First Demo Reel needs crits !

[bigdovii]

Looks great and has all the little details that really sell shots. Only gripe is that its probably a bit long. Anyone who is really interested in you will just pause the reel if there is something they want to look at closer, or email you for a high res etc.

[Pooyag]

bad Sides...
i think you are not suppose to put a WIP in your reel,and yes,it was too long for the quantity

and the desert Hut....the hand painted texture....i think it's not that big of a deal to fork 24 seconds over it....and probably you spend half of the whole time on the WIP project.

Good Sides...
with one galance,i liked the Desert Hut, as i'd seen it before.but i just waited and nothing happend...you know.after 24sec it turned to something else.

it really started Amazing,Specialy with the sound...i,personally expected something More....Action,so to speak.

maybe you are not ready for making Demo reel.Not much of Stuff i mean.
Anyway....Keep it up

[ZonWernor]

Thx guys for your comments !

@bigdovii: I agree with you, it's a bit too long, especially on the end of the demo. Well I'm just fixing that right now.

@3rd user: Well about the wip thing, I personally already saw some wip in demo reel and don't think there are rules about that. The only problem I found with it and as you said, that it was a bit long, so I just made it shorter.
At last, too bad you didn't find what you expected to in the end of the demo, well come back next year, I'm planning to make an animated short which I could use later for a new reel.

Thx again, cya

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