Redeemed & Fallen, WIP

[luciferous]

one thing you could do to liven it up a lil would be to strengthen the highlights, because at the moment it is looking a little flat, Ilike the pastely style to your drawing, work with the soft focus it creates and enphasis the dream like quality it can bring add more highlight and maybe play around with some glows?

[ozhaver]

Well for now I would try to fix the wings a bit, take in consideration the general anatomy of bird wings. As for the face, the eyes are off balance on the auburn haired one. ;-) The neck could be more feminine too.

[theteuton]

I think the first character (red winged) needs some work on her lips, they look a little too tense. I like the way you painted the shirt on the darker character. I'd like to see how this turns out.

[PerfectBlue]

Pointed out a few areas which needed adjusting...
-Both girl's necks were not proportionate
-Left girl's color bones were misaligned
-Right girl has only 1 wing
-left girls right eye is not lined up right, and it touching the edge of the face (which it shouldn't)
-The right girls shirt mixes too perfectly with the shadow on the arm, it really confuses the area. Her arm's shadow should not be so strong.
http://www.desearch.net/out.php/i8934_00008b9g.jpg

Hope that helps a bit. :)

[Mistiannyi]

Thanks all for the advice!
Just one thing I forgot to point out in the first post, the girl on the right is supposed to only have one wing (story thing, you'd be bored if I posted it all, I think).

An extra thanks to Lord Blue for pointing out those things so clearly, exactly what I needed.
Back to photoshop, I'll be back with an update.

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