Abandoned, Robin Hoover (3D)

[niva]

I like it, especially for a exercise/test, no crits from me.

[rawwad]

Very good exercise:thumbsup:

Texures are fantastic, but most I like atmosphere:)

[Ultimatum]

The window glass is too bumpy, even if it´s supposed to be very old glass.
It looks now like it´s raining heavily against the windows.

I like how the ceiling looks like.


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[anadrogena]

Nice nice! As said above, especially the atmosphere!
The right wall door area are great!

[cesarmontero]

I said it once, and I'll say it again!

I love that exit door!! :)

[williamwonka]

The ground is a bit too reflective and uniform for me. "Dirty" should be in spots. For example, you can make the columns "sit" better on the ground by putting some dirt where the columns meet the ground (same with wall corners)

[MooseDog]

glad it's been well received. critiques are much appreciated, as to sit still is to fail.

thx again!!

[maxlover]

good work and also agree with:williamwonka

[ls8275]

http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/46563/46563_1122386848_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/46563/46563_1122386848.jpg)

Title: Abandoned
Name: Robin Hoover
Country: USA
Software: LightWave 3D, Photoshop

This image is mainly an exercise in texturing. Most arch work tends to be so clean, I wanted to do something "dirty" :). I hope the lighting gets across some kind of creepy-ish mood as well, while avoiding the ubiqutous volumetric light shining thru the window effect.

Critiques appreciated, thx for taking a look!


>> Hi resolution image << (http://www.mdogstudios.com/private/room_dark_large_000_final.png)
not bad
i like it

[vivien82]

very nice, it makes me think of where degas' ballerina's used to dance.

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