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Gotham
10-28-2002, 01:22 AM
Hi

Ok, this is the pick which I promised in my WIP:

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&postid=212582

BTW. This pick is end (maybe not), of this series.

It's dedicated to blankslatejoe, cafargo and Dr-spline who help me a lot there. ;)

I draw it in Photoshop 7.0 :arteest: , but earlier I make references in 3ds Max using Character Studio Doll (this full of colors bone system), then I look many times to the medical book when I draw her (without it I can't draw her so good (in my opinion)). Hihi, it's a lot of fun. :)

Any comments are welcome, but remember I draw main ideal... Hlip, maybe because I'm lonely now... Where can I find this kind of girl? (BTW, I'm not romantic!)

Now, ENJOY.
Gotham
10-28-2002, 04:48 PM
No comments? Why?

You have nothing to say about my work?

I know it?s not perfect, but it?s not terrible. I think?

Hmmm, I hope you do not comment only because she?s naked? It?s silly.
farukp
10-28-2002, 05:41 PM
nice work, i would love to be so talented...

cya
Abe
10-28-2002, 05:57 PM
Love the face not so sure about the ribs though 8 out of ten:bounce:
CactusJack
10-28-2002, 06:27 PM
nice...i would too like to be as talented someday...
show us more:bounce:
Upstart
10-28-2002, 06:35 PM
Truely amasing anatomy study, and her face is really nice.. Awesome work..

Some crit though.. The feet don't look too good, I'm aware of that the feet are really hard to draw.

And her skin is a bit blemmish.. :)

GG :thumbsup:
blankslatejoe
10-28-2002, 07:09 PM
hey gotham, nice work, sorry I didn't see this thread until just now. good work, looks like you had fun drawing her ;)

The only thing that seems ackward to me are the bottoms of the feet. They seem a little flat, when it almost looks like the pinky toes should be raised up more, practically off the ground..

Otherwise, nice work! and thanks for dedicating it me me and the guys! I feel honored!!!!
lildragon
10-28-2002, 07:25 PM
Good study, here are a few things I noticed

- her feet for one need improvement, especially the bottoms and the placement of her toes

- the ribcage is to exaggerated for a woman of her stature, makes her look anorexic "only" in that area, make them more subtle and not as thick

- The navel seems to be too low from this pic, bring it up a bit more

- The pose gives me a feel she should have both feet on the ground unless she's jumping, the way you drew it, her left foot is not at the same level as the right

- I dunno maybe it's just me but her breasts seem to far apart, but that might be me

- the nipples, heh they're a bit to high on the breasts, even tho they're small

- She has no evidence of collar bones

Her face is very nice, very cute and conveys the pose nicely :thumbsup:

other than that :thumbsup:

hope this is of some help

salud
Gotham
10-29-2002, 05:19 PM
Hi

Thanks for comments!

Farukp and CactusJack: You must have fun in it. Without it, it's very hard to make good picture. Btw you can find some additional works in wip (link in first post).

Upstart: feet... Yes it's my Achilles point... :rolleyes: But I think now it look's better. And about blemish effect, hmmm maybe it's because I don't like to blurred artworks... Maybe you're right but I like crop effect.

Blankslatejoe: Better? Nice to see you here. I go to your selfportrait! And give comment for sure.

Lildragon: You was very helpful Mr. I think feet, navel, collar bones and ribcage now looks better. Breast and nipples looks like that because I rotate her to her back for some degrees... But if you don't see it... I draw it bad... Blah, but haw to draw it look haw I wont? Hmmm... I don't know (now).

Here an update. I think comments are still needed!
CactusJack
10-29-2002, 10:51 PM
Just checked out your wip, you've got a good thing going on:bounce:
blankslatejoe
10-30-2002, 04:23 AM
looking MUCH better, lildragon was right about the ribs and collar. good work on the ribs, they look really nice now!

You might want to go even darker a little with the clavicle/collar, but that's your call, it's great either way! Do more more more!!
Jason-Kane
10-30-2002, 04:33 AM
Her vagina looks seriously injured. Is that genitallia or a wound?
LordShaitan
10-30-2002, 05:56 AM
The feet dont look pleasing witht he both facing forward. Looks to un-natural.
typeA
10-30-2002, 11:33 AM
good start but her crotch does lok like an axe wond and the area where the leg conects to the body looks wrong
HapZungLam
10-30-2002, 04:57 PM
the outline, face and the proportion looks fantastic. You just need to touch up the shadings.
Abe
10-30-2002, 05:46 PM
Yes i have to agree she is almost perfect but her vigina does look like wishful thinking she is cut to high up perhapse some hair would help? but still love her face to bits:applause:
Dirk_P_Ho
10-30-2002, 08:04 PM
I was waiting for someone to comment on the groin area.... :D
Mamimi
10-30-2002, 08:08 PM
Good improvements!! You did a great job on this. I give you major props! :buttrock:
Gotham
10-30-2002, 08:10 PM
Hi

Thanks for comments!

CactusJack, Mamimi: Thanks. :)

Blankslatejoe: I make an update tomorrow, maybe some quick draws... Who knows.

Jason Kane, Abe and Dirk_P_Ho: ??? Hmmm, maybe... I smooth this region... Or something.

LordShaitan: Feet, I know... I'm must make some additional draws of only this region in many poses... Blah, it's hard to draw a feet.

TypeA: Ok, I fix it. Thanks

HapZungLam: Shading... I'm already learning to use Painter 7 (I know, problem is in my abilities, not the programs, but in learning Painter I learn haw to shade). But, yes I know what do you talking about...

I haven't got time to draw today, but I think tomorrow I end this one, and maybe some new stuff (but only parts, not full person). Maybe some motion? Hihi, I try.
blankslatejoe
10-30-2002, 08:42 PM
goodluck! :)
Gotham
10-31-2002, 05:37 PM
Big plans...

I haven?t got time... And only end this one.

Sorry, bye!
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