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eli
02-22-2002, 05:03 PM
Hi,
My name is Eli, I am new to this forum so I would like to post some images that I have worked on to get your opinions.

I made these a couple of months ago, and I will soon have time to work on the textures.

Thank You.

Snake Man:

http://homepages.picknowl.com.au/erio/snake_man.jpg


Rastafarian/Alien Character

http://homepages.picknowl.com.au/erio/head7.jpg

somlor
02-23-2002, 01:06 PM
Those ears are pretty sweet. I like the Snakeman much better than the Rastafarian Alien which I find aesthetically awkward although the cloth hat with texture looks nice. I think Snakeman's jaw should be open for his tongue to be stuck out like that. As it is now, the tongue looks sort of stuck on there. Look in the mirror and stick your tongue out far like that to get an idea of what to change.

For the Alien, if he is Rastafarian I would make him more half-lidded instead of so bugged out. :cool:

SOMLOR

eli
02-23-2002, 04:19 PM
Thanks for your reply. I think you are right - I will concentrate more on improving the snake man, rather than wasting time with the (not so promising) alien character.

cheers :)
eli

Gilgamesh
02-23-2002, 09:47 PM
Also, the only way that we can tell that the smakeman has a forked tongue is by the shadow. Maybe a different point of view?

eli
02-24-2002, 06:28 AM
gilgamesh, here's another view for ya! :)

http://homepages.picknowl.com.au/erio/snake_man2.jpg

thanks,
eli

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