Locked Door , Broken Wall

[alberto86]

Yeah, good start Monster_General!:thumbsup: but you should add some other object on the scene... i think about some bottle, with one or two crashed, or a dustbin with some trashed object on the sides...

[LouisCho]

good mind good start. I just want to say that bricks never crack like that. It's can be ok for concrete but not for bircks. You should check your composition because it's a little boring. don't center the door and add some elements on or front the wall like trash, pipe or something like that. Finnaly, it's a little bit wired to see wood panels bolted in a bricks wall.

Anyway I like the idea and you're on the good way, keep going

[LouisCho]

Oh and the spotlight is not the better choise. It's like that somebody align the spot and wacht the scene but the general scene is desert. I suggest you to put a street light who make the principal light source on the scene

[Monster_General]

Thanks a lot for yours's comments ^^ I will try to add more things , ok ^^

[maurice2]

- Fix the bricks' tiling
- Make the spotlight softer - volume shadows maybe?
- Don't placec the point of focus in the middle - rule of thirds
- The foreground texture is too large, increase UVW scale

I hope that helps

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