CGTalk - Character: Soldier

Aeroplane

10-30-2002, 01:30 PM

Hi, this is my second post in this session.:)
I keep trying hard to draw pictures with my own style these days. I hope there are improvement on my drawing...
Do give me your comments, thx!:beer: :rolleyes: :p

http://album.viafriend.com/%5Cphoto%5Cperson%5C5975%5C5975852%5C273588291.JPG

slime

10-30-2002, 01:36 PM

Hi!

Nice picture.
I like the pose and mood, but not the expression of the face. The thing I think it hurts a lot the composition is the white background (paper) and the strong black shadows. Try to paint over a darker background for these kind of pictures and also try to put more detail on shadows. I think the picture would become better!

Regards! :)

Daniel.

Aeroplane

10-30-2002, 03:43 PM

Thanks for you comments, slime.:)
I agree with u. There are problems with the coloring, :shrug: And the lines make the picture look so rough..:p
Whatever,I need more experience..:p

by the way, I like you works, slime.:thumbsup:

Aeroplane

10-30-2002, 03:46 PM

This is the draft one...:wip: :wip:

http://album.viafriend.com/photo/person/5975/5975852/272564353.JPG
:p :p

Sir_jet

10-30-2002, 03:50 PM

i like it:)

the face is a little too feminine (i don`t know any seal who looks like hes about to pucker up in full gear :eek: )

but keep at it, :wip: :wip:

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