is great, and that's what matters :thumbsup:



.

imbusion
11-02-2005, 07:27 AM
Oooh, I'm loving this render. I definitely think your project is coming along well, and that it has a top-notch feel.

Just one very minor suggestion: The main car looks like its been playing bumper cars for the last 200 laps... very scratced and battered... and it looks superb like this! :) However, i noticed in the high-res version that the front grill is nearly impeccable. A little wear and tear on the front of the car is what i suggest. Just a suggestion, though.

Keep up the great work!

WesleyTack
11-02-2005, 07:43 AM
very nice render, it's getting really spectacular, and lots of detail!
what does the nr3 stand for ? :)

Lemog
11-02-2005, 07:52 AM
Same material... ? strange... it appear to need more reflectivity... not ? now, it just appear more "scratched"... but as the previous rendering... very satined... it missed something I think... :shrug:

Agree with James about arc now... I don't see that before, but now... I see only that :D

authentic
11-02-2005, 08:36 AM
That's a great work. Nice fx. I would just say the explosion could light more the bg to be more integrated.
Good luck.

dannyfalch
11-02-2005, 08:58 AM
Very good mood in the render:thumbsup:

The cell material workes out nicely, it just needs some DOF or Motionblur og something to get the action going.
sparks are brilliant,.
Driver??

SONIC-X
11-02-2005, 11:10 AM
That highres texture looks great up close and the flames of crash are great.

Nice going dude.

sergioKomic
11-02-2005, 11:41 AM
Now its becoming spectacular.... (honest I was worried that all that work would go to waste cause without the smoke-fireballs the image IMHO looked dull)


:buttrock:

Zapan
11-02-2005, 07:54 PM
Wow Alex , just wow :eek:

Really amazing, fire effects are perfects and add so much to the color balance , and wow again.
Just few suugestions if you let me : all the Bronson team :scream: is looking at the race ground , even those who are actually in flames... well something's disturbing about that :D .
And maybe some scratches on the "3" very clean comparing to texture around (gorgeous by the way)...

Well I guess this is neatpicking besides only on the Hi.res (thx btw), maybe I look at you pic a little bit too long

AIR
11-02-2005, 11:06 PM
WOW.
Nothing much to crit.
The grand atmosphere of legendary race is here.
Only the explosion trail is kinda cheap,but I guess you are working on it.
Cool stuff here pal.
Seeya :wavey:

sirBS
11-03-2005, 09:31 AM
Perfectly! With streams of air from huge speed it will be magnificent!

gpepper
11-03-2005, 11:14 AM
Excellent explosions Alex ! This is going to be a great picture !

jddog
11-03-2005, 03:53 PM
yep explosions rocks ! congrats !
jdd

vampeta
11-03-2005, 05:58 PM
@ jddog :: Thanks Friend

@ gpepper :: Dito!

@ Sergey Banityuk :: Thanks, ... i will try to ;)

@ A I R :: Thanks friend! Yep the explosion trail is still in progress ;)

@ Zapan :: :beer::blush::eek::scream::)

@ sergioKomic :: Thanks friend nice to hear

@ SONIC-X :: Thanks

@ 3d-empire :: Nice Idea with the motion blure... if i find some time i will try this out.

@ authentic :: Yes the explosion needs some more light, i will tune this up in the later
steps... Thanks!

@ Lemog :: Hi Friend! Now i found the problem with the Material. As i said bevore the problem is GI. Now i found a good way to mix the materials together. ( i will show it in a few minutes) I think without your help critique it would be looking awfully in the Final. Thanks Friend!

@ simon.wt :: Thanks Friend! Its just my third CHALLENGE! ;)

@ imbusion :: Thanks! When there is time enough left this is defenetly one of my higher prioritys!

@ JamesMK :: Thansk Friend! Yes there are a lot of things in the image that are need some more work! The problem is the lost of time during my dayjob :scream:Hahaha
I will try to do my best on this one in the last 30 days!

@ morphar :: Thanks 4 the great feedback! Yes this is also on my todo list.. burning people... flying stundman... destruction... YES!!:twisted:

THANKS TO EVERYONE IN THIS THREAD FOR THE GREAT FEEDBACK!
See ya friends!

vampeta
11-03-2005, 06:02 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1131044519_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1131044519_large.jpg)

Another material update on the racer and some tune ups on the explosion!

See ya Friends
Cheers Alex

AIR
11-03-2005, 11:14 PM
Hi Alex.
Beatyfull stuff here,I like the car u made here,just positive comments from my side man,
It is for sure one of the better entrys here.

