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MINDPHASER
02-22-2002, 06:18 PM
Tuning project for my car!

LOOK AT LAST POST!!!

Troydm
02-22-2002, 06:24 PM
Try to make the hull more reflective and spec. !!!
The model is good !!!

Troydm
02-22-2002, 06:26 PM
Mind это ты не узнал сразу а должен был !!!
Попробуй корпус отражающим сделать !!!

clifford
02-22-2002, 06:51 PM
Really great model. Like it a lot.
Did I recognized well the grainy GI render of Lightwave ?

3DZukini
02-22-2002, 06:57 PM
Really good, i like the model a lot. One thing that stood out to me is the door handle, looks a little small. Other than that it's great!!

MINDPHASER
02-22-2002, 07:06 PM
Приятно встретить народ который говорит на русском!
Yeah!!
that is LightWave 7.0
Take a look other image


Sorry for my broken english!:p

ToddD
02-22-2002, 08:44 PM
I like the model, excellent job! Only thing I see wrong with the modeling, is the front of the roof appears to rise a little. The materials need a little work. As far as the graininess, I underdstand there is a plugin called daylight (or something like that) for lightwave, it will reduce your render times, and reduce the graininess. I don't currently use lightwave, but can you add a self illumiinated "Card" to the render to create some reflections?

Gilgamesh
02-23-2002, 04:44 AM
Sweet. Looks like you might have some aliasing problems around the door and the hood. But it looks great.

Lewis3D
02-23-2002, 06:21 AM
Yes model lloks very nice :). Doornab is little too small and like Tbonz816 said roof is rising wierd :). Another thing that i could sy that those rims look little bit more BMW style and not for Mercedes but that's IMHO ;).

About grain GI render - LW don't need any plugins, just turn on shading noise reduction in GI panell and renders will be longer for 2-3 secs and there wil not be anymore grain :D. Just my 2 (euro) cents :D.

MINDPHASER
02-25-2002, 10:19 PM
another pic

3DZukini
02-25-2002, 11:23 PM
Wow, new render looks great. Only thing I see is that the depth of field is a little too strong making the image look "miniature" I know this happens in the real world with digital cameras that don't have a good macro.(I work for a toy company so we run into the camera problem when we're trying to get realistic looking shots) I havn't learned much about the dof in LW yet but I think if you could turn the effect way down in the foreground and down about a third in the background that it would have a more realistic look. Also looks like the scale of the car is smaller than that of the road, but I'm not sure. Looks really good though, I wish I could model cars like that!!

MINDPHASER
02-26-2002, 12:02 AM
Thanks for your advice!
I used Digital confusion, but to tell the truth the result has not so liked me! I liked result with X-DOF!

3DZukini
02-26-2002, 12:30 AM
I noticed that there's a line where the depth of field starts in front and back, must be a software problem. Did you try turning the effect almost off in the foreground and start it little further from the lens in the background? New image looks like the same settings as before...anyway, it's still a great model!!

3DZukini
02-26-2002, 10:21 PM
I noticed that there's a line where the depth of field starts in front and back, must be a software problem. Did you try turning the effect almost off in the foreground and start it little further from the lens in the background? New image looks like the same settings as before...anyway, it's still a great model!!

MINDPHASER
03-17-2002, 08:05 PM
and more:

http://cybersoft.mailru.com/gallery/MB/MB_cath2.jpg
http://cybersoft.mailru.com/gallery/MB/MB_cath3.jpg

MINDPHASER
03-28-2002, 12:51 PM
But stil in progress
http://cybersoft.mailru.com/gallery/MB/MB12.JPG

goodlag
03-28-2002, 03:26 PM
i like dof render

nice model & nice render

MINDPHASER
04-01-2002, 07:12 PM
LOOK AT THIS (http://cybersoft.mailru.com/animation/MB.avi):wip:

xtrm3d
04-01-2002, 07:30 PM
sweet daimler-benz...
may be a little bit too dark picture ?
christophe

dukestreet
04-01-2002, 07:47 PM
nice shot and animation. maybe put a little more noise in the shock motion, roll side to side instead of just up and down on the springs.

EighthDecay
04-01-2002, 09:44 PM
Sweet mindphaser,,, only one thing,, are the wheels turning the wrong way,,, I have used the animation expressions in MAX4 and had this happen too me before,, not really positive they are rotating the wrong way,,, great scene setup,,, what does it look like,, I want too do something similar,,, do you have a zoomed out view of the model scene,,, in any case its really cool.

I'll get my titan model doing the same thing shortly,, I'm still tweeking it..

keep up the great work,,

MINDPHASER
04-02-2002, 12:17 AM
http://cybersoft.mailru.com/gallery/MB/MB_cath8.jpg

MINDPHASER
04-02-2002, 05:53 PM
MB ANIMATION (http://cybersoft.mailru.com/animation/MB.avi)

MINDPHASER
04-02-2002, 06:38 PM
http://cybersoft.mailru.com/gallery/MB/MB_cath6.jpg

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