My Animation Demo Reel

[malfunkshun]

I'm not much for mincing words, so I'll just say what I mean. I think your body movements border on weird for the father character. Is he supposed to be dancing? It looks as though he is dancing in the first few scenes. A lot of your characters movements end abruptly. I think you should work on making your character motions appear more natural and flowing. I found myself watching some movements and wondering for a second what you were trying to communicate before realizing "oh, he's pointing" or "oh, she's stamping her foot". Some of the camera motions started and ended abruptly also. You should use in/out values for your animations that start smoothly and end smoothly. I think this has a long way to go before being industry quality, but I can also appreciate the effort put into it. Personally I wouldn't consider this "completed" but would continue working on it until it is of industry quality.

[(DARKELEMENT)]

I love this work. The one thing, if your up to re-editing it,would be the letters specifically your name. I understand that you were going for this effect how-ever it make it very hard to read. Again great work:thumbsup:

[frye]

Nice work. But what are you concentrating on in this demo reel animation, modeling, or other?

[stephen2002]

If you want to post your demo reel, please post a direct link to it (or at least to the page that it is on) so that we don't have to wander through your entire site to get to it.

Anyway, it was pretty good, hard to tell what the storyline was. The picture frame could use some beveling. All of the movements were VERY exagerated and abrupt, not really what you would want to have.

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