this is my first 3d max model........anyone?

[-Vormav-]

The anatomy of the legs looks off. Judging from the first pic, it looks like her knees are pointed inwards at a pretty extreme angle, which is rather awkward.
In general, I'd suggest getting a couple references to use to check the proportions. There's a very strange mix in the build of the character going on; ex: extremely muscular legs, vs. what you have going on below the rib cage.

[Kanga]

The best idea would be to post in 3d stills wip forum. The project is general and not really 3dmax based.

Lookin good though.

[whatauva]

tank tanga and varmov

[cschandramouli]

Whatauva, the lines in your model don't flow smoothly. Between two edges, the vertices seems as if they're jerked out of their path... Fix it and the model would be fine...

[grundelboy]

Looks like you were looking at 3 diffrent referance images when you were modeling this. I'd recomend using one consistant referance model in the realworld and duplicate it exactly in 3d. I'd use photographs for the anatomy.

[whatauva]

i was using just one reference photo and was thinking to make her a litter muscular as a female warrior ( grundelboy )



I am trying hard to keep up but i know the is not bad for my first time and with ya i'll get better i n this 3d world .
more over, where i am from there is no 3d school and i don't even have friends the do 3d modeling , ya r the only friends that i have the do 3d .

i am trying to make her more smother but i realy don't understand what you mean cschandramouli cuase i am new 3d artist !sorry!

by the way letme introduce my self my name is Jose Aguiar
leave in the Dominican Republic
and my e English in not so good
i been usin 3d max for not so long

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