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somlor
02-19-2002, 11:11 AM
I would really love some constructive feedback on this head.

I'm not exactly sure where I am going with this. The ears need lots of work and mostly I would like to make him more stylized and less ... just strange. :)

http://www.neteze.com/bomlors/forum/stevenquad_th.jpg

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Thanks!
Sean
somlor
02-20-2002, 06:43 AM
I worked on him some more today. What do you think?

http://www.neteze.com/bomlors/forum/stevenflat_th.jpg
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Oh, I have to update the texture maps since I moved his nose down. This is just a flat render.

SOMLOR
Gilgamesh
02-20-2002, 08:52 AM
I dunno man, looks pretty good to me.
xynaria
02-20-2002, 03:26 PM
The basics are there, but the eyes and ears in particular need a lot more work. Eyes are too high and too wide. Think of the sockets they would go in. In profile it all looks a bit straight up and down at the front. If you aren't doing this from reference, go out on the street and stare at people discreeetly and it will start to fall into place. :)
chrislomaka
02-20-2002, 05:14 PM
looks pretty good. the main thing that bothers me is that it looks like the skin is pinched a bit too much on the outside edge of the eye.
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