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chipmandoo
08-18-2005, 01:15 AM
Hi, please have a look at my animation, I would consider the main body animation done, but before I move onto the facial animation, I would like some critique.

http://www.chrisbate.com/Capture.mov (900kb, Quicktime S3)

(audio clip from http://www.comet-cartoons.com/ )

I don't know if i should push it a bit more, any suggestions and guidance very much appreachiated.
alex_rial
08-18-2005, 06:52 AM
It looks good so far, maybe add some mouth animation, I like the idea

Later
Alex
adam-crockett
08-18-2005, 07:35 AM
The gesture that he does on "treason" seems like it needs to happen a little earlier.
Tasimasu
08-18-2005, 09:17 AM
nice body movement. its seems ok....
chipmandoo
08-18-2005, 01:26 PM
thanks adam, I moved it back a frame and found it looked better (its amazing how just one frame here and there improves it)

goign to start to work on the facial animation today
chipmandoo
08-19-2005, 09:59 PM
ok, done the facial animation. I would consider the animation complete now, unless anyone can suggest improvements?

www.chrisbate.com/animationfinal.mov

Next I have to work on the shading :(
adam-crockett
08-19-2005, 10:50 PM
HA HA HA! I like it : )

The only thing that jumps out at me is the gesture he does with his hands when he says "pilot". It doesn't read that well. I think the hands should go back behind him, as he leans into the accusitory tone of the word "pilot".

Nice work.






Why is it a key?
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