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arowana

07-21-2005, 02:07 PM

Princess Rang-RAng
http://www.indocg.com/images/arowana/putri.mov (http://www.indocg.com/images/arowana/putri.mov)

(only 1 MB)

http://www.indocg.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=3858 (http://www.indocg.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=3858)
(for screenshot ,wires )

please take a look
the whole thing took a month
2 weeks to design, 2 weeks to model and render.
no poser . everything original.
I did this for a competition .there's time limit.
the theme is about a game character showing her special move.

C & C are most welcome.

is the idea good enough?? :)

Delucubus

07-21-2005, 07:42 PM

It looks great so far. I would definately simplify the camera movement though, it distracts from the animation. I think the idea is awesome!

njanim8tor

07-23-2005, 04:49 PM

Looks pretty good. The only thing that caught my eye was there isn't any anticipation of her body movement in the opening. She lunges forward in a bit of an awkward manner. Hope this helps. Otherwise, I like it a lot.

Lambchopo

07-24-2005, 04:13 AM

I like the shooting of the bow. Looked natural. However there were a few things that caught my attention.

The camera distracted the animation.
Her upper torso seemed stiff during the charge and spin.
Could add a little more follow through after spin.
Her weight felt wierd during the charge and walking forward when right foot crosses over left. (didnt feel like her legs were underneath her).

Hope that helps.

arowana

07-25-2005, 05:27 AM

gee, thanks guys. Lucky u guys aren't the jury for the competition. :) I've won the first prize. there's no time to fix and I just submited it. haha. maybe next time I'll do a better one.

thanks for ur guys oppinion. u guys awesome! please give me comment again for my next WIP soon .

Thanks once again!.

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