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NeverOn
08-07-2005, 08:43 AM
This is my first seriously attempt at coloring in PS. I would love to have some crits on it. I really want to work hard at getting better. Thanks for your time! :)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v232/Never_On/Drawings/Practice.jpg

djtrousdale
08-07-2005, 07:09 PM
Pretty cool! You did the lighting very well, and it has an overall real look.
The only tip I could give you-- her tear ducts stand out. Maybe make them lighter.

Basho
08-08-2005, 06:15 AM
Not bad Neveron. I like the little touch of the reflective light from the shirt hitting her arm.

I would try not to use so much white as a base. You have pretty good brushwork but it gets a little washed out from the immense amount of white. I would at least love to see that back window light have a tint of some color.

Keep on truckin'!

NeverOn
08-08-2005, 07:39 AM
Thanks for the comments.

Yeah, the left arm is definetly the thing I'm happiest with in this piece.
I'll definetly work to make many of the dark lines (especially the tear ducts)... um... blend in? Seem less harsh? I'm not sure how to phrase it at the moment.

I'll also try and add a color to the backwindow light.

Thanks again!

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