Le Cabanon, Pfeiffer Gilles (3D)

[gpepper]

For those who are interesed, here is the wip of this picture:

The cabanon's wip (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=2453014)

[Weider]

wow the lightning is beautiful!! Maybe it's a bit too blur. And I would put the trunck color a bit darker. For the rest, it's excellent.

[Gunilla]

I really like the mood in this one... beautiful rendering and scene!
Excellent WIP too - full of good tips, thanks! :thumbsup:

[gpepper]

Thanks everyboby !

Here is the black 'n' white version to be near the original pictures I shot few yers ago:

http://gpepper.free.fr/image/bnw_pt.jpg (http://gpepper.free.fr/image/bnw.jpg)

(Click on the image to view it larger)

Here is the base picture:

http://gpepper.free.fr/image/base.jpg

[Krylon|Ankh]

Hi, i like this piece. Though, i think the trunk of the trees need more colour, they look too grey, also, more grass and some bushes would have been a plus to the scene. In rest i like it, good job on it! Keep up the good work! Also, i like how you modeled the tree in zbrush!

[Desten]

3ds max, Maya, Photoshop, ZBrush
WOW! how mach :) I think the're need much more grass :thumbsup: (sorry for my cracked engliШ )

[machadoj]

Very nice work. Brilliant! Thanks to show all the way in the WIP forum. All the stars for you.

Congratulations. :)

Jomar Machado

Retro Building: http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=2411533 (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=2411533)
Classic Window: http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=253181 (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=253181)
Classic Room: http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=257332&page=1&pp=15 (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=257332&page=1&pp=15)

[gpepper]

Hi, i like this piece. Though, i think the trunk of the trees need more colour, they look too grey, also, more grass and some bushes would have been a plus to the scene. In rest i like it, good job on it! Keep up the good work! Also, i like how you modeled the tree in zbrush!

Thanks Krylon !
Yeah You're right, the tree needs more work, but I did some strange stuff in Zbrush and Maxwell doesn't seem to understand the texture very well...
About the grass, I would put more, of course, but my computer did like it very well when I ask him to render 30000 instanced geometry... Maybe I should render it seperately and compose it but time was off...

WOW! how mach :) I think the're need much more grass :thumbsup: (sorry for my cracked engliШ )

Thanks desten !
Yeah U're right, more grass would be better... But my computer don't want to render more...

Very nice work. Brilliant! Thanks to show all the way in the WIP forum. All the stars for you.

Congratulations. :)



Thanks Jomar !
Happy to know that U found the wip interesting...

[Zapan]

Tres joli travail Gilles

Je connais pas Maxwell mais le rendu est tres impressionnant, ca donne vraiment un atmosphere a l'image bravo !

Mes critiques seraient plus ou moins les memes que celles qui ont été dites. L'herbe fait un peu des sortes de piques qui sortent du sol peut etre faire plus de touffes d'herbes si tu ne peux pas en rendre plus. Globalement le premier plan est tres flou , alors bien sur ca met le sujet en valeur mais le blur est quand meme tres fort. Ou sinon tu pourrais aussi rajouter des cailloux en premier plan histoire de complexifier le premier plan...

Enfin tout ca ce ne sont que des idées mais le résultat est déja très bon...
Félicitations.

[gpepper]

Tres joli travail Gilles

Je connais pas Maxwell mais le rendu est tres impressionnant, ca donne vraiment un atmosphere a l'image bravo !

Mes critiques seraient plus ou moins les memes que celles qui ont été dites. L'herbe fait un peu des sortes de piques qui sortent du sol peut etre faire plus de touffes d'herbes si tu ne peux pas en rendre plus. Globalement le premier plan est tres flou , alors bien sur ca met le sujet en valeur mais le blur est quand meme tres fort. Ou sinon tu pourrais aussi rajouter des cailloux en premier plan histoire de complexifier le premier plan...

Enfin tout ca ce ne sont que des idées mais le résultat est déja très bon...
Félicitations.

c'est clair que c'est aussi les point qui me gène maintenant... :)

Je me suis un peu préssé sur la fin histoire de ne pas déborder sur le prochain challenge et sur le taf que je dois mettre en place pour une nouvelle année à Aries...
Merci de ton commentaire ! ;)

english mode:

You're right, these details are those which bored me too !

I was in a hurry to finish this stuff before the next challenge starts... And I have to work on many other stuff to prepare a new year at Aries school !
Thanks for Ur comment !

[aatur]

wow, very nice work :)

[gpepper]

Thanks Aatur !

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