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alberto86
08-22-2005, 12:19 PM
Hi guyz!
i've started this work yesterday, adding objects and textures (just one...)...
Comments? suggestion? any ideas for improove the scene (is not finished yet...)?
thanks for the help!

http://web.tiscali.it/lovebonsai/images/ristor_1.jpg
Overchord
08-22-2005, 12:22 PM
Great start :thumbsup:
Some things that could liven the scene up a bit would be a picture on the wall, a small flower on the table or such like.
alberto86
08-22-2005, 01:34 PM
yes, in fact i'd like to make some plants, and one of these will go on the table..

by the way, i forget to say that the table is on the street, so it will be an external scene...:)
alberto86
08-23-2005, 01:32 PM
small update... Bye!:)


http://web.tiscali.it/lovebonsai/images/ristor_2.jpg
alberto86
08-25-2005, 05:09 PM
update... the wall texture is not finished yet, and i must add the texture for the plant vase.


http://web.tiscali.it/lovebonsai/images/ristor_3.jpg
alex150ro
08-25-2005, 06:33 PM
cant see nothing...repost the pictures!
brianfon
08-25-2005, 07:11 PM
Looks good, the legs of the table dont fit the scene in my opinion.
alberto86
08-26-2005, 01:11 PM
alex150ro: sorry, but i think that sometimes the website where i upload the images have some problem... but i other people can see the image... :shrug: hope you can see this one...
brianfon: thanks for the suggestion! i'll see if change it or not...

new update:


http://web.tiscali.it/lovebonsai/images/ristor_4.jpg
Overchord
08-26-2005, 01:45 PM
Looking really good - great progress. :thumbsup:
Only crit I have right now is that the floor seems very smooth/flat, and very "clean" dunno if you can make it more irregular or add small stones or such :shrug:
alberto86
08-30-2005, 03:19 PM
update...


http://web.tiscali.it/lovebonsai/images/ristor_end1.jpg
wybl
08-30-2005, 04:11 PM
i dont really know why but the lighting looks very artificial/cg. May be because of the soft shadows. And i really dont like the overall colorsceme.

Improve on the lighting and it will look much better at once.

keep it up
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