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08-18-2005, 08:03 AM
Well, this would be my very first post and thought I maybe show my current wip. Any feed back would be appricaited. I have some minor tweaks left to do and then I'm off to texturing.
I think you should work more on his face. In the side view it looks ok but in the front view his face looks a little strange.
Keep it up!
08-22-2005, 03:35 PM
Front legs are a bit muscular for a lioness mate.
08-22-2005, 03:58 PM
Really nice work, as stated I'd look into the head, still needs a bit of tweaking. Oh and the back paws seem a bit over simple at the moment too.
08-22-2005, 05:35 PM
You really do not see to many "normal" animals here. This is a really nice piece of work. She has power and strength in her pose and build.
Something about her mass just sells me this work. My only suggestion would be to exaggerate the leap by extending her body and her reach a bit. Add some more ferocity to her face and really sell the moment.
I love this piece. Keep showing us more.
08-22-2005, 06:11 PM
as mentioned already,some minor flaws,but still looks great
08-22-2005, 06:18 PM
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