I,personally would sufficate the fire in the trail of the explosion,make it more of a smoke kinda with fire parts in it rather than fire kinda with smoke parts in it,explosion itself is nice,
but the trail is pocking my eye.
Just beeing honest.But like I have said,beside this minor thing,this is peace of work.
Keep it sharp.
Greetings :)

YasushAzush
11-04-2005, 03:44 AM
wo realy intresting very very very :bounce: ....the only crit is that the place where the explosion is happening should be a lot briter than the other places i think ....make it

Lemog
11-04-2005, 04:13 AM
The racer is now really better... a last point... why don't have some "artefacts" (real artefacts) of reflection of the racer... I know that's not a mirror... but in other hand, the surface is not anodized... We must certainly watch some "forms" of the environment in reflection... not ? nothing very precise... but anyway some tones nuances...

About the "3"... I don't know who suggest to put it in red... I think that can be can good... but not a random red... for it... pick a red color of the explosion... that will continue to limit the color spectrum of your future vintage race...

I always have a little problem with the low wall at left... in fact, it was appear very poor with the rest... maybe that give us a resting part in the picture, but in this case... eye is catch by this wall... It need certainly not too much other details... just to have an interest... don't know... that will be statues, molures, wires, posters, holes, wrinkles or scratches... we doesn't forget that this wall is near of the track and can receive many things...

The electric wires will certainly find a good place on the rails of each part of the track, and why not, some little electric boxes, or old light box...

Some morning thoughts Alex... in you can find something inside that, I will happy... :thumbsup:

SONIC-X
11-04-2005, 05:07 AM
Great up date dude.It looks much improoved-awesome work you are doing.

daWinky
11-04-2005, 06:03 AM
Stunning work again! Good that you fixed your material problems...the racer looks amazing now!:applause:

-sabrina

melkao
11-04-2005, 02:01 PM
Excellent work, i like the update:bounce:

antone-m
11-04-2005, 02:16 PM
cool updates :cool:

CryingHorn
11-04-2005, 02:34 PM
Nice colors and composition Vampeta. Also very interesting style, it's like alternative future. No crit on the work, maybe just a fire flows a bit unatural, but I guess you will tweak that in the future, Good luck!

ArtisticVisions
11-04-2005, 05:42 PM
God, I wish there was a "jaw-drop" smilies available, cause my jaw literally dropped 5 feet from seeing the latest image.
Absolutely incredible work, Alex (as always). :bowdown:

mmoir
11-04-2005, 09:36 PM
Hey Alexander,

Your scene is coming along great, the explosion reaching into the seating looks great.:thumbsup: :thumbsup: Talk about being in the hot seat. The sky also looks very nice, keep up the great job.

agou
11-04-2005, 10:05 PM
Great work, really amazing !

vampeta
11-07-2005, 10:02 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1131404540_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1131404540_large.jpg)

Ok ok.. i bought myself a PSP =) thats the reason 4 the spare updates ;) SORRY!

Im now at 95%
only the Auto Union Racer and the Pilot in the Front car is missing.
(and some small environment pieces);)

I dit some updates on the Arena (thanks Lemog and James 4 some great ass kickes ;) and cool hints... Thanks Friends!! )

And some more glows and sparks on the explosion...

Thats all 4 today.
Thanks to everyone 4 the great feedback... sorry im a bit short in time these days. I just hope you 4give me the spare updates ;/

See ya Friends

ziriguidum
11-07-2005, 11:10 PM
uau!! this is amazing!!! the fireball effect stay perfect!!!

antone-m
11-08-2005, 03:42 AM
cool work keep it up :thumbsup:

vampeta
11-08-2005, 08:11 AM
@ Lemog :: Hi my friend. Sorry 4 the late answer. I know what you mean but im afraid that this is not easy to realize because the racer is now rendered with a different rendering engine and its not part of the main scene anymor (you saw the result with mentalray ;) ) If i want to do this artefacts i have to paint by hand :banghead:

About the "3"... my first version was in red but somehow i like it more in black.. maybe i will turn again :Dhahaha

The wall with the arcs is now a bit tuned up, and of course the left side will be covered with smoke from the burning "AUTO UNION"

Electric wires?!... great idea!
As always very helpfull hints my friend :beer: Cheers!


@ A I R :: Thanks Friend! Yep its somehow hard to realice something you can imagine but you dont know exactly how to....! I think the Fire is a good example 4 this. And 4 myself... i like the end result. :beer:

@ visualact.com :: Thanks Friend!
@ SONIC-X :: Dito!
@ daWinky :: Danke! Du machst mich echt etwas verlegen :blush: Thanks!!
@ melkao :: Thanks!
@ the best :: Dito!
@ Crying Horn :: Thansk! Yep... Fire is still WIP but nearly finished
@ ArtisticVisions :::blush::bounce::buttrock:
@ mmoir ::Thanks Friend!
@ agou :: Dito!
@ ziriguidum :: Thank you!

And a big sorry 4 the spare answers to all your posts, Im trying to follow and answer in each thread as in my own. I will found some more time after this image is finished! I promise!

See ya Friends!

Lemog
11-08-2005, 08:24 AM
Ok Alex... I just see the "AUTO-UNION" position with your last update, and of course... my suggestion about these details are out of subject now...

About metal aspect of your car... compositing and FX is the final step of our work, not ? you can add all these little detail with your "hand"... and that will be Spectaculay Awesome... :wip:

ThierryS
11-08-2005, 08:37 AM
Mostlty spectacular man! Cool work, I like these fire smoke effects!:cool:

SONIC-X
11-08-2005, 08:39 AM
Awesome work so far dude.It is spectacular.

nemirc
11-08-2005, 01:24 PM
almost there :beer:

(o)ne
11-08-2005, 03:02 PM
looks explosive, keep out :thumbsup:

theuni
11-08-2005, 06:58 PM
... aaahhhh.... no words... :applause: Looks totally awesome! Great work!!!

harryb
11-08-2005, 07:31 PM
This is a fantastic scene! Everything's moving forward toward the viewer and the Dutch tilt on the camera helps convey the dynamics of all that forward motion! I noticed that you're thinking about putting birds in that "V" shaped crest between the statue and the building in the distance. Right now that "V" is acting as a directional element to point your eye to the explosion in back of the race car. If you put stuff there it might take your eye out of that wonderful flow you've got going on. Have you considered something else that would help accent that forward motion? Maybe a couple jets high up in the sky flying almost straight up, following that center point perspective, with some wispy contrails or something that act as arrows to direct your eye down to the explosion?

Just a thought. This image really stands out! It would make a killer poster!

vampeta
11-09-2005, 10:09 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1131577777_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/7885/7885_1131577777_large.jpg)

The final steps... :)))

I have currently some turbo stress on my dayjob :( but i found some time 4 a short update.

Here is Mr. Bronson in Low-Res with some more details on his leather helmet and the glasses.

See ya on the next update Friends.
Cheers Alex

Agamemnwn
11-09-2005, 10:21 PM
great update alex. The only thing that strikes me odd is the way the mouth is but is you are going to cover it like you have it the concept sketch it doesnt matter :D :thumbsup:

authentic
11-10-2005, 07:40 AM
Great work on this character. he's completely in the syle of your picture. Maybe the upper lips is a little too in front but we have to see in the good point of view because he will be small at screen.

Squibbit
11-10-2005, 07:51 AM
hey nice work, vampeta, keep it up :thumbsup:


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antone-m
11-10-2005, 09:02 AM
cool I like him :thumbsup:

vampeta
11-10-2005, 10:04 PM
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Hello Everyone,

here is another small update on Mr. Bronson.

I dont want to put to put too much Detail on him because he is only kind of small in Final ;)

Hope you like it anyway.. ;)
See ya Friends and Thanks 4 the great supply!
Cheers Alex

nemirc
11-11-2005, 01:11 AM
Nice bronson! :beer:

jddog
11-11-2005, 09:09 AM
well no crits... just watching ! :thumbsup:
jdd

Zapan
11-11-2005, 02:45 PM
And there is the Bronson buddy :bounce:

well no crits for me neither, just enjoying your work

Keep it up Meister :buttrock: Say hi to the Bronson's gang:wip:

antone-m
11-11-2005, 04:01 PM
keep it up :wip:

harryb
11-14-2005, 04:35 PM
Hi Alexander, This guy looks like he's coming along great! I can't wait to see your final rendering!

BTW: Thanks for your comments! I posted an actual model today. If you have a moment and if you have any ideas I'm all ears. This is the main sculpture -- kind of the ancor to the whole piece.

ihamid
11-14-2005, 05:46 PM
hiya Alex .. been a while since i last checked! man thats some cool explosions and fire! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:! and the modeling of the head is coming quite well! see u and cheers man!

vampeta
11-15-2005, 07:05 AM
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Hi folks,

sorry 4 the delay in my posts im a kind of busy these days :(

I found some time on modeling the last racer.

Status report:

- Image is at 95% Finished
- Textures on Mr Bronson still Missing
- Dented Auto Union racer on the left with textures
- and some particle effects...sparks etc...

Thank you all 4 your great feedback. and see you this week.

Cheers Alex

Lemog
11-15-2005, 07:10 AM
Happy to see that... in the profil view... we can exactly feel the Auto-Union touch... very good... you adapted well the design to your concept and story...

...I'm very impatient to discover the real version in 3d... really good Alex... :beer:

Zapan
11-15-2005, 07:33 AM
Great Racer Alex ... again :thumbsup:

That's an amazing piece of work, and I just can't wait to see the final...

Come on friend :bounce:

SONIC-X
11-15-2005, 08:27 AM
Nice looking racer.Great progress also.Can't wait to see your finnished image.

antone-m
11-15-2005, 01:30 PM
keep up the good work :thumbsup:

harryb
11-15-2005, 04:37 PM
Cool racer Alex! I like the grill, Kind of like a '30s Crysler Airflow.

shemosus
11-15-2005, 06:31 PM
your art is awesome.....your pc too.