PA Challenge - Character - Shiu

[jbrophy]

Nice looking so far

Some thoughts I have

Abs look way to small
Maybe want a new idea for the goggles..I think if you look around you will see a lot of that
The tubes going into the neck are a nice overall idea, but need some more detail and should have something at the body where they enter
The rib cage looks a little too thin where it goes up under the arm
The top of the bicep looks odd the way it comes to an end at the pronator and supinator

Hope this helps

[Soeren Nielsen]

Ok thanks for the critique.

Firstly the tubes do not go into the neck, they are just hanging there ATM cause I havent finished them yet :)

I just talked to an old friend of mine and asked him for his critique about the rib cage, and he told me the same thing, so thats one thing Ill look into.

Good point about the biceps, took me some time to figure out what the hell you were talking about tho ;)

Going to work a little on it now

[Soeren Nielsen]

Ok after some problems with my graphics card, everything is working smooth, and Im back on track, Im really counting on finishing this model, including textures, and maybe a little animation before deadline even though I started out pretty late.

Been thinking about a little story for this guy, right now he looks like a future version og Tarzan, but infact hes a wanderer on the now desolated place, called earth. Most people are living underground, because of the bad weather conditions. The skies are eternally dark and its a dusty world, where only the strongest survive on the topside.

Well thats the short story, maybe I will do a little longer story, maybe for a short animation, who knows :D

Going for the evil anonymous look on him, Plates of armor on the legs, and a long leather trenchcoat kinda thing as the main clothing.

However I have no idea what weapon I should give him.
Any suggestions ?
Also should the tubes on the mask go into his body, I should I go for the airtank way. jbrophy gave me the idea of the tubes going into the body, :) but Im not sure..

Anyways, suggestions are very welcome

[Neox]

Where are his balls? :D
this region looks a little flat ;)

[Soeren Nielsen]

Mattell look :P

[Tennis]

hi soeren
great start, hmmm his hands looks a bit small to me.
heh, get some legs on him and lets have another render :)
keep it up.

[Soeren Nielsen]

didnt make the lower part of the legs yet on purpose, cause Im working on some boots.. actually the detail on the legs is not really neccesary, since they will be covered by armor.. just did them to have some reference to model the armor by.
The hands do look a little small now you say it

[Soeren Nielsen]

Ok New update later tonight, I promise, have been very busy with some work I just got, and finished.. odd how it has to come at the last moment..

[Soeren Nielsen]

Had a little crash, so I didnt get any update out.. but here's something new, messing around with some motion designer in LW to make a leather trenchcoat for him, that will be in the next update.
http://www.fainted.dk/characters/PA_Shiu1.gif

And for gods sake give me some more critique, and some ideas.

[Neox]

His legs are definitaly toooooooo short

[pabbloz]

yes,... the legs are short, but all the rest is amazing!! excelent muscles!

The ears seems to be "inside" the head :confused:

The stomach looks a bit square, maybe some more rounded could be better.

But It's a great job!
Did you think about what will be his clothes, weapons...?

He could be a worker inside the earth! (like Total recall, the film of Arnol Swarzzeneger). :)

[Neox]

Heres a picture how you shoul model him (not really exact but a liitle more correct than yours :) )

Body Height (http://www.gfx-scene.de/team/neox/bodyheight.jpg)

[Soeren Nielsen]

Thanks for the replies..

I will tallen him up, as for the ears, they are ok, Its the lighting that makes it look a little weird... heres a closeup :)

http://www.fainted.dk/characters/head_closeup.gif

Got the motion designer stuff working now, so it wont be long before he will look mean, I think Ill finish the mesh today and start working on the textures tomorrow.

[pabbloz]

yes!, the ears are amazing!

[Marc Thomsen]

Nice work there

I like the pants and shoes


Det ligner jo mig lidt... :p

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