Character: women face

[toma]

Hi MaskTX,

I'd say it's not bad for a first human face, but maybe you should use some anatomical references. The lips are a little bit too wide for me, the nose needs more definition.

Do you intend to model her realistically ?

toma.

[MaskTX]

Hi! Thnx, but i prefer stilistic look, i dont realy wanted to attend realism.

[Burkmat]

I like the style, but the hair looks WAAAY to un-attatched.

[MaskTX]

Thx Burkmat. I want to remake her hairs tomorow. I will update it .

[LordShaitan]

stilistic look is awsome, but you need to learn how to make a realistic head or anything else before you can say "stylize" it. Other wise you can make some blob and say its a stylistic head. You say you stylized it when all i see are anatomical errors. Where the nose connects with the face the part with the upper lip, it comes out, wher as it would be going in a little bit.

I also have to agree with toma about the lips.

And is there reflection on the face?

[Stonepilot]

I have to agree with this guys right now its just kind of weird looking.. But the upside of this is that it can only get better. ANd just faces or anything human is just so hard to make it look good cuase we're so used to seing them. Good luck.

[Gotham]

Hmmm, model... Look here http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=25343

This is good model...

[PNelson]

Cool Image!

Everything doesn't have to be photo real and proportional. ;->

See Ya,
Philip Nelson

[arjun]

Lookin good, but I think the cheekbones should extrude a bit more and be a little lower. But I'm not an expert:)

[MaskTX]

:) Hi.
You know, some things i cannot remake, maybe i just dont want it, because i have completed it (for me) . Surely i don't like this work very much, because there are many great talented artists and maybe they think "what this guy doing here , maybe he wants we applause him and say Yea! This is great stuff man:) . "
But i dont realy waiting for it. I Publiced this work as my kind of start point in 3d :) And Sorry for my words that it is a stilistic look, because i really wanted to create realistic girl with shining hairs and other sympotic stuff , but i need much time to make something realy good ya know, Pascal Blanche gives monthes to his works , and i gived only 4-5 days to this bad looking girl :wavey: don't know what to say.. Sorry again! Bie!:beer:

[MaskTX]

Ou yes, i forgot, LordShaitan there is a little reflection on her face.
:D

[spoonMan]

For your first face, its good, but as you already know it doesn't look that good. The thing I would say is get your proportions right. The lips are WAY to big. The eye sockets are too long as well. Its great for a first start but keep going. Keep practicing and im sure you will improve.

[Abe]

MaskTX dont be dishartened i like her apart from her nose as people have said for first time its a good effort well done:applause:

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