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depleteD

08-12-2005, 10:05 PM

I'd just like some feedback,

I'm a 3d guy trying to learn my basics
this is 4-5 hours in painter 9

http://people.uleth.ca/~andrew.melnychukosee/figdrawing/0012-small.jpg

Euphrosyne

08-13-2005, 02:32 AM

Nice start, great shading, I could be wrong but it seems the torso is alittle long. I like the pose. Waiting to see where you go with this.

Euphrosyne

BrittanyRichardson

08-13-2005, 02:52 AM

I love how you're shading this... keep it up. It will look amazing once you're finished.
My only crit is that the figure looks a tad off balance, like she's gonna fall to the left. Maybe if you tilted the torso a tiny bit to the right it might help.

depleteD

08-13-2005, 06:29 PM

Well i'm not confident to finish the feet.
I;m going to go do some feet studys heh.

This is from a photo btw

You guys were right about the torso I fixed that.
also shrunk the forhead, and did some post

http://people.uleth.ca/~andrew.melnychukosee/figdrawing/0012post.jpg

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