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Oink
07-30-2005, 07:24 PM
Hey there. Im on a roll. Been doign quite a few things these last few days... Anyway. Im currently working on this little fella.

Jello-like material. Can transform his body so the weapon you see is part of him. He will be see-through as you can see on some places. If something doesnt look transparent, dont worry. It will be :)

A few things i know about at the moment: Leg looks bad, Weapon will be made smaller, The "vats"/"tubes" will be made laaaarger. Maybe just 2-3 big ones.


Anyway, Im very green (heh) on drawing. Only using a mouse as of now and photoshop. Limited shading knowledge and such so if someone feels like being harassed by a thousand questions, Please PM me :)


Im currently working on the gun, Cleaning it up and such. Trying to get a design i like :)
http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload4/Slimegubbe4.gif

(two colored dots to the right is the colors i use as of now, Dont mind them ;) )


Another weapondesign... still not happy, Probably gonna go with a "roundish" one
http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload9/Slimegubbe4b.gif
Oink
07-31-2005, 01:19 PM
Well i dont really think i'll get any replies (woe is me) but here is an update. Finally decided what the arm should be like.

Gotta change the hand though.


Now i have a problem. I completely utterly suck at shading and light... Anyone know of any good tutorials out there? Im gonna try to give him the wet shiny look on some places.

http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload9/Slimegubbe6.gif
http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload9/Slimegubbe6.gif
Erikoinen
07-31-2005, 02:22 PM
Well, my harsh crits:
The left hand is too small but the arm looks good and it doesn't look like if it was _really_ gripping his right arm. The right arm needs more refining, it doesn't have any shape like hands usually do. But the right hand looks kinda cool 'cause it's so big and that's what you were after I think. The hand just needs a bit more refining.

His other belt (the lower one) just don't seem to fit there, it can't go straight if it's over the left leg. I'd remove it since I see it unnecessary. His pants' colours look good!

And also his pose.. He looks like he is falling on his back, his balance is too much on his left side and the shoes/feet seems that they are not on the floor, like he's flying. Move the tips of the shoes upper so it looks a bit more like he's really standing. And altogether his pose looks too stiff..

Sorry for not giving much advices on how to fix them 'cause I don't have that much experience myself when it comes to human bodies.

Keep on going. :)
Oink
07-31-2005, 02:43 PM
Well, my harsh crits:
The left hand is too small but the arm looks good and it doesn't look like if it was _really_ gripping his right arm. The right arm needs more refining, it doesn't have any shape like hands usually do. But the right hand looks kinda cool 'cause it's so big and that's what you were after I think. The hand just needs a bit more refining.

His other belt (the lower one) just don't seem to fit there, it can't go straight if it's over the left leg. I'd remove it since I see it unnecessary. His pants' colours look good!

And also his pose.. He looks like he is falling on his back, his balance is too much on his left side and the shoes/feet seems that they are not on the floor, like he's flying. Move the tips of the shoes upper so it looks a bit more like he's really standing. And altogether his pose looks too stiff..

Sorry for not giving much advices on how to fix them 'cause I don't have that much experience myself when it comes to human bodies.

Keep on going. :)Thanks for the crits ;)

Yeah i know the hand is messed up, Hate them hands :P. Will work on it though ;)
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