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Gangstashers
08-17-2005, 04:35 PM
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Title: Final Fantasy, Buster Sword
Name: Sheherryar Javaid
Country: Netherlands
Software: CINEMA 4D

Hi Evryone,


This is my latest work.

It's a fanart from Final Fantasy Advent Children. Since Cloud has so many swords i just modeld one similair to his, but with a little changes.

I was going to texture it difrently, but i did not had enough time to do so i just kept it simple.

Modeling time : 40 minuts
Texturing: 20 minuts


Here are some other perspectives,


http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8300/bustersword2bygangstashers0xl.jpg


http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/1445/bustersword3bygangstashers6gl.jpg



http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/2041/bustersword4bygangstashers3ll.jpg


http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/892/busterswordbygangstashers1yp.jpg



Coments And Crits are always welcome.


Sheherryar
Gangstashers
08-18-2005, 01:54 AM
Doesent anyone have any Coments? or Crits?!
JCFrog
08-18-2005, 07:32 AM
so i just kept it simple.

may be a bit too simple! ;)
Gangstashers
08-18-2005, 01:34 PM
may be a bit too simple! ;)


Can ppl give me some crits then? Why it's to simpel 0_o
Mayan-Seraph
08-18-2005, 10:04 PM
Well, it looks too simple because the foundation shape of the blade and hilt look like they are made of a few polygons. The hilt is a almost a square box even. Also, the edge of the blade looks from my perspective like it's really REALLY thick... I don't know how to kill somebody with such a blunt sword. Try making the edge sharp...
Gangstashers
08-18-2005, 10:21 PM
Well, it looks too simple because the foundation shape of the blade and hilt look like they are made of a few polygons. The hilt is a almost a square box even. Also, the edge of the blade looks from my perspective like it's really REALLY thick... I don't know how to kill somebody with such a blunt sword. Try making the edge sharp...


Thx u for your Crit :)

I will use that to improve my work in the future.

I prever explanation, instead of just: ''MABY TO SIMPLE'' kinde of crap.


Thx


Sheherryar
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