10 Second Club--plz critique

[Joscoon]

Hey, That was great!! I was a bit sceptical seeing as u said u only spent 3 hours on it.. but it was really good! How do you animate so fast?... Well, not much to crit really, I think the acting is excellent... Only one small thing though... at the start the character on the left is looking at the second character then the eyes start shifting all over the place... feels like he should just continue to look at the other character a bit longer... well, just my opinion... but the other little eye shifts throughout the rest are great!

Question: Did you use video reference for this? and if so do you always use video reference?
I liked the demo reel short too... good work. hope to see more from u in the future.

[biochemist]

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[dbates]

I like the movements, but the lip-syncing seems off somehow. Nice work for three hours though!

[monsterscience]

Hey...

Very nice animation. The physics of it works really well. There are just two things that bug me: The eyes... like mentioned before... and I think the "No sir no way" guy plays the same way through the whole dialouge: At first he is saying "No sir no way" then he is saying " well i guess I am telling you what you want to hear..." Mabye you need to change the characters pose and body language between the two sections to compliment the dialouge a little more.

Mike.

[biochemist]

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