Female Elf

[darkdeathdreame]

Wow demon! nice work, love the eyes especially, sorts of reaches into me *hehe*.

I'm not very good at drawing myself but here's a few things I see that may need a little more work

1) the sideburn, I'd get rid of that few ugly horizontal lines if I were u. Just vertical ones are great.

2) Her right (not our right) eyebrown seems too solid and flat as compared to her left, get wat I mean?

3) I guess the shine on your hair doesn't look that great because u notice that most of the the ends of the whites are rather fat and not sharp.

4) u could try removing the 'U' above the lips (don't know what is the name for that anatomy) it may make her look more feminine.

Just my thoughts. But GREAT work, I couldn't do better :thumbsup:

[darkdeathdreame]

tough luck, looks like you aren't getting any response other than me. But don't give up, perhaps you could draw the entire figure and keep this thread updated.

I'm sure more people will notice it and give their comments.

oh, and I'd love to see some colour on her. sweet:buttrock:

:beer:

[Polygon]

Looks very nice.. Can´t wait to see her in 3d..:bounce:

[Crash]

Haja, nice drawing. I like elvs :love: , especially the females :p .
I would fix the nose a bit coz now it's kinda strange, but maybe you did that intentionally :shrug: , and where are here eye lashes? :eek: :p As I said, very very nice concept. Now make it 3d :beer:

[SyDemon]

Thanks a lot guys! Really needed those feedback, I did not see those flaws with my own eyes.

But just to clarify, what changes would you make to the nose? Can u give me some details? I want her to be as pretty as possible.

Thanks again! Will post updates as they come!:buttrock::D

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