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dale22x
08-07-2005, 10:12 PM
Ok a while ago i made this low polygonal woman last week, i kinda liek the concept and i want to add some more stuff on her,..so am making a high polygon version of her. am gonna try to stay under 4000 polygons. so far it's 1060 polygons

This is the original model i made last week

http://www.mustangmods.com/data/6909/finishedwoman.jpg

here is what i have so far for the new version.

UPDATED - look further down

Some wireframes


UPDATED - look further down

It looks to me like the proportions are maybe a bit messed up, but i can't figure out what exactly.

i would preatiate it if some one could make a rough draw over for me ^_^ thx
Robert-Fletcher
08-07-2005, 10:33 PM
i'd try n get the whole figure down it's easier to tell when its all there, the hips could be wider n the breasts look to high but i think that'll look better when she has a neck. the knee caps are also too low
Robert-Fletcher
08-07-2005, 10:58 PM
i think this looks better proportion wise
dale22x
08-08-2005, 01:00 AM
ou,.thanks,..gonna make those changes now
dale22x
08-08-2005, 09:44 PM
Hey ok,..i fixed up some of the stuff you told me,....i can't seem to change the hips,...=/ they look stange no matter what i do to them,...XD...

I also modelled the hands and I am going to start modelling the head now,..

The body feels kinda empty, can you think of any accessories i could add onto her to make it look a bit better,

Update: 2252 tris
http://www.mustangmods.com/data/6909/dina0201.jpg
Robert-Fletcher
08-08-2005, 10:44 PM
hip width varies from person to person so i wouldnt worry. what sorta gal is she? her acsessories should follow this
dale22x
08-08-2005, 11:56 PM
she lives in a mix of futureist/modern and like midevil time....inher world there are like humans,..and then like this other group...mix of different races,...vampires,..shit like that..

they don't get along...now her brother has been taken,..she's going after them....she can use weak spells,...and i am trying to figure out if she should simply get stronger and stranger spell wise as the game goes,..or should she be more of a hand to hand vombat person with just minor spells,....
dale22x
08-09-2005, 02:56 AM
Update:....3020-ish polygons
http://www.mustangmods.com/data/6909/dina0402.jpg
http://www.mustangmods.com/data/6909/dina0401.jpg
Robert-Fletcher
08-09-2005, 08:22 AM
vombat person with just minor spells,....

Lol she projectile vomits on people?

i guess she should carry reagents vials n scrolls n that sorta thing if she's involved in magic, a pack would be handy for a gal on a quest, none of those boring square backpacks tho u see girls these days with loads of different bags choose something that compliments her charecter and suits her look, a bit of light armor might make her interesting even if its just some knee and shoulder pads, try n break away from the sweatshirt n pants look tho :)
-KDX-
08-09-2005, 01:17 PM
her boobs are way 2 big imho...she must have back problems.

-KDX-
the_podman
08-10-2005, 06:45 AM
It went from N-gage to PS2. LoL.


Nice model, but check those proportions on the boobs and pay particular attention to the profile of the body. A very good reference is Anthony Ward's .pdf file on his site, he's got the side view of this type of character nailed pretty well:
http://www.ant-online.co.uk/downloads/ModellingGuide/ModelingTutorial.pdf


-pod
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