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JeffPerryman
07-15-2005, 03:53 AM
Well I have had my ego bash about on some other boards and with lots of great advice got this young lady this far. Now I submit her to you guys for some feed back on makeing her even better! ;)

Here is the concept which I am very loosly following:
http://home.austin.rr.com/jeffperryman/wen.jpg

And here is where I am at now:
http://home.austin.rr.com/jeffperryman/Wen09a.jpg

I am working in Max 7.0 with Poly edit and Mesh Smooth.

Thanx for taking a look.
chenga
07-15-2005, 06:17 AM
Hello there!

Well, I got some comments; I know this is gonna be a cartoony sexy babe, however I feel that her collarbones and boobs are not right. The boobs seem to be grow out on top from the collarbone, thus tend to look weird and not natural.

And, from the sideview, her cheekbone looks abit to high up and sharp. Maybe you could make it more rounded and flow out more to join the mouth.

The rest is fine :)

Cheers!
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