Character :::Future Soldier:::

[Gamoron]

I like it! No crit. Now lets see some colour!

[Najd]

Hey, nice work there, I like the pose and the uniform. :beer:

Maybe you could improve a little the head, it's the only think that bothers me a little. the rest is just perfect.

[Neil]

Are you sure you got this 'idea' while in class, or just from any of the hundereds of anime characters that look like that? Spriggen perhaps?

[jeroentje]

Thumbs up for Metalkid :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
This would look great colored, with a nice reflection of the character in the water.
Cheers, Jeroentje :beer:

[loganx3d]

Originally posted by Neil
Are you sure you got this 'idea' while in class, or just from any of the hundereds of anime characters that look like that? Spriggen perhaps?

Hehe... interesting, but I can see both sides to the argument.

Anyway, I think the torso is a bit too long, and the crotch area in particular looks too much in front of his body.

Speaking of the crotch, why is there no armour there? Maybe it's just me, but if someone's going to be putting that much armour on their arms and hands, why not at least minimal protection for more sensitive areas?

Still, I love the clean look of this piece; the gun looks very sleek. Something about how he's holding it, and his right arm, looks a bit off... if I were carrying a heavy gun by the handle-and-trigger area, I would want a bit more support, by placing it closer to the chest or using the other hand to support it.

[METALKID]

:) :)
Thanx for all of your advice,my friends
actually,i think my work has nothing special indeed,just like what Neil said :
"Are you sure you got this 'idea' while in class, or just from any of the hundereds of anime characters that look like that? Spriggen perhaps? "
thousands of artists do their works all day long,though i'd tried to made my soldier to looks more special,however,it is no wonder that u feel he is a bit similar to some other animie characters,but that won't stop my creative idea :) i'd like to keep on drawing my own! i love painting

i will start to colour this work now,but i'm not sure if it will be that cool after that(i'm not confident with my skill~hehe,it's quite different between sketch it)

and to loganx3d:
thanx for ur advice,i've think of that before,LOL,i will put on some amour next time.at the beginning,his left hand was surpporting the gun,but finnally i decided to change it,'cuz i think that will be more good,and the weight about that gun...hmm,maybe there will be some new material in the future,the new material might be very light,its atomic order has been changed...it's only my suppose ;)

[METALKID]

;)
Hi,there,here is my work tonight
and i will keep on going with this work,it has not been finished yet
i wanna add more details

[Norante]

Nice anime feeling.

It could use some more color and lighting (it's dark), but I like it anyway.

Good job:)

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