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danimat0r
10-30-2002, 08:02 AM
It's kinda daunting posting on a forum with so many awesome artists, but what the hey. :)

A design I tinkered around with today in various stages, before turning it into this guy here. Constructive crit. welcome.

..and now it's not letting me reload the attachment. Neat. Are attachments disabled after you edit a post once?
Sir_jet
10-30-2002, 04:31 PM
good ideas there man. lots of interresting ideas. i like the armor overlap, it looks a japonese/dutch mix ;)

i would advise you work on your basic anatomy though. the right elbow is stomach churningly twisted :eek: and the body seems stiff.


try doing some action lines the next sketch you do.



:beer: look forward to your next piece
danimat0r
10-30-2002, 06:15 PM
Good points on all counts. :buttrock: Thanks a lot for the feedback! I noticed the stiffness in particular well after I was finished and it was submitted, but it's funny how you don't notice these things yourself until you decide to show other people. :scream:
danimat0r
10-31-2002, 02:12 AM
A 'feminized' version of similar design.

Huh.

Would it be better to start a new thread for this? Oh well. Here it is. :)
fireman
10-31-2002, 06:10 AM
your drawing sure got style! jus need a little bit working in the proportions. nonetheless good job!:thumbsup:
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