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Veseliy
07-11-2005, 08:05 AM
Hello, im working on it for a couple of days, its a semi-commercial project(yeah it sounds funny, but it truth, i wont get money on it), and i need to fix all mistakes, so c&c a more than welcome http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/smile.gif Feel free to point on my mistakes http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/wink.gif

im sorry about links, i had troubles with display it right here, cuz [img] tag is not working... :(
www.chapaev.fromru.com/1.jpg (http://www.chapaev.fromru.com/1.jpg)
www.chapaev.fromru.com/2.jpg (http://www.chapaev.fromru.com/2.jpg)
www.chapaev.fromru.com/3.jpg (http://www.chapaev.fromru.com/3.jpg)
www.chapaev.fromru.com/4.jpg (http://www.chapaev.fromru.com/4.jpg)
www.chapaev.fromru.com/5.jpg (http://www.chapaev.fromru.com/5.jpg)
www.chapaev.fromru.com/6.jpg (http://www.chapaev.fromru.com/6.jpg)

and excuse me for my english, its so bad... http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

Veseliy
07-14-2005, 03:14 AM
Hi again, ive cutted some free time and done a little bit on it. Im not familiar with mr materials, actually its my first mr shading network... :) c&c are welcome :)
ah, dont look at brakes, i forgot to hide it :)


http://chapaev.fromru.com/bmw_1.jpg

http://chapaev.fromru.com/bmw_2.jpg

http://chapaev.fromru.com/bmw_3.jpg

maul
07-14-2005, 06:50 AM
It looks pretty good to me

Veseliy
07-14-2005, 11:00 AM
Thanks, maul :)

btw, can anybody suggest me some tuning tips on rimm material, i mean i need to do smth like this:
http://www.tirerack.com/wheels/DisplayWheel.jsp?wheelMake=Borbet&wheelModel=Type+VS&wheelFinish=Bright+Silver+Paint

ive no idea how to it :sad:
just point a way i need to move, i dont ask for a detailed numbers :)
may be i need a light with no diffuse(only specular) casting?
now there is no lights in my scene, and no GI, only FG.
Any help r more than welcome

Lopatin
07-14-2005, 08:22 PM
the modeling is great
i would love to see it with some sweet decals and maybe a dirt map.http://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/thumbsup.gif

Veseliy
07-15-2005, 02:47 AM
Hm, i never even thought that my modelling can be great :)
Thanks ;)

First, it will be a car for advertise decals(or vinils), so it wil be a studio render(at least i want to achieve it :)) without any dirt map
And second i want to do a car with dirt maps to improve my render skill, and to know MR better

Veseliy
09-07-2005, 05:47 AM
Hi all!

sorry for not updating, but i had some serious problems with health(one tree fall on me :) )

and i was not able to do anything, but now im ere, waiting for your critics
it was rendered with mr, here is more than 500,000 faces(except NURBS, parts of course)

See ya!

Scotcho
09-07-2005, 06:27 AM
ooh really nice job. Shame about the tree incident, good to see you're back in shape for some modeling. Looks really good.. but maybe a bit more contrast in the paint job (more darker areas). Thats all I can see, nice work!

Veseliy
09-12-2005, 07:44 AM
thanks man, thats what im thinking about, look at this, maybe this will be more attractive?

here's another update
http://chapaev.fromru.com/bmw_red.jpg

the_beginner
09-12-2005, 08:08 AM
Really nice work, man!!
Could you say me how youve done the lighting? I love the white reflections on your car..
but i dont know how to make them ;)

Veseliy
09-13-2005, 07:23 AM
well, it was made with Facing ratio utiility and a ramp, i attached some images, i think ull understand what ive done

feel free to ask:)

EricNY
09-13-2005, 12:01 PM
Yo very nice Work. I hate BMW but your WIP is really great. I hope you can sell it for very much money :bounce:

Eric G.

marni
09-13-2005, 12:25 PM
great work

Avaranger
09-23-2005, 10:01 AM
I am very unhappy to say so, but the render is missing something. I don't like to criticise without any reason, but ... It's all done in very good way, great modelling skills, etc. BUT! It lacks atmosphere and soul to me. Some nice details.

And one mistake I've found. Not sure if it is a mistake, but... the downer part of front bumper, where the grill is. The grill should be bended outwards, don't you think so?

Really no offense :buttrock: peace!

edit: I've looked at your pic for some time... there is a lack of plastic parts. (plastic on the front bumper, right under the lights, ...(not sure if M3 has it, but it would IMHO help)

Veseliy
09-23-2005, 11:59 AM
Thanks, man :)


seem youre right about grill on the front bumper, ill fix it.

about plastics: m3 doesn't have plastics on fron bumper.

and i havent done atmosphere coz i was need to make a studio render, to make an advertisment, as i said above.

see ya!

teishu
10-22-2005, 08:28 PM
Very realistic, well done :)

Svenni
10-22-2005, 09:59 PM
i see what the problem is... its the fresnel channel/ramp on the reflection.. its completly inverted... turn it around.. and dont go completely from black to white.. but dark gray and light gray... hope u see what i mean.. but omg this is some very skilled modeling =D

maikeul
01-17-2006, 01:03 PM
Hey, your M3 is looking very nice, nice modelling etc....
You have asked for some critics....you will have some.
Firstly, I havent noticed the "bump" on the hood of the car. Maybe youve put it, but i couldnt distinguish it...you know, its the place which covers the engine. The M series only have that bump. You can find it on every M and not a normal BMW.
Secondly, your interiour, I have noticed that youve put some bucket seats (Recardo no?) ....but...im afraid that only the CSL version. Those seats have much bigger "vents" in the seats, and are much lower in the body of the car.
Thirdly...your rims.....i think you wanted to a "pimped" version....but the your chassis position is much higher then the normal version. How about placing the original rims? I think those are much more impressive....

Ill keep following this thread....keep the good work flowing!

Take care!

Veseliy
01-18-2006, 02:19 AM
maikeul
Thanks, man! But you see, i already finished it. I mean i won't work on it anymore, beacuse it was quite enough for my customer...

about hood "bump"(actually it's not a bump ;) ) i have it right there where it must be. See the pics in the beginning of the thread.

well, i can put reacro even in VW beetle. It doesn't matter which version it would be, it just must fit, n that's all or i'm wrong? :)

About rimms:

btw, can anybody suggest me some tuning tips on rimm material, i mean i need to do smth like this:
http://www.tirerack.com/wheels/Disp...ht+Silver+Paint (http://www.tirerack.com/wheels/DisplayWheel.jsp?wheelMake=Borbet&wheelModel=Type+VS&wheelFinish=Bright+Silver+Paint)

It's a Borbet VS type rimms. And i think it's not so high as you said.

Thanks again, and
Take care too! ;)

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