Bee and The '' Lovely '' Flower !!!

[mimo8]

good start - here some crits

• overall the fly seems to heavy ... toon is good, but it is not beliveable if the flower bends down half way when it sits down. I would work a bint more decent with the flowers movements
• sec 06: the fly sits down and a moment later the flower goes down ... close that timing gap.
• its nice when the "loaded" heavy bee flys up ... you could even stess out this heavyness a bit more
• the last move of the flower is not clear, does it eat the fly or smash it away?

keep it up

[akin]

thanks a lot mimo8,

nice crits...

• the last move of the flower is not clear, does it eat the fly or smash it away?

yeah thats true there is a miss understanding, l had made the flower hit the bee but it makes it so fast it comes to maybe eat the bee.

l will fix them :)

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