Lip Sync- WIP

[feebsicle]

i think the acting is a little monotoned. it just seems like he's leaning back and forth and throwing his arms around to exclaim certain words. it would be more interesting if it was changed up a little.
also, the secondary characters need to react to what he's doing. when he slams his fists on the table, they should hear it. they need to jump a little, be startled. also, i think you could really push their behavior/emotions. the green monster guy seemed bored and impatient, so just kick it up a notch and have him act REALLY bored and being completely passive. it would give it an atmosphere, and would compliment the main character.
the army guy is almost nonexistant. i think it would be funny if he were completely konked out and not even listening whatsoever. maybe tilt his head back onto his chair and make him snore. then when the guy bangs his hands on the table it could wake him up.
these are just suggestions though, you dont have to do them :)

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