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AralX
08-27-2005, 07:16 AM
hello ,

I feel it needs something ...


http://www.tayob.com/up/files/Aral-1125124778.gif
but I fixed the picture inside later I thought it needs some work so which is better and what is missing so I can improve ?

http://www.tayob.com/up/files/Aral-1125125083.gif

sheldon911
08-27-2005, 12:01 PM
Hey so here are my oponions .. the 2 3d speakers on the side really really ruin the picture.. the abstract art is supose to give a fealing of 3d.. and draw the eyes but with the speakers it dosent fit and ruins the 3d effect.. 2nd.. outside the box... your not thinking outside man clearly .. there is nothing.. i see nothing its all focused in the middle .. wich is good but im fealing its to focused.. break out of the bounderys abit.. ink splotch acouple places.. have somthing breaking off to the side... Thats about all the advice i can give you hope it helped.

DizainLand
08-27-2005, 03:43 PM
i do not know what is the title of your work, but :)
- the speakers does not fit the des. if you are talking about some thing about speakers, put one in the left or right center.

- why do not you elarge the 3d effect in the center to the background and make the opacity 30.

- some text will be greate :)

peace

AralX
08-28-2005, 04:25 AM
the 2 3d speakers on the side really really ruin the picture
- the speakers does not fit the des.
let me see if I understand you right . you are talking about the 2 buttons on the side ? if so I will take them off and see ...

ink splotch acouple places.. have somthing breaking off to the side
Do you mean you want me to make a Ink splash Effect into the BG ?

why do not you elarge the 3d effect in the center to the background and make the opacity 30
you mean the button ? or with the screen ?

some text will be greate
where exactly ?

Thats about all the advice i can give you hope it helped.
thank you , you too DizainLand (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=182054) vbmenu_register("postmenu_2581420", true);

AralX
08-28-2005, 04:32 AM
the 2 3d speakers on the side really really ruin the picture
- the speakers does not fit the des.
let me see if I understand you right . you are talking about the 2 buttons on the side ? if so I will take them off and see ...

ink splotch acouple places.. have somthing breaking off to the side
Do you mean you want me to make a Ink splash Effect into the BG ?

why do not you elarge the 3d effect in the center to the background and make the opacity 30
you mean the button ? or with the screen ?

some text will be greate
where exactly ?

Thats about all the advice i can give you hope it helped.
thank you , you too DizainLand (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=182054)

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