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D_Caldie
11-03-2002, 08:10 PM
My friend challenged me to make a Photo-Realistic Guitar :airguitar and as i am only 15 and have only been modelling for a few months (Using Cinema 4d) i was unsure how well i'd do, well, judge for yourself here.
I am probably going to turn this into a recording studio, move the camera into the other 'Control' room looking through the glass with reflections of decks etc. in the glass, i may change the floor and walls 2. well, tell me what you think and any tips on improvements would be great, thanks
Hope you like it....
:thumbsup:

(oh, sorry about the Picture quality, i had to reduce to get it under 50Kb as i am useless at uploading etc.)
DeathCarrot
11-03-2002, 08:19 PM
Hi david, good of you to join us :bounce:
V good job, main body shape is excellent, neck is nice and detailed, but the head is a big flat.. and somehow doesnt look like a strat head should. The Laney text somehow doesnt look right, loks, too white.. or summing, and the mic is good enough as its DOFfed. The background looks a bit rushed, but so keeps the guitar and amp as the main objects in the scene.

So.. overall, good work caldie! :airguitar
D_Caldie
11-03-2002, 08:31 PM
Thanks DeathCarrot and i agree with you about all of that really.

oh, He also took up my friends Challenge, and you can see his result here-
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=23528
ok, its a bit better, but he's been Modelling longer, not much, but a few months.
D_Caldie
11-03-2002, 08:38 PM
By the way, when i say 'a bit' i ment alot....
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