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Jokinen
08-06-2005, 04:03 PM
Hello!

I started this one today and have been working on it about an hour and a half. I decided to ask your opinion on it now. Please tell me what to improve and how, I'll also accept ideas considering the concept and other aspects of the image http://www.conceptart.org/forums/images/ca_smilies/normal/anj_smiley.gif I need serious feedback to improve my skills and this artwork.

please tell me what you think of this :

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a237/Anthriel1/batman-thedarkknight.jpg


http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a237/Anthriel1/batmancloseup.jpg

Thanks for your time and opinions :)

-JJ
Jokinen
08-06-2005, 06:20 PM
An Update:

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a237/Anthriel1/gothamcitycopy2.jpg
HimeNoHogosha
08-06-2005, 06:26 PM
i'd say it's looking good so far.. one thing that does bother me is that the eye socket area kinda looks too big.. maybe make the brow part a little lower?
GaryBedell
08-06-2005, 06:31 PM
I love the feel of this piece, the only thing I would do is define the face and body a bit more but the all around look of it.....dont stray away from that
Elsie
08-06-2005, 06:54 PM
Much better with the new background...fantastic mood to this piece! Could we see a higher res version?
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