Futuristic SCIFI CIA Detective Girl (NEED FEEDBACK) Thanks

[jkozniewski]

Hi :) !

The first major crit from me -
look @ her hair, they seems to be blown of the girls' head...
Try to imagine the curve of the top of her head and you'll see what I mean...

Also the shading of her chest should be inverted...

I like the ambient light on her right (form my point of view) arm...

Regards.

[Nerd_Pack]

Looking pretty good as a start, my only crit so far is that her upper body looks too small for her lower body, although individual part proportions seem good the upper body needs to be a bit bigger overall.

Good start and keep going!

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