Beach picture. needs help

[weird]

no coments, no criticts, maybe the picture is perfect!! :annoyed: :shrug:

[wasted weasel]

i think there are some problems with the size of the hands.... they need to be a bit bigger....proportionally her arms look pretty long too (but i think that's just because the hands are too small)

maybe loose the squiggly looking contour line on her leg (it makes it look like an old wrinkly leg)

her hair looks like it might need a little shading or reworking around the 'bangs' where it curls over here left eye and above the eye where it meets her scalp,

um... did you draw this in photoshop??
I'm always curious as to how people can draw an image with solid singular lines, where as all my work is so sketchy and looks a mess with little lines going everywhere in an attempt to capture the right shape.

looks good though, i like the color, just some size issues i think is the biggest problem. post an updated pic if you can get around to it:wavey:

[weird]

Thx for reply.
i'll try all you told me. thx

I draw the picture with pencil and paper, then ink, and scan it.
With photoshop i clean the pencil. Then i paint it in photoshop.

This is the first picture i made as i told you. All my old pictures are made directly from photoshop, and as you said, it was sketchy.

Anyway thk very much.

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