Need Crit quick, its a knockdown anim

[gokuui]

looks great already but you need to show the ball with a little more power to it..

maybe have it come backward some more and loop a little bit...

that or duplicate your chracter so that someone is trowing the ball at him

cheers :)

[SkyePhelps]

The guy is a bit to stiff after landing... you need to have his secondary bouncing like you have the ball bounce... he's not just going to stiffen after hitting the ground and stay glued there... his arms and legs would bounce a couple more times also....

Also the ending stance you have him in is very un-natural... lay down on the ground and see how your legs end up if you are not putting any energy into them... the knees and feet will point outward more... you might even consider having him land with one leg under the other... just a thought :)

[rblitz7]

legs come down too quick after he falls.

[alex_rial]

Its now 8:40pm Pacific Coast time, i need this complete tonight. What do you think I can do to make it better.

I took in consideration what was said so tell me what you think now

Thanks ALex

http://www.rial3d.com/hit002.mov (http://www.rial3d.com/hit002.mov)

[rblitz7]

much better! Nice job!:thumbsup:

[rblitz7]

EDIT: oops double post:eek:

[alex_rial]

3 hours left until I stamp this done and send it off. If anyone is still awake and can offer me any constructive critiwue right now, it would be gratly appreciated

Thanks

http://www.rial3d.com/HIT_almost.mov (http://www.rial3d.com/HIT_almost.mov)

I know its such short notice

alex

[xX_eXiGe_Xx]

Looks good to me! Though the overbody lifts itself somehow when he get shoted and falls back hard and far, but suddenly becomes slow in the air and falls down like if he would weight allot of tons. But that can be because maybe a frame doesn't show between the milisecond.

like it said, it looks OK to me.

[alex_rial]

I sent it off, and hope something comes from this. It was a sort of test.
Tell me what you guys think

later
Alex


http://www.rial3d.com/SOE_KnockDown768K_Stream001.mov (http://www.rial3d.com/SOE_KnockDown768K_Stream001.mov)

[rblitz7]

Nice! Great improvements!:)

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