girl w.i.p

[Ducklator]

I think, if her hair is moving, the vegetation and the water would be on moving too, isn't?:hmm:

Her skin looks like dead flesh... :argh:

take it up man:thumbsup:

[magnetos]

thanks for your comments Ducklator i'll change the skin tone but first i wanna make sue the proportions and perspective is ok, i know there is something odd with the girl just cant figure out it yet but i'm working on it :)

[nebezial]

when using textures, never do it like, select and texturiser, cause it will always look crappy. u want o use it on a brusha nd the dodge tool sometimes with scattering on. also that will allow u to switch types and sizes of textures thus acchieving beleivable and non uniform texturing

[magnetos]

thanks for the tip neb :)
its hard to find the right brushes for the right texture
i wish there was a random rock texture ,
well i'll keep working on it

[magnetos]

small update :)

[PerfectBlue]

I would suggest drawing all of the elements by hand. "leaf" and "grass" brushes always pop out as obvious. And yea, drawing each and ever blade of grass seems like a lot of work, but the end result will be far superior to any tricks photoshop can dish out. ;)

Also want to add your model is not in a comfortable position. She looks like a pinup or tattoo. But not a girl sitting by the water. She needs to be nested in the grass, both her rear and her hands/feet. She doesn't look comfortable at the moment, and i believe you are going for a relaxing feel. Try sitting like her to see what i mean. :bounce:

[BigFox]

She looks really short. This may be what you are after - if not you can fix this by making her head smaller. She looks like she might fall forward and some of the stiffness mentioned in the other post may be due the fact that her arm is very stiff. no bend at all.

I hope this helps.

[magnetos]

thanks for the comments people
i'll try to make her a bit more relaxing and a shrink the head a bit :)

lord blue you re right i should draw it all by hand but is not that easy when you have to do it all by mouse :-/ I'll try though

till next time :)

[magnetos]

more updates :)
i eliminate the relaxed girl ,dint make much sense anyways

[magnetos]

update : added a small boat, and worked on the water
comments are welcome

[magnetos]

more updates, i'm sick and tired of fairies :P

[StylusMonkey]

hahahahahaha, i like where you've taken this one, I hate everything that is good and cute and nice too. DEATH TO ALL THAT CUDDLY AND GOOD STUFF!

[Nerd_Pack]

Lookin' good to me! My only crit so far, I think the detail of the grass (which is excellent by the way) doesn't really match the rest of the picture, it's really detailed but the rest of the picture is more painterly. I think it would help to match styles, either way you want to go is cool with me!

Nice job so far, keep it up!

[magnetos]

Nerd_Pack do you mean the texture on the ground on the left or the strings on the bottom right? if its the texture on the ground on the left its because i used too much clone texture tool , then i flatten the layer now its kind hard too fix it umm but i'll try

magic man muahhhahahaha yes dead to all that is cutiness :twisted:

[teal-k]

ok guys its me magnetos but since for some mistycal reason i can no longer post with my ol nick i had to register a new one .... oh well :)

another small update hope you like it

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