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ameermagdy
08-20-2005, 05:08 AM
hi there, I started drawing something with my tablet and reached so far like this, as an underpainting, I want your help, comments, opinions, suggestions and all what you can do with this, it's my 1st time starting with a background, I always go with self portraits, like Enayla self portrait I made 2 months ago, but didnt post it here. http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/9951/enayla1gfx9lk.th.jpg (http://img196.imageshack.us/my.php?image=enayla1gfx9lk.jpg)http://img298.imageshack.us/img298/6958/enawalkhtough5hc.th.jpg (http://img298.imageshack.us/my.php?image=enawalkhtough5hc.jpg)

so tell me what kinda character I can I add, I thought of a girl, but dont know what kinda position could fit here or what kind of expression.

thank you for your co-operation .....

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/3759/wip11cl.jpg

ameermagdy
08-20-2005, 04:51 PM
some progress ... where are u ppl?
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/4183/wip27mm.jpg
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/5917/wip35tj.jpg

ameermagdy
08-20-2005, 07:01 PM
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/9602/wip43yi.jpg
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/5684/wipstock1ti.th.jpg (http://img396.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wipstock1ti.jpg)
http://lucias-stock.deviantart.com

Monster_General
08-20-2005, 07:04 PM
Thats become more nice ... and Enayla is cool too :) and about this forest like place ... you think to give snow details or make a dead forest ?

umbrellasky
08-20-2005, 11:04 PM
This is looking great. I really like teh colours you've used so far, I like the pose of that girl too nice work :)

ameermagdy
08-21-2005, 01:09 AM
Thats become more nice ... and Enayla is cool too :) and about this forest like place ... you think to give snow details or make a dead forest ?

thanks, actually I'm thinking of this painting's subject while working, and I think of both really ( the snow details and a dead forest ) ...

P5
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/5926/wip54ip.jpg

ameermagdy
08-21-2005, 01:12 AM
This is looking great. I really like teh colours you've used so far, I like the pose of that girl too nice work :)


glad you liked it, the girl pose I picked from http://lucias-stock.deviantart.com.

Euphrosyne
08-21-2005, 01:35 AM
You've certainly created a moody desolate atmosphere for this painting. I like the figure, the pose of the legs looks a little tricky to paint. It really looks good so far.

ameermagdy
08-21-2005, 08:46 AM
You've certainly created a moody desolate atmosphere for this painting. I like the figure, the pose of the legs looks a little tricky to paint. It really looks good so far.

thanks Euprosyne :)

ameermagdy
08-22-2005, 12:14 AM
WIP6 http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/4467/wip62ut.jpg
Concept WIP7 http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/9412/wip77oe.jpg

Euphrosyne
08-22-2005, 06:29 AM
Whoa, I never expected that! Is she going to die? She's to young and beautiful to die.

ameermagdy
08-23-2005, 03:01 AM
Whoa, I never expected that! Is she going to die? She's to young and beautiful to die.

dont worry that was a test .:D .. I will let her live :):thumbsup:

Terro
08-23-2005, 03:13 AM
No, please don't let her live. This is very interesting :) I want to watch this scene unlfold.

Euphrosyne
08-23-2005, 04:56 AM
Terro, shame on you!

Ameer, I am waiting to see what happens next, with just a little trepidation.

MichaelZHsee
08-23-2005, 07:00 AM
this is looking real nice,but its abit violent .:scream:having her in coldness yet she's dying..

LordHades
08-23-2005, 07:26 AM
Very nice too bad the girl got it in the end! so sad.:sad:

Monster_General
08-23-2005, 01:01 PM
wow .... slow down ... thats more unjust than my arts ( joke ^_^ ) very cool going ... Keep up , Keep up :thumbsup:

ameermagdy
08-23-2005, 01:32 PM
Hey there guys, thanks for your comments,
now, I'm sure that the girl's life are in your hands (lol) it's seems killing her is ok too...
in GFX forums they were not intrested in the arrow part...
anyways it was a test, but might continue to the final..

I explained this for them : " you're right, I wasnt that sure about that arrow thing, but let me explain why did I leave her pose like this with a killing arrow like this one, the one who pointed that arrow is someone close to her, precious like a lover or a sister... someone very close that she didnt feel the injury that leads to death, but she felt the betrayal of that person .. if you ppl liked this story, I will continue, but if you dont I will remove that arrow and change it to what you suggested or something else....." http://www.gfxartist.com/community/forum/96100?msg=39 (http://www.gfxartist.com/community/forum/96100?msg=39)


anyways, I want to keep the girl unconscious for a while :D and ask you about the background, if I keep it like this, does it need more derails or something???

sorry for not updating, I will soon ...!

Monster_General
08-23-2005, 01:46 PM
Yea , sure ; add more details , like creepy bushs and blood under the girl ... that because girl has bleeding , there must be blood sig in place

LordHades
08-23-2005, 02:15 PM
Whatever you do don;t add any green plants in the scene, it will destroy the feel. But when you are done with the detail maybe you can soften and blend the foreground and background just a touch. I think it'll add some realism to the scene. As for the arrow.... do what you feel is right for your scene, follow your gut and people will love you for it even more than pleasing the masses.

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