THE COMIC STRIP! : "AGNUS & LUPI"

[Erikoinen]

Hehhe, seems nice. :)

[GOTgraphic]

Thanks Erikoinen :cool:


[edit: putting all the installments in the edited first-post in this thread]

[duddlebug]

Good to see you back! I really enjoyed the last bunch of strips in the lab... the animated versions were fun too.

And this is a brand new strip! Isn't the sheep a little disadvantaged? Or is he a particularly tough sheep?

[GOTgraphic]

Thanks Duddlebug! Yes he's one ba-aa-d sheep (sound pun intented :D )! Just check out his huge hand-hoofs... I would hate to get hit by those :D :D :D

[GOTgraphic]

Oh yeah, and Agnus likes to hide lots of things in his wool... like baseball bats, anvils and stuff like that :wip:

[Ilikesoup]

I love it! The old cat vs. mouse and cat vs. dog thing has been done to death.

I especially like Agnus' Hoof of Doom! :twisted:

[GOTgraphic]

Thanks Ilikesoup :cool:

I especially like Agnus' Hoof of Doom! :twisted: The "Hoof-of-Doom" :applause: I like :thumbsup:

[GOTgraphic]

Installment #2 is online :)

[RobertoOrtiz]

Hi
Any word on updates?
-R

[GOTgraphic]

I'm working on it :thumbsup: Should have installment #3 up before Sunday :cool:

I was attempting to introduce a new character and it threw me off track. Now I'm backtracking... I keep trying to do too much and end up buried and bewildered. I'm going for a minimalist approach so I won't get distracted and so I can polish it and then take on more. Hope that made sense. :cry:

[GOTgraphic]

Installment #3 is online :)

Enjoy.

[ceresz]

nice job i love em!:thumbsup:

[GOTgraphic]

Thanks Skurai :cool:

Now I have to do the typical spelling check on the panels... heh

[Ilikesoup]

Um. . . they sure fight a lot, don't they?:rolleyes:

I'd like to see longer story arcs -- like maybe a get rich quick scheme that nearly works. Build up some suspense and THEN it all falls apart because they start a fight. If they just fight at the end of each 3-panel strip it will get stale. No crits on the art, though. That's always great. :thumbsup:

[GOTgraphic]

Thanks Ilikesoup

Um. . . they sure fight a lot, don't they?:rolleyes:

Yes, I needed to establish the fact that they fight at the drop-of-a-hat. :D :wip:


I'd like to see longer story arcs...Hmm, yes... I think I'm actually working on that... though I'm not sure... heh. I have this big picture in my head but I need to hash it out (I can actually write fairly well as I did good in all my English classes in college... but I always had to get the professor to help me sort through my tangled mind... I think I need to put my head in a vice and squeeze it real tight like :D). Sigh, this is what kills me every time... the story. They sort of happen as I draw.

I'll see what I can do :)

[GOTgraphic]

UPDATED... installement#004 is online. :)

[GOTgraphic]

UPDATED... installement#004 is online. :)
I modified "installment #4". The jump in dialog between panels #2 and 3 was too great in the original. Therefore I moved panel #2 to the #3 spot and created a new #2 panel to make a better bridge between #1 and 3.

Now the punch-line from #2 is at #3 position and works much better, I think.

Thats all.

[GOTgraphic]

I've been working on character design as I received some criticism from a local. There was some disdain that the sheep's feet were not cloven and that the wolf only had an upper body and a cape. I explained that the "cape" were his overalls but it did not fly. I worked up some cloven feet for Agnus, but as much as I attempted to square off Lupi's feet, I couldn't be satisfied... so his feet stay minimalistic. :p

Here are the latest character turns:
http://gotgraphic.com/AGNUSandLUPI/IMAGES/Turns20050830AgnusAndLupi.gif

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