Female character : Aneta (nudity)

[captain chapo]

hey, looking really good! some suggestions:


make the mouth wider.
widen the bridge of the nose at the bas, but not the nostrils, those might actually need to come in a bit.
make tip of nose come out a littl more, so there is a bit more curve to side view
at the top of the nose make the brow go into the nose more, if you look on your model the brow seems to curve down into the middle of the nose also take a look at that curve.
http://www.3d.sk/aneta/TN_Aneta_098.JPG

[diffa]

thanx captain chapo for the comments. I'm going to modify the nose and the mouth.

[diffa]

Little update. Is the forehead too big?

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b103/diffart/aneta/aneta_02.jpg

[MacAndre]

hi diffa!
good progress. ;)
but it seems that you need a little help with the edgeloops of the face. there are some lines that needed to be canceled. ;)
look...
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/5091/anetatopology4bo.th.jpg (http://img367.imageshack.us/my.php?image=anetatopology4bo.jpg)

[diffa]

thanx mac_andre! Here's a little update. Are my edgeloops any better?

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b103/diffart/aneta/aneta_03.jpg

[diffa]

Without the wires . . .

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b103/diffart/aneta/aneta_04.jpg

[DrewShelton]

Looks nice! Only small areas that I see that may need defined is:

1. The pit in the ear, just next to the character's temple.
2. Slight smoothing in the valley between the nose bridge and cheek.

Besides that...

A+


Later,
~Drucifer

[hoodedpython]

Good work, I think the nose is a bit wide, and the eys don't look one eyewidth apart.

[Davidxt]

Hello. Few things. The forehead is too tall because the eye level should be in the middle of the head. The eyes look slightly too close, and increasing the distance inbetween them will also fix the proportion issue where the inner corner of the eyes are supposed to line up with the outer edges of the nostrils. The chin area needs more form, meaining it looks too flat. This is contributing to your head looking kind of chubby, unless you are going for this look. But anyways, this is what I mean by more form. I am sure people are tired of seeing this model. http://www.makeup411.com/images/expert_advice/adriana%20LIMA.jpg

The next thing, I think the lips on your model are positioned well, but the shape of the bottem and upper lips could look more feminine by taking account of the planes of the lips. Look at a lot of reference pictures for the lips.. you'll get the idea. That is plenty to get you started.

[diffa]

Thanx for the comments. Akia what do you mean by that people are tired of seeing this model? Is it so crappy? or what? I'm going to fix the forehead, eyes and the lips.

[Prodi-G]

the forehead seems really tall to me and the face overall seems a little wide and fat to put it simply.

[Davidxt]

I thought there might be a misunderstanding... When I said "model", i should have said supermodel. Adriana Lima is used as a reference frequently and I suspected people were tired of seeing her picture. That's all.

[luciferous]

theCG model looks good, needs a little Tweaking.... the super model looks like her right eye is twitching, hehehe

keep cracking at it though diffa...

Akia, lets hope you havent sent this poor chap(ette) crying in the corner from the misunderstanding huh?

[diffa]

Okay, I'm not trying to model Adriana Lima and I'm not using her as a reference. I don't know how U thought that I was modelling her? I can't really see the resemblance...

[luciferous]

Okay, I'm not trying to model Adriana Lima and I'm not using her as a reference. I don't know how U thought that I was modelling her? I can't really see the resemblance...

hey there... I dont think Akia was saying that he though you was using Lima as a reference, he was using her as an example of how the forehead on your model is a little but too high, because the eyes are almost ecactly in the centre of the head, the photo also shows how a womans chin is slightly more pointier than a males and that the eyes are generally one eye width apart and almost sure that the eyes height roughly comes to the top of the ears... I'm rambling abit so Im gonna bullet point what Ive said below... more for my benefit than yours

- eyes should be in centre of head mass
- inner edges of eyes should line up with nostrils
- eye centre lines up with lip edges
- top of eyes should be just under the top of the ears
- female chins are pointer/ rounder than males

I think thats about it... I think.

I hope this also helps clear things up abit

Just had another look at your model, Im not sure about this but I think the eys make need to be pushed back into the head a little bit.

Anyways the model is looking good

[Davidxt]

Okay, I'm not trying to model Adriana Lima and I'm not using her as a reference. I don't know how U thought that I was modelling her? I can't really see the resemblance...

I'll take into account you're from Finland, but you really need to read the words I am typing. First of all, I showed you the adriana lima picture to show you how the chin needs to be shaped, "this is what I mean by more form" You are obviously not trying to model Adriana Lima.

[diffa]

Okay, my mistake. Sorry about that.

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