PA Challenge - Character - mastering3d

[fellah]

some crits:
the forearms look kinda weird, try to thicken them some and take away the square'ish look.
what's that in his butt on the backViewRender? :)
some details on the belt would be nice to.

well I ain't gonna say to much as it isn't finished. overall, really great guy and I'm really looking forward to the updates, and maybe a GI render? :)

[mastering3d]

Ok sorry for any dely in getting back ,And slow update but been sick with flu..

Ok here is an up date that I did over the last two days..I hope you like it better now,The colors are just max 4 shaders .
Still a lot more to do I no but I think that I will run out off time before the end off this.But I am going to give it ago and see what I do before that..

http://www.nmba18878.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/front.jpg
http://www.nmba18878.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/back.jpg
http://www.nmba18878.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/wire frame front.jpg
http://www.nmba18878.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/wire frame back.jpg

[pinion3d]

looks pretty cool so far, My main suggestion would be to randomize the edges of the rolled up "bed" on his backside (it looks too perfectly rolled). Also, your pant legs and arms are wrinkled, but the torso and pelvis region aren't, fixing that would probably help also. Theres still a whole week to work so you'll be good on catch-up time

[mastering3d]

Thanks for the crit..I will have to look in to that today and see what I come up with..And I will repost some more work.I want to get started soon on the weapon too I hope any way..
Thank a again..

[mastering3d]

OK its getting to the end. I wise that I add more time to put in to this and get it done for this challenge ,But I can not see that,I have to much modeling to do for work.So here is an up date so far.New Boots and some creasing around the arms at the top near the shoulders and other places.And a rifle but no straps as yet and it still is not 100% done,Plus straps around the arms and leg but no creasing around the straps as yet..Still if I dont get it done before the end it's been fun any how and I love doing it.And I have loved looking at your art work great stuff on this great forum.


http://www.nmba18878.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/gun.jpg
http://www.nmba18878.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/front1.jpg
http://www.nmba18878.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/back1.jpg

[DarkSy]

Hi, nice model you got there. I noticed your gun is smooth and am just wondering did you do it in mesh then meshSmooth or did you do it in NURBS?

[mastering3d]

Thanks glad that you like my work,Nice to see that some one does.

Tha rifle is made just from polys in max 4,Started out with a box and worked on from there useing meshtools could never work with out that it is a great time saver.The main body is all one part as you can see from the image it all so as the other bits too.And just set it up to render out to meshsmooth set to 1 on all the parts..Here a bit off an up date not to sure about the eye bit if it is right really have to look in to it as the rifle that I am modeling from dont have sights on it.

http://www.nmba18878.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/gunwire.jpg

[schmu_20mol]

nice...i like it;)

ain't this a double barelled rifle? then it needs 2 triggers...normally one on the left and one on the right, they're bit smaller than normals and they're apart from another

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like that ;)

[Cgkoko]

It looks like an enlonged g3 to me!NICE MODEL:)

[PedramK]

Great work.
the model looks pretty cool, though those arnt the final textures are they? way too clean;)

[DarkSy]

Wow, thanx for the mesh post for the guns. Yea, I tried to do my gun with all mesh-edit(instead of polygon edit). Thatz whyI have to put a blur on it. HaHa. All those trangles were too much to turn. Your gun helped me alot on learning how to fix the curves and details (like the two indent in the back of the gun) Once again thanx for the post!

Good luck almost to the finish line!! =)

[Agent D]

Looks really good. I love the rifle... EXCEPT... It's better than the guns I've I've been making recently. Jerk. ;)
It does remind me of a G3A3, or something similar. Got many a kill with those in Rogue Spear.
Can't wait to see the final version!

[mastering3d]

@schmu_20mol>>ain't this a double barrelled rifle?

Know it’s a single barrelled rifle…And thanks glade that you like it.

@Cgkoko>>

Thank you.

@PedramK>>though those arnt the final textures are they?

Know just the shaders in max just to give me some idea’s off how I want them to end up.

@DarkSy>>

Your very well come glade that it help you out. If you are still stuck let me no and I will give you a gun that I made some time ago.

@Agent D>>It does remind me of a G3A3?

That’s what it is a G3A3.You no your gun’s.

Thanks you guy’s.

It don’t look there will time to get all that texturing and stuff done before the end. But I will post more before then.

[DarkSy]

If that isen't too much trouble than please. =) Would be great help.. since I suck at trying to keep all the squares, square. Can you please send the max file to mailto://darksy@shaw.ca Thanx!

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