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twixeeer
07-11-2005, 04:57 PM
Hey, here's my first post at CG.

Well, this is a pretty much finished piece of art from me. But I thought Id post it here anyway to get some creative critism. Maybe you could share some techniques too, since I'm not so experienced with my wacom. ;)

http://u188409.webhosting.tant102.mine.nu/work/hummingbird_1.jpg

BrittanyRichardson
07-11-2005, 05:09 PM
It looks nice. I like the texture on the hummingbird and the illusion of the wings fluttering.

My only suggestions would be to highten some areas of the piece by deepening some of the shadows - adding more darks. It might also help unify the piece by adding some slight shades of red into the humming bird and green into the flower, like in the shadows. Maybe also blur some of the sharp edges on the parts of the flower that are farther away from the viewer.

Overall, It's a lovely piece. Keep up the good work, and continue posting stuff for us to see. :)

twixeeer
07-11-2005, 06:36 PM
thx for the tips Brittany, I appreciate it! :)

twixeeer
07-13-2005, 10:40 PM
Here ya got it in Hi-res (http://u188409.webhosting.tant102.mine.nu/work/hummingbird_2.jpg)!

Comments/thoughts?,
Take care!

